
Perfect Awakening
by Old Student
About This Novel
When life grows wildly without restraint, a harvesting blade is needed. "Some people think I am evil, then how naive they must be." - Zhao Shanhe
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Official(1707)Scraped 22d ago
Very pretty
Nowadays, novels are all the same. They either get cuckolded or they bully poor teenagers. They are either school belles or police belles. They either offend the children of rich families or their girlfriends have money and power. From time to time, a hero comes to save the beauty. Otherwise, the whole world is the enemy of the protagonist. Every day, he is either taking revenge or on the road to revenge. This book is very good, but it is too thin. I need to gain weight before continuing. Is there any friend who recommends some similar books? The protagonist does not want the mother-in-law and is decisive in killing.
The author insists on writing
I like the book "The King" very much. You said that because of poor grades and too little income, you could not support yourself, so you had to become a eunuch. Well, I will keep writing this book. When I get rich, I will reward you every day. This book is great. I hope the theme and world view are deeper and broader, and. . Want to see the harem?
Give some suggestions to the author
The first point is that I feel that the protagonist relies too much on the villain's value. Doing this will make him a reckless man. It can give the protagonist a chance at Wuhan University and let him break through to five stars as soon as possible. The second point is that the protagonist's fighting method is too simple. When facing strong enemies, he uses eight gates + normal attacks + resurrection, which makes stick techniques and boxing techniques have no sense of existence. At least let's make a qualitative change in stick techniques. Use resurrection and eight gates as trump cards to diversify the protagonist's combat. Try to increase the protagonist's star rating. Don't always think about such cool operations as leapfrogging enemies. Don't they have trump cards? The third point, regarding Mu Tingting, you can wait until she reaches 6 stars and use her strong mental power to automatically dispel the protagonist's illusion. Then she will recall the good times with the protagonist in the past. It's okay. She will also think of the protagonist being an undercover agent. Then Lei Wanma will say, he is doing it for your own good. A cute heroine instead of a vase, ahem, manually funny The fourth point is, after the protagonist reaches 6 stars, give him a magical power, which is the embodiment of energy. He can use his vitality to defend himself, or attach it to weapons to attack. Although this is an 8-star method, magical powers are also acceptable. After the protagonist reaches 8 stars, directly open the Gundam and hit the demon clan with a stick. For details, you can refer to Susanoo in Naruto. Wouldn't it be cool? The above four points are my personal opinions. I hope the author will adopt them.
Regarding malicious negative reviews...
Not just old students... Almost any book... Basically... If it is recommended... There will be malicious negative comments from trolls... A group of people with no fan value... Reading time of 0... Real trolls who haven't read a page... Come and give one star... Everyone has different interests and hobbies... So we don't force everyone to like it... We just ask the trolls and trolls to give us a piece of pure land... Our friends, don't pay attention to those malicious negative reviews... To be a true fan with quality... As for those who ask questions seriously and read the book seriously but leave negative reviews... We will seriously consider this... If some cuties are impulsive because they want to protect their old lives... Then let me apologize to you on their behalf... What's more... We are true fans... Not trolls... Thank you!
Zhao Shanhe?
Isn't Zhao Shanhe the pheasant in Young and Dangerous?
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Official(1707)Scraped 22d ago
Very pretty
Nowadays, novels are all the same. They either get cuckolded or they bully poor teenagers. They are either school belles or police belles. They either offend the children of rich families or their girlfriends have money and power. From time to time, a hero comes to save the beauty. Otherwise, the whole world is the enemy of the protagonist. Every day, he is either taking revenge or on the road to revenge. This book is very good, but it is too thin. I need to gain weight before continuing. Is there any friend who recommends some similar books? The protagonist does not want the mother-in-law and is decisive in killing.
The author insists on writing
I like the book "The King" very much. You said that because of poor grades and too little income, you could not support yourself, so you had to become a eunuch. Well, I will keep writing this book. When I get rich, I will reward you every day. This book is great. I hope the theme and world view are deeper and broader, and. . Want to see the harem?
Give some suggestions to the author
The first point is that I feel that the protagonist relies too much on the villain's value. Doing this will make him a reckless man. It can give the protagonist a chance at Wuhan University and let him break through to five stars as soon as possible. The second point is that the protagonist's fighting method is too simple. When facing strong enemies, he uses eight gates + normal attacks + resurrection, which makes stick techniques and boxing techniques have no sense of existence. At least let's make a qualitative change in stick techniques. Use resurrection and eight gates as trump cards to diversify the protagonist's combat. Try to increase the protagonist's star rating. Don't always think about such cool operations as leapfrogging enemies. Don't they have trump cards? The third point, regarding Mu Tingting, you can wait until she reaches 6 stars and use her strong mental power to automatically dispel the protagonist's illusion. Then she will recall the good times with the protagonist in the past. It's okay. She will also think of the protagonist being an undercover agent. Then Lei Wanma will say, he is doing it for your own good. A cute heroine instead of a vase, ahem, manually funny The fourth point is, after the protagonist reaches 6 stars, give him a magical power, which is the embodiment of energy. He can use his vitality to defend himself, or attach it to weapons to attack. Although this is an 8-star method, magical powers are also acceptable. After the protagonist reaches 8 stars, directly open the Gundam and hit the demon clan with a stick. For details, you can refer to Susanoo in Naruto. Wouldn't it be cool? The above four points are my personal opinions. I hope the author will adopt them.
Regarding malicious negative reviews...
Not just old students... Almost any book... Basically... If it is recommended... There will be malicious negative comments from trolls... A group of people with no fan value... Reading time of 0... Real trolls who haven't read a page... Come and give one star... Everyone has different interests and hobbies... So we don't force everyone to like it... We just ask the trolls and trolls to give us a piece of pure land... Our friends, don't pay attention to those malicious negative reviews... To be a true fan with quality... As for those who ask questions seriously and read the book seriously but leave negative reviews... We will seriously consider this... If some cuties are impulsive because they want to protect their old lives... Then let me apologize to you on their behalf... What's more... We are true fans... Not trolls... Thank you!
Zhao Shanhe?
Isn't Zhao Shanhe the pheasant in Young and Dangerous?

















