One Piece Role Playing

This book suffers from many common problems of fan authors, such as: the plot is out of control, the protagonist's understanding is too high, and the article does not explain why his understanding is the highest (you said he has a low understanding? Well, he has been in the Navy for hundreds of years, and you can understand things when you are nearly three years old. Even if you have the original work, you can't refer to it!) There are too many plots that break out at a young age. I'm too young to be in elementary school and I'm still showing off. But what I really appreciate about the author is that he went to The Legend of the Condor Heroes, which didn't have any pick-ups (it's great, I had the same feeling when watching The Legend of the Condor Heroes, Huang Rong, etc., Was ravaged again, it's great, I finally saw a scene where Huang Rong was not gentle, ahhhhh), as for the confusing plot line mentioned above,,,, although the time was not revealed, Pirates fans are all I know that at that time, Garp was very young and Long was still a kid, but the author was quite creative. In fact, I am looking forward to the author's next book, because the author is grasping a certain degree in this book, but sometimes the degree is not grasped well. Another thing that made me very uncomfortable was probably because the author didn't want to see the harem because many people didn't want to see it. I always felt like entering the harem and was beaten into the cold palace. The harem was beaten into the cold palace. It's so embarrassing, really. And what makes me feel very uncomfortable is the title. The title is a system compared to the picture, which is okay, but what I am most embarrassed about is that he is the Pirate King, but your most attractive thing is actually the red pupil,,,,, what? Am I not watching One Piece? What does it have to do with Zhan Crimson Eyes? How to name the title like this: The Queen is in the Pirates,,,,, xxx is in the Pirates,,, so and so is in the Pirates, I can accept it, and I would like to give some advice to the author, don't lower other people's IQ in order to write the protagonist. The supporting role is also a crucial step, just like Zan Crimson Eyes, the popularity of the heroine will never be higher than the Queen, just like Sasuke and Naruto. Or maybe the protagonist of the book One Piece is Luffy, but without a few other people, One Piece, this comic would not have become a god. Maybe Luffy died in the first step. After all, she survived with the help of Suotong at that time. Who knows if Hawkeye will give him a knife?

Should the girl from Zhan Crimson Eyes be brought back to the pirate world? The author's original intention was to bring it back to enrich the strength of the protagonist's camp, especially when Esdeath can face off against Aokiji, which I think is a very good plot. As for the harem problem that many readers have mentioned, the author is not very good at writing about this aspect. Many people do not want a harem. However, according to the current pace of novels, it is a bit impossible to have a single female protagonist, and the author cannot take it back. However, he can control the number of female protagonists, minimize brainless harem plots, and focus on combat conflicts. The authors can tell what kind of opinions they have, and the author will arrange the next plot. The world of Chitong is about to end, so everyone can speak freely.

Is there a female protagonist? If not, discard it. If there are, 5 recommendation votes per day.

The front part looks good, but the back part is rubbish. The author directly deleted more than half of the protagonist's strength. He was only a lieutenant general in strength. He directly deleted so many flaws. The rewards and punishments are not proportional. We don't ask you to write about Long Aotian, but you just deleted half of the strength and rebuilt it. Here comes another article. It's a rip-off! Abandon the book decisively! ! !

Never want a harem

The protagonist wants to be a pirate at first, then a navy, and finally a pirate or a navy?

Dear author, please update!

Who can type swastika and eat my shit?

My language expression skills are not very good, but I just want to say one word, beautiful

Please add more!