
Under One Person: Double Door, Behind the Door is Zhu Xian
About This Novel
[Under One Person, Zhu Xian, Double Penetration] Zhang Xiaofan is still Zhang Xiaofan, but he is a unique Zhang Xiaofan... Zhang Xiaofan's character is more confident and decisive... There is a door in his mind, and he can come to the other side of the door every once in a while. On one side of the door is the world under one person (modern times), and on the other side is the world of Zhuxian, Qingyun Gate, and Dazhu Peak! The heroines of Zhu Xian include Tian Ling'er, Xiaobai... Etc. (Lu Xueqi, Baguio, are still under consideration, and will be revised based on readers' thoughts. They may not be one of the heroines). The heroine under one person is Xia He (Xia He who is earlier in the timeline)
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It's Xia He again, with no desire at all. Basically, nine out of ten fan books written by one person want Xia He. I can't figure it out, society has become like this now, everyone wants to go 🌿Biaozi
Isn't there a single female protagonist in the introduction? Is the author going to add a personality to the protagonist? Or a dedicated character? Could it be that Xia He falls in love with the male protagonist, the male protagonist likes the young senior sister, Xia He stalks her, and the male protagonist is forced to go rogue to accept Xia He? The author gives me an accurate answer. If so, I will give up. The main reason is that it is too vulgar and not interesting. Suggestion: Don't create a perfect character for the protagonist. The sense of immersion is too poor and it will fall apart quickly. When writing about a harem, don't focus on a character who is both cool and established. The character of a scumbag man (lecherous) is actually quite good, and he has a lusty and sexual nature. Otherwise, focus on a single female protagonist.
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I got the impression that the author has never read the manga under One Person, or even the anime
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Is this a stupid story? In every chapter, the main character's name appears no less than 20 times. Damn it.
I am so capable that I can explain everything and repeat everything.
Do you know the author? I don't want to read your comment after reading it. Lu Xueqi and the others don't want Xia He. You'd better change your comment.
Looks quite awkward
First perspective, second perspective, third perspective, fourth perspective
The original author of "Under One Person" and "Zhu Xian" has not watched it at all. It is either a fan or a TV series. There is too much nonsense and a lot of repetitive words. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's uncomfortable to watch.
I can't find anything interesting to watch. The idea is good but the writing is terrible.
There are problems in several places.
There's too much emphasis, and it doesn't feel like I'm reading a novel. You don't need to write in too much detail in some places, and the use of mind-popping will make it appear that the protagonist does one thing before and another, and the appreciative look in the woman's eyes is how it was written many years ago. There are too many explanations, and it makes me feel tired just watching it.
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Official(21)Scraped 20d ago
Read the book review
It's Xia He again, with no desire at all. Basically, nine out of ten fan books written by one person want Xia He. I can't figure it out, society has become like this now, everyone wants to go 🌿Biaozi
Isn't there a single female protagonist in the introduction? Is the author going to add a personality to the protagonist? Or a dedicated character? Could it be that Xia He falls in love with the male protagonist, the male protagonist likes the young senior sister, Xia He stalks her, and the male protagonist is forced to go rogue to accept Xia He? The author gives me an accurate answer. If so, I will give up. The main reason is that it is too vulgar and not interesting. Suggestion: Don't create a perfect character for the protagonist. The sense of immersion is too poor and it will fall apart quickly. When writing about a harem, don't focus on a character who is both cool and established. The character of a scumbag man (lecherous) is actually quite good, and he has a lusty and sexual nature. Otherwise, focus on a single female protagonist.
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I got the impression that the author has never read the manga under One Person, or even the anime
ill
Is this a stupid story? In every chapter, the main character's name appears no less than 20 times. Damn it.
I am so capable that I can explain everything and repeat everything.
Do you know the author? I don't want to read your comment after reading it. Lu Xueqi and the others don't want Xia He. You'd better change your comment.
Looks quite awkward
First perspective, second perspective, third perspective, fourth perspective
The original author of "Under One Person" and "Zhu Xian" has not watched it at all. It is either a fan or a TV series. There is too much nonsense and a lot of repetitive words. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's uncomfortable to watch.
I can't find anything interesting to watch. The idea is good but the writing is terrible.
There are problems in several places.
There's too much emphasis, and it doesn't feel like I'm reading a novel. You don't need to write in too much detail in some places, and the use of mind-popping will make it appear that the protagonist does one thing before and another, and the appreciative look in the woman's eyes is how it was written many years ago. There are too many explanations, and it makes me feel tired just watching it.









