The Second Dimension is at the End of the World

Well, after thinking about it for a long time, I decided to give it a mid-range score. I am not a troll, nor am I the kind of guy who throws out negative reviews. I have my own reasons for giving this score. Of course, some book friends may not agree, but the following are my personal opinions. First of all, the character design. The character design collapsed several times in the middle. I am serious. I started as a Buddhist nerd. , After complaining about the villains and the bloated people who want to save the world..., And then slapped in the face at the speed of light, with a strong sense of justice, what kind of bastard returned to the beautiful future of mankind, and what about revenge. To be honest, I was a little confused after reading that part, but the writing is good, and it has a passive skill. What about the rational and independent thing? Why do I see so many direct emotional outbursts, and then my sense of justice starts to explode. This one is too bad, and that one obviously doesn't matter, but I still have to save it with all my strength... Have you forgotten something about the protagonist? You mainly need to upgrade to kill the boss, not the construction flow. Do you still want to survive in the entire camp for a few years (it turns out that the camp does nothing but hold you back) (used), and then Chapter 77. To be honest, when I first saw it, I was confused and a little angry, but after seeing the group leader's explanation, I looked forward to the subsequent performance (even so, the short-term impression still dropped a lot), especially when a reader was arguing with the author, a guy at the bottom made a lot of unfriendly remarks Well, I admit that it is a bit wrong for people to give negative reviews directly, but think about it, you have liked something for so many years, but many people outside do not recognize you and point fingers at you, and then suddenly there is a mole in your alliance. How does that feel? Although the author is not the author, I can understand the reader's feelings, and the author has not explained it when he posted the review. Okay, my speech ends here. I feel like I haven't said anything too extreme, and the rating is not particularly excessive. Well, you can point out my shortcomings. Of course, the author can also see if the shortcomings I mentioned are consistent with yours. You can discuss and discuss. If you are stupid, please turn left. Thank you, that's it.

It's too cheesy, but I like it. Today's recommendation vote is gone, please vote again tomorrow

This book contains a lot of fictitious characters. Warning! Crazy magic modification warning! If you don't understand the setting of the moon, please don't use this book as a reference. If you know the setting of the moon, please don't get entangled in the setting of this book. Character attributes are displayed in two ways ABCDE respectively represents levels. Each level increase will greatly increase the value represented by the data. For example, below E level, each attribute may (note, it is possible here, the specific situation is arbitrary, it is not the most critical anyway) represents one-tenth of the attributes of ordinary people. Then each point below D level and above E level may represent one-fifth or more of the average person. 50 Is E 150 is D 300 is C 500 is B 1000 is A All A and above are EX The attributes of ordinary people are as follows: Strength: 10 Durability: 10 Agility: 10 Magic: 0 Lucky: C Awakening: None Second awakening: none Third awakening: none Awakening is a unique power of human beings, derived from the will of all humans in the world - Alaya's resistance to the "World Devourer" and the will of the earth - Gaia's gift (reasonable cheating) Humans can awaken their abilities through self-breakthrough (plot cheating) Finally, for the above content, the surface is borrowed from Xing Yue, and other settings are all made up at random. Please do not calculate carefully. Everything shall be based on the content of the novel. I emphasize again that this book contains a lot of secondary settings. It is recommended that people who don't understand Moon World should not use the settings here to read Fate, otherwise you will go crazy. Friends who have watched the Fate series of animations and played FGO should not take it too seriously. After all, the three-dimensional attributes have not played a decisive role from the beginning to the end, and they have only been slightly suppressed. Strictly speaking, this book belongs to the new world that I picked up after posting a post on the forum (The Story of the Traveler's Old Sword) when I was too busy. In other words, the shape of this world has been completely changed by the former protagonist. Finally, I would like to emphasize that this book is filled with a large number of secondary settings and magic modifications. Please do not take any setting issues seriously.

What's the point of writing a book of this type and writing about a protagonist from a black race? All heroic spirits except Chinese ones are discriminated against, okay dear? If you hate those who are aggressive or have bad character, we can accept it, but how can you discriminate against nationality? The author should understand that he What type of online articles do you write? The audience is not Yuechu? How many black people are there in areas like Yuechu? Usually I am despised by others on the Internet for reading Japanese stuff. I read fan fiction and I am disgusted? Do you write it with your brains? This kind of fan writes about politics. The honest author doesn't want to be disgusting. Regional discrimination is enough. You can write that the protagonist is patriotic and doesn't have much favorable impressions of foreigners, but he is not very discriminatory. What kind of trouble is going to be caused by a wave of blackmail? Then what should you write about and the cp of foreign heroes? Foreign heroes are all workers. Isn't it bad to be a person (laughs) You also have Ryogi, who is also Japanese, and the real history of the self-created character does not have this person, why don't you discriminate? Okita, Oda, etc., Will you stop writing a bunch of Japanese heroes? Is your CV still Japanese? No one can read Japanese drama fan fiction and see this disgusting concept. Normally, there is no way to avoid it when reading popular fiction, so I just abandon the book without saying anything. What kind of trouble are you going to make with this fan fiction? It's better to just write a post-apocalyptic story. Anyway, you, the heroic spirit, would write it as if it were a different character, the tool-man heroic spirit.

Please keep it up, come on, Ollie!

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