Tokyo: How Come All the Objects of Salvation in Life Have Fallen?
by Nympho C
About This Novel
After resurrecting his life, Amamiya Hao experienced what it means to be poor and have only money left. I thought my beautiful life would begin in Tokyo, but unexpectedly I contracted an incurable terminal disease at the beginning. However, the belated arrival of the [Life Salvation System] gave him new hope. I thought I was redeeming my own life, but I didn't expect it was to redeem other people's lives. The ultimate reward of the system is the antidote to cure the terminal disease. Just when Amamiya Hao thought everything was going for the better, something seemed wrong. "Hey, Amamiya-kun, do you want to be with me forever?" "I wish you could, but Emi, can you put down the knife first?"
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Official(3)Scraped 3d ago
After reading a few chapters, I realized that the author is indeed a novice. Every author who dares to create something original (borrowing counts, as long as it is not exactly the same) deserves encouragement. However, as a novice author, I still suffer from the common novice problem. I wanted to write everything, and I wanted to write everything perfectly. The more I wrote, the more the plot became more complicated, and gradually the writing collapsed. I can understand this mentality. But, the more urgent things become, the more things go wrong. In today's society, people are impetuous, and Internet keyboard warriors are rampant, talking about trillions of dollars, and shutting up to penetrate the world. If you want people to calm down and watch the novel world you slowly build, first of all, you have to attract readers to become fans, follow you, and stabilize your fans. Only then will you have the conditions to slowly conceive of the plot and slowly lay down multiple foreshadowings. . . Having said so much, I actually mean the same thing. Your current writing method is too hazy. I read more than a dozen chapters at the beginning (many dialogues are boring and meaningless). The male protagonist, ex-girlfriend, system, and tasks (it is .12 At the beginning. What about the previous ones? Completed? No explanation? Will you explain it later? No one has the patience to run away, and it will be useless no matter how good the writing is later). It all depends on guessing and association. This is very tiring. Anyway, I'll run away first. Come on, author.
Show, is this name alluding to a certain classic show?
So far, there is nothing particularly outstanding, there are both good and bad, and it is even a little frustrating in the middle. There are also some criticisms, such as why he didn't just keep the life-saving medicine and add more like crazy, and he can't control his subordinates. The portrayal of Gong Jian is quite bad. . . I've watched more than half of it. It's new and good, but it's uncomfortable. There are too many disgusting characters. If I don't disgust the protagonist, I'll disgust the audience. This is a taboo! Come on
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Official(3)Scraped 3d ago
After reading a few chapters, I realized that the author is indeed a novice. Every author who dares to create something original (borrowing counts, as long as it is not exactly the same) deserves encouragement. However, as a novice author, I still suffer from the common novice problem. I wanted to write everything, and I wanted to write everything perfectly. The more I wrote, the more the plot became more complicated, and gradually the writing collapsed. I can understand this mentality. But, the more urgent things become, the more things go wrong. In today's society, people are impetuous, and Internet keyboard warriors are rampant, talking about trillions of dollars, and shutting up to penetrate the world. If you want people to calm down and watch the novel world you slowly build, first of all, you have to attract readers to become fans, follow you, and stabilize your fans. Only then will you have the conditions to slowly conceive of the plot and slowly lay down multiple foreshadowings. . . Having said so much, I actually mean the same thing. Your current writing method is too hazy. I read more than a dozen chapters at the beginning (many dialogues are boring and meaningless). The male protagonist, ex-girlfriend, system, and tasks (it is .12 At the beginning. What about the previous ones? Completed? No explanation? Will you explain it later? No one has the patience to run away, and it will be useless no matter how good the writing is later). It all depends on guessing and association. This is very tiring. Anyway, I'll run away first. Come on, author.
Show, is this name alluding to a certain classic show?
So far, there is nothing particularly outstanding, there are both good and bad, and it is even a little frustrating in the middle. There are also some criticisms, such as why he didn't just keep the life-saving medicine and add more like crazy, and he can't control his subordinates. The portrayal of Gong Jian is quite bad. . . I've watched more than half of it. It's new and good, but it's uncomfortable. There are too many disgusting characters. If I don't disgust the protagonist, I'll disgust the audience. This is a taboo! Come on
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