Another World Chat Room

If the protagonist says in the group that he has a notebook for each of them, what interesting thing will happen😷

There are two possibilities for Steve's strength. One is a weakling. The other one is the boss. For these situations where Steve loves architecture and has golden apples, it's definitely the boss. Because you can't survive in the early stage, there's no time for construction. Moreover, golden apples are not so good, and they are sold easily. But if it has strong combat power, I hope it's the kind of annoying villager that you can't see clearly unless you slow down. And Steve's world setting also has many possibilities. One is the kind where you can communicate with someone who is not alone. The other one is the one who can speak without anyone, and he is the only one in the world. I prefer the latter. And you can also set whether Steve feels the taste, or just the satiety level? Can you feel pain, or just health points? Anyway, I prefer the latter. After all, my first feeling about MC is loneliness. If you are not online, you will be bored to death. However, whether HIM exists or not is also a problem. I prefer existence. I hope his character is the kind that believes in the law of the jungle and doesn't care about anything. I hope the author can adopt it.

What advantages does the protagonist have now? After opening the other world VPN, the anime in the protagonist's world is almost undefended. The only advantage in the early stage has been lost, and the protagonist has no other specialties. From now on, he can only be reduced to an unknown person. Although there are now rules that group members cannot harm each other, which limits high force and internal strife to a certain extent, making intelligence occupy a relatively high position in the group, but the protagonist is not intellectual. So now the protagonist = soy sauce party

Even if others help solve the Witch Night, QB is set to be infinite and immortal. Sooner or later, other methods can be used to make Homura despair or make Madoka make a wish. Even if the concept of a big boss in some world kills QB, their universe will be exhausted and destroyed in the future.

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you Call you at the starting point Drop a note by the way

The story is quite good, and the character descriptions are full of soul, but obviously a dispensable protagonist does not suit my taste. In my opinion, even if it is dispensable, there is at least one thing that I can rely on, and the existence of the protagonist feels like he is just a passerby with many roles, so what do you want to show us? The protagonist's growth? But obviously I didn't see it. It was more of a group of flesh-and-blood characters occupying the scenes, and the protagonist's scenes were getting less and less. If the protagonist had no meaning for his existence, then I think it is completely possible to eliminate all his scenes. What is the use of the protagonist other than to buy a lot of foreshadowing in the real world and say that the real world is awesome? Although I don't know what the direction of the book will be in the future, if it continues at this pace, it will probably be about how awesome the real world is. But obviously I am tired of reading this. If it is connected with another world and still connected with reality, there is no doubt that most novels will be failures. After all, the rhythm of reality is really not comfortable. Advice, if daily writing embodies a kind of relaxation, then if you join any state agency, it will be an invisible shackles, imprisoning the original flavor, clearly thinking clearly, and you have to crawl into this cage intentionally. What is imprisoned is your own soul. Since you are letting yourself go and relax, why do you have to let the country suppress you? Novel that is ranked at any national level is a failure, because no matter what the ending is, you will only praise your own country and belittle other countries, and even write the novel into the political arena for this reason. No matter how powerful the protagonist is in the future, there will always be various reasons for the protagonist to have to work for this country. Even to the extent that it can destroy the galaxy, you cannot write that the protagonist secretly controls the entire earth, regardless of good or evil. Yes, all novels involving real countries are failures. This is a kind of ideological cage. This is because of this cage, so few people transcend the greater self. Take this novel as an example, there are 99 novels out of 100 that are trapped in this kind of cage, and this novel is the 99. (To me) Maybe this novel was quite novel at the beginning. Even among the 99 novels, it really attracted me. But now it doesn't have much appeal. Instead, I feel like Aizen is about to turn into a pig's trotter. If you go to reality to reveal those foreshadowings and come back with a big twist, then I'm sorry, if your foreshadowing is to go to reality to take over, then I probably don't want to expect any new routines anymore. But in fact, I also like this kind of novel. In the early stage, it is actually quite attractive, but in the later stage, it is really not. What is the appeal? A novel that even the country cannot express and bypass. Sorry, it is difficult for this novel to grow. If the author sees it, I hope the author will not have to argue with me. This time it is a personal opinion, but if you want to find inspiration in this regard, then I recommend you to read a few similar novels (Trafford Buyers Club) (Schilling Empire) (Spare Tire Alliance) (Abnormal Biological Agency) and so on.

I hope the author can write better and better. Of course, it would be better if it could be updated more.

Let's go and make an appointment to see San San. . .

The author simply said: "Let's talk for a while" and the result was more than a year later.

Author, I only ask for one thing, don't let the black cat make the same mistake again🌝👌