Siheyuan: Return to the 1950s

In fact, the opening setting is quite good, but the writing is really a bit uncomfortable to watch. The character dialogue is written like shit. Isn't it a conversation where you say something and I say something? You say one sentence when writing this, and then write a bunch of explanations or inner thoughts that you don't know, just to talk to you and others. You say (hello), but he doesn't answer you, and thinks in his heart, (why does this person say hello to you? Is there some purpose? He is not a good person at first glance) Isn't it uncomfortable to read the novel like this?

I find that those who write about the Siheyuan nowadays are all extreme exaggerations. They have to pull hundreds of pictures to explain things that can be explained clearly in one sentence. I think at that time, ordinary people would not provoke the families of the martyrs. Let's see what those who write about the Siheyuan do not dare to offend, the families of the martyrs, technical backbones, and officials. , They all messed with each other. The real courtyard is the Jia family, Xu Damao's family, He Yuzhu's family, the first, second, and third uncle's families. I think the people who survived in that era were hundreds of people who were thoughtful, martyrs, technical backbones, and officials. They would not mess with it.

Others are trying to hold you back to death, but you still talk about worldliness, others are scheming against you, and you still don't want to get things done. There are so many things going wrong every day, and you keep arguing.

At first it looked okay, still in the realm of human beings, but later on I don't know if I was rushing ahead of schedule and was almost becoming an inhuman state. This is a period novel, not a fairy tale, and there is no sense of immersion at all, so I gave up.

Although this article is okay, I just want to find a job and go to a restaurant. There are so many shortcomings. You can talk about family traditions, but you have to talk about the cuisine. I know a little bit of all the cuisines.

Just looking for a job and trying out a dish, there are about ten chapters filled with nonsense, and the title smells like a slap in the face to a fantasy cultivator😐

The writing is actually pretty good, but just to make money, the word count is at the master level. Everything needs to be explained in detail, and even a small matter can be described in three to five chapters.

Can Shibie's millions and millions of money be clearly stated?

I just watched the beginning, so I can't make any comments. One thing is that the majority of violent doujin protagonists have a common problem. No matter how red their background is and how disgusting they are bullied, they will never lean into the organization, believe in the organization, and rely on the organization.

The writing is quite good but there are some minor flaws. One is that the plot is too slow and only a few hundred chapters have passed in less than a year. The other is the problem of the female protagonist. I don't know if it's a multi-girl or a single girl. If it's a single girl, why do you write that so many women have thoughts about the male protagonist and describe it in such detail? Is this because the word count is too high? If it's a multi-girl movie, you still push Lou, who has a crush on you, to Xu.