
Siheyuan: I Am Trying to Survive in the Red Era
by Stay Together In The Year Of The Ox
About This Novel
A man born in the 1980s came to the 1950s in a dream, seeking survival and development in this prosperous era. Later, he discovered that he seemed to have entered a TV series to see how he lived happily in the hard times.
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Official(72)Scraped 2mo ago
Poison spots too often
In the 1950s, you told a few female students that you wanted to see everywhere and travel all over the country... My God, in the 1950s, many places in China were not peaceful. Projectionists had to carry guns when they went to the countryside to show movies. You still want to run around... You still have thousands of pounds of prey, so you changed to a temporary worker in the canteen... It's really funny to death🤣🤣🤣In order to forcefully integrate into the plot of the Siheyuan, do you have to be mentally retarded? ? ? Isn't it okay to learn electrician skills in your hometown and then go to the city to find a job? ? ? Does every space traveler really have to do shopping? ? ?
Write after understanding that era
Many people have a misunderstanding that hunting is theirs. In that era, it was impossible for those things to be collectively owned. If you wanted to sell them, you had to sell them collectively and sell them yourself, which is called speculation. What is a planned economy? Not only do you need votes to buy things, you also need votes to sell things. Everyone wants to go back in time, have space for plug-ins, and resell something to make a profit. You really don't know how to write the word "death".
Overall OK
Overall, it's okay, but it's too bland, and the protagonist's role is too small, less than half of it.
Now that you can buy a job, why don't you buy it for your family members, but for outsiders?
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Your cousin is having a bit of a drama
Anyway, my cousin should take care of me. But your eldest brother.
The first part was pretty good, but in the middle and later stages it got messed up. It felt like I was trying to make up the word count, or like I had no inspiration. This has become a common problem when writing novels now!
From the perspective of a bystander, the protagonist is not very involved
The entire novel is basically written from the perspective of a bystander. There is no excessive involvement in the affairs of the courtyard. It can be said that there is no hostility... The author borrowed several things from the book, including the scene where Yi Zhonghai and Jia Dongxu signed the pension agreement. I forgot which novel he borrowed from. There must be some, and the scene where Jia Dongxu died is also the scene. The protagonist has space, and the person he draws from is Tie Cui Dayou, who traded meat (wild boar) for a job in a steel rolling mill. However, the protagonist does not seek advancement and has no reasonable reason to spend money. The protagonist is really good at spending money, which is a big failure... The author started writing in 1957, and it basically ended after Jia Dongxu's death. It can be said that the plot of the TV series has no plot at all. The ending is too hasty. Did the deaf old lady die in space? Too rough If you don't want to read the protagonist's quarrel with heaven and earth, you can read the Siheyuan novel. It's bland.
I don't understand whether you are writing a group portrait or the protagonist? Why did the protagonist become invisible right after writing this? Occasionally, it comes out to make a splash. You open a book, you enter a protagonist, and you revolve around him. As a result, you hide the protagonist directly as you write, and then you pull him back to take a look at another protagonist, and then hide him again. From the moment he arrives at the grain depot, he really hides him directly after two or three pictures. Then he goes to the purchasing department. Who cares about your little shit in the courtyard? Have you never seen Siheyuan? I've seen it all, you can write it down in your mind. The problem is that the protagonist has been hidden by you again and again. Keeping a low profile is your way of keeping a low profile. It turns out that you keep a low profile in front of readers. You wrote more than 170 photos. I thought you were writing a group portrait. You were looking for a job for your cousin. I think it's quite understandable. You introduced jobs to two of your cousin's friends. I also think it's good. But why did the protagonist just disappear after they got a job and moved out?
It's a bit of a mess. But it's okay, it's okay, it's okay, it's okay
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Official(72)Scraped 2mo ago
Poison spots too often
In the 1950s, you told a few female students that you wanted to see everywhere and travel all over the country... My God, in the 1950s, many places in China were not peaceful. Projectionists had to carry guns when they went to the countryside to show movies. You still want to run around... You still have thousands of pounds of prey, so you changed to a temporary worker in the canteen... It's really funny to death🤣🤣🤣In order to forcefully integrate into the plot of the Siheyuan, do you have to be mentally retarded? ? ? Isn't it okay to learn electrician skills in your hometown and then go to the city to find a job? ? ? Does every space traveler really have to do shopping? ? ?
Write after understanding that era
Many people have a misunderstanding that hunting is theirs. In that era, it was impossible for those things to be collectively owned. If you wanted to sell them, you had to sell them collectively and sell them yourself, which is called speculation. What is a planned economy? Not only do you need votes to buy things, you also need votes to sell things. Everyone wants to go back in time, have space for plug-ins, and resell something to make a profit. You really don't know how to write the word "death".
Overall OK
Overall, it's okay, but it's too bland, and the protagonist's role is too small, less than half of it.
Now that you can buy a job, why don't you buy it for your family members, but for outsiders?
Nice. . . . . . Write a review. You also need numbers.
Your cousin is having a bit of a drama
Anyway, my cousin should take care of me. But your eldest brother.
The first part was pretty good, but in the middle and later stages it got messed up. It felt like I was trying to make up the word count, or like I had no inspiration. This has become a common problem when writing novels now!
From the perspective of a bystander, the protagonist is not very involved
The entire novel is basically written from the perspective of a bystander. There is no excessive involvement in the affairs of the courtyard. It can be said that there is no hostility... The author borrowed several things from the book, including the scene where Yi Zhonghai and Jia Dongxu signed the pension agreement. I forgot which novel he borrowed from. There must be some, and the scene where Jia Dongxu died is also the scene. The protagonist has space, and the person he draws from is Tie Cui Dayou, who traded meat (wild boar) for a job in a steel rolling mill. However, the protagonist does not seek advancement and has no reasonable reason to spend money. The protagonist is really good at spending money, which is a big failure... The author started writing in 1957, and it basically ended after Jia Dongxu's death. It can be said that the plot of the TV series has no plot at all. The ending is too hasty. Did the deaf old lady die in space? Too rough If you don't want to read the protagonist's quarrel with heaven and earth, you can read the Siheyuan novel. It's bland.
I don't understand whether you are writing a group portrait or the protagonist? Why did the protagonist become invisible right after writing this? Occasionally, it comes out to make a splash. You open a book, you enter a protagonist, and you revolve around him. As a result, you hide the protagonist directly as you write, and then you pull him back to take a look at another protagonist, and then hide him again. From the moment he arrives at the grain depot, he really hides him directly after two or three pictures. Then he goes to the purchasing department. Who cares about your little shit in the courtyard? Have you never seen Siheyuan? I've seen it all, you can write it down in your mind. The problem is that the protagonist has been hidden by you again and again. Keeping a low profile is your way of keeping a low profile. It turns out that you keep a low profile in front of readers. You wrote more than 170 photos. I thought you were writing a group portrait. You were looking for a job for your cousin. I think it's quite understandable. You introduced jobs to two of your cousin's friends. I also think it's good. But why did the protagonist just disappear after they got a job and moved out?
It's a bit of a mess. But it's okay, it's okay, it's okay, it's okay









