Reborn: Gambit to Save the Treasure Girl

The main plot is pretty good Lin and Gu are both very nice Very sweet, but a little sad The sad point is that you can only choose one of the two heroines (I think). I personally think I can't accept having both. The character of the male protagonist is really a bit broken. I like his character very much, but he is always secretive in relationships. Although this is reality, can I really keep hiding my love for two people? In reality, I was also chased by two people (Goblin leader). Because of the wrong choice, the relationship between the two was not very good. I really regret it. But I still hope this article can have a good ending, and I don't hope it will end too early. I wish this article will get better and better😽😹

The perspective of a reader who didn't read much online articles before and read more physical books: It's still watchable, and I'm a little pissed off, but the non-emotional part seems very enjoyable. If you look at the emotional chapters of the two heroines individually (leaving aside the context), some of them are quite touching (Lin's feels like the writing is better, while Gu's feels like a bit of a play-off). Personally, I don't accept writing dual heroines at this pace. If I continue writing at the current pace, the separate plots of the two heroines will be very exciting, and it is not a gal game where you can choose the plot line, so both sides will not be pleased. In the end, it seems vulgar to really "have both", which may be offensive to a pure love warrior (like me), and it doesn't fit well with the modern urban background. If you return to a single line, you will be scolded by Lin Dang/Gu Dang. In fact, it doesn't end well. My personal idea is to take a long-term view, maybe decide on the ending first, and then go back and determine the rhythm of the plot. In the future, the emphasis on the two female protagonists will be clearer, and this will show the bond between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists in a more design sense. And you can try to portray the male protagonist's character arc (I'm a little busy looking for character arcs in online articles, but I spent money), so that the male protagonist can also have some room to grow. But since it is a good story, we cannot let the male protagonist suffer. The only thing that can give a sense of growth is the emotional line. How can we make the male protagonist more emotionally mature? Stop dealing with both sides like this, and take the initiative to deal with it. It is quite like taking the initiative to take advantage of both sides. Moreover, the sugar content of both sides is so high, and the atmosphere has already been stirred up to this level. It is a bit lazy to just drag it down with the fact that the male protagonist has not yet had any relationship with either of them. The beginning is actually good. If the rhythm of the male protagonist not knowing that Gu is interested in him is maintained, it may be possible to create a "passive dealing" situation, and it is conceivable that there can be many interesting and humorous emotional responses. But unfortunately, the author failed too early. (Also understand, after all, it is a periodic update, which is different from what you have to consider when writing a book at once. You have to change the heroine periodically. But I still hope that the author will have a more unexpected way of writing.) I very much hope that future chapters can be arranged over a long period of time! If the popularity is good now, and the author also has the thoughts and pursuits, he might as well try to write a few chapters with non-internet writing ideas. After all, sex determines the upper limit of the book. Some wishful thinking on my part, haha. Finally, if the author can later write the emotional line with the atmosphere and level of "The White Album", then I will say 🐮🍺, but I will not choose to continue reading because it will make my stomach hurt.

I don't want two female protagonists. I feel bad but I have to wait. I feel that it's not good for either side. I can treat Gu Muxue as my childhood sweetheart😓😓😓This is my first time reading a novel and I don't want to have two female protagonists.

If I meet someone like Lin Ruoxi in real life, if I make her shed a tear in the future, I will feel like I deserve to die and have to slap myself a lot.

I really like Lin's type of heroine. Hey, but I think people who have two legs should be damned. After reading the first hundred chapters, I jumped to read it. When I saw the recent new content, I felt that the author really wanted to write a double heroine? Alas, I gave up the article directly. Wait until it's over and watch the ending. If it's a two-heroine ending, there's no need to watch it. 😥. Hey, I hope you are happy. Only your own happiness is the most important in this world, so be happy.

If you're afraid of a ball, you're just a writer of novels. Just be generous and sweet and that's it. This tangle, that tangle, scumbag just understand it.

The book is good, but the software is unscrupulous. You have to pay to read it, and you can't read ads. It's basically ruining my livelihood.

You definitely don't want a harem, I'd really accept two female protagonists at most. Xixi is so pitiful, it would be too pitiful if the love that belongs to her is taken away from her

I just want to say, write more about Lin, and I hope there will be more updates. After all, I bought it directly, not as a member.

In fact, everyone knows that it is unrealistic for the two girls to be with the male protagonist in the end, so it is unlikely to be written like this. The only possibility is that the male protagonist has already gone through four times and does not care about dogfighting again.