Reborn with Wealth That Rivals the Country

Especially Yang Fei's name. One moment someone called him Mr. Ma, and the next moment he became Ma Teng. Then time, at first it was 2000, then it became 5000 years, and then it became 2000 around chapter 900. A bit messy

Ma Dan, it looks good, but when did it get taken off the shelves? I'm really convinced!

There are only five or six twists in one epic battle, and the author's update speed is so slow. It whets my appetite. When I read a good article, I want it to feel good, not just for mentality. If it's like this, it's really worth it😓

What about the characters? Why are there so many people in front and no one behind? Where is Quan Yi? Where is Gong Zili? I want to see Quan Yi! ! ! The plot also needs to change to the point where the protagonist becomes a little bored when he returns later.

The author will give you some ideas. I will tell you how to write. 1. You can write about the ancient hidden family in Daxia, the Zhou family (for example). To train his grandson, he sent him to the countryside for training. He happened to be with Chen Mo. The two grew up together and were still together as soldiers in the future. In the end, they took action and defeated the foundation. During the period, the people who could join Shang Li successfully did that kind of thing to the heroine, but later the Zhou family took action and sent Shang Li to prison. 2. When writing about the property of the Terrorist Company, Chen Mo used the ability to turn defeat into victory and Quan Yi helped to successfully defeat the foundation. Write earlier about the marriage of the male and female protagonists

Everyone, this book has been updated elsewhere, so it's not convenient for us to tell you! Just look around and you'll find out, I've seen a lot of them!

Come on, please improve it. It's what I said. Try not to use any writing methods to make it seem like Chen Mo is invincible in this drama. You have to give him some setbacks. Besides, in the early stage, Chen Mo was beaten hard, and in the later stage, he was hit with hundreds of billions, trillions of dollars. As a result, his wealth is not even as good as the four giants, but he can fight against so many foreign forces. It is unreasonable no matter how you say it. If you want to shape the abilities of the protagonist Chen Mo, then you should fully demonstrate his strong financial resources. After talking about it for a long time, I became the king, but in the end, the funds were not as good as those of the wealthy families in Zhudao. Although it got better later, it still couldn't compare with the merchants. After all, he is also a king who is equal to the merchants. In short, although it is an enjoyable article, the structure is too simple and the content becomes a bit boring as you read further. It is still recommended to change the method. Try to diversify the content and develop it in all aspects. I think this article is really good overall. I hope the author can make more improvements✋✋✋

Can't such a rich protagonist have more wives?

Abandoned the book, foreign.@**Shi:?子?:@...小@,! ? Said they are being updated all the time@@@""

Shang Li is so disgusting, why didn't he get killed?