A Widower's Entertainment

First: raising 6 children without planning to marry a wife does not consider the growth of the child at all, which also means that he cannot go anywhere, and with so many children, there is no time to do other things. Firewood, rice, oil, salt, soy sauce, vinegar and tea don't take time. Those in their sixties or eighties can take care of themselves without much trouble, but for those under four years old, just washing clothes can drive you crazy. A dozen times of washing clothes and quilts a day is not enough, as well as cleaning the house, making milk powder, cooking, etc. Children move, cry, make noises, get sick, quarrel, and fight. Second: Didn't you consider a man's basic needs when you were in your twenties? This is against human nature. Third: In that era, it was a basic operation for the eldest to take care of the younger. In that era, housework basically started at the age of five or six. By the age of ten, you had to do everything, cooking, washing dishes, and washing clothes. In the countryside, you had to carry water, herd cattle, and hunt pig grass, and plant double crops in spring to harvest the autumn harvest. You had to work at the age of five or six. Only the only child in the city could be called a little emperor at all. Fourth: When a child fights with others, he will not pay others at all. We should still judge that era with today's thinking. The rest of the story is actually pretty good, and the writing and stories are pretty good. So five points.

Tried, non-toxic, absolutely green and refined food

Let's not talk about whether the story is poisonous or not. I think the author's writing style is very inferior. I don't know if the author deliberately injects water into it, but he said "Suspect" five times in one sentence. Is this really something that a normal person can write? This novel can obviously be used as a substitute for something like this. It means, but it has to be written over and over again, which makes people feel very frustrated and uncomfortable to read. Also, is the word "really" your mantra? You use it in every chapter, wherever it is inappropriate. I wonder if it is my own problem. Is the way of writing nowadays so abstract?

I want to say a lot, but I don't think it's necessary. It's for reference only if you read it later. The biggest poisonous point is that time travel at the age of twenty-three at the beginning is just a personal opinion. The protagonist who is younger than thirty years old is really not worthy of time travel. In the past two years, I don't know if the author is getting younger and younger or the reader market is getting younger and younger. Many time travel novels have protagonists getting younger and younger. Infinite streaming is okay. You are a single time travel novel. The protagonist is young. To put it bluntly, your mind is not sound. You have no experience and your thoughts are not stable. Except for Long Ao Tianwen, you are lucky to be able to survive. This is purely brainless.

The underlying settings are disgusting! A 23-year-old young man went through life to take the blame, clean up the mess, and raise children for others! What kind of author could conceive of this wonder!

Niubi, it looks good now, keep up the good work

Very in-depth writing, keep it up.

However, Lin Youcheng has now written this novel in the form of Lynch's own memoirs, which is undoubtedly quite exciting. Naturally, the editor will not think that the 120,000-word novella written by Lin Youcheng is not exciting enough. After all, the novel itself is already exciting enough, and all the editors can't help but wonder what special things and people Lin Youcheng has met in those past years.

Not very good, wordy, boring and repetitive.

Shock, shock, shock. The protagonist writes a book and shocks a group of people. A group of people spend all day and night just to shock.