Doupo: I Made Zhang Daxian Cry in the Chat Group
About This Novel
Xiao Bai from Blue Star died suddenly due to staying up late at night, so he traveled to Dou Qi Continent and became a handyman disciple of the Xiao family. With his powerful soul power, he practiced Qi at the age of four, the third level of Dou Qi at the age of six, the sixth level of Dou Qi at the age of nine, and the ninth level of Dou Qi at the age of fifteen. Xiao Bai thought that the most he could do in his life was to be a fighting king, so why go out and fight to the death? It's better to stay in bed and wait for Xiao Huohuo to become Emperor Yan and awaken the bloodline of Emperor Dou. Unexpectedly, Goldfinger arrived late. He obtained the sign-in system and joined the Wanjie chat group. Bite! Newcomer joins the group! "I, Lao Li, only want to wander around the clouds and wild cranes", "The most wonderful girl of the Yin Yang family", "The Xiao family's little one" Join the group chat! Omniscient and omnipotent Zhang Daxian: "Odd and even remain unchanged?" Xiao Bai: What does the immortal mean? Zhang Daxian: "Palace Yuye Liquor?" Xiao Bai:? ? ? Zhang Daxian: Come on, it seems that this guy is not a time traveler. Look at my tricks, you are so jealous! ... A few years later. Looking at Xiao Bai who had broken through the Dou Emperor, Zhang Daxian became numb. Xiao Bai: I originally wanted to get along with you as an ordinary person. Unexpectedly, what I got in exchange was deception. Show your cards, I won't pretend anymore! [This is a short article, funny and light-hearted]
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Official(102)Scraped 11d ago
It's not well written and looks awkward.
The writing is not good, it looks awkward, and one thing is that it is really out of my mind.
Deeply servile
The plot is very awkward. You don't show off your talent and you complain that you are a handyman. Xiao Yaner asked someone to investigate and you just pretend to be affectionate? So disgusting
You're crazy, you have to hide all your energy at the ninth level at the age of fifteen, and you complain that you are a handyman disciple. If you don't hide it, the family will devote resources to training you. You deserve to be a handyman, you are really a cheap person. Gou is not that stubborn, nor is he a god-level talent. After all, Xiao Yan is an eleven-year-old fighter in front of him, and Xiao Xun'er's talent in the early stage is about the same.
Please take a good look at the characteristics of all strange fires
Introduction to the list of 23 different fires: (1) Emperor Yan (Ancient Emperor Tuoshe) Ranking: first Color: Brilliant and colorful, the color of the fusion of twenty-two different fires (2) Nothingness Swallowing Flame Ranking: Second Color: black (3) Pure Lotus Demon Fire Ranking: third Color: Milky white, pink in extreme richness (4) Golden Emperor Burning Sky Flame Ranking: fourth Color: gold (5) The flame of life Ranking: fifth Color: green (6) Eight Desolations Destroy Yan Ranking: Sixth Color: light black (7) Nine Nether Golden Ancestral Fire Ranking: seventh Color: gold (8) Red lotus karma fire Ranking: Eighth Color: deep red (9) Three Thousand Flames of Fire Ranking: Ninth Color: Purple-black, pure black when extremely concentrated (10) Jiuyou Fengyan Ranking: tenth Color: black (11) Bone Spirit Cold Fire Ranking: 11th Color: forest white (12) Kowloon Thunder Gang Fire Ranking: 12th Color: silver (13) Turtle Spirit Earth Fire Ranking: Thirteenth Color: brown (14) Fallen Heart Flame Ranking: Fourteenth Color: Transparent and colorless, milky white when extremely rich (15) Hai Xinyan Ranking: Fifteenth Color: dark blue (16) Fire Cloud Water Flame Ranking: 16th Color: unknown (17) Volcanic stone flame Ranking: Seventeenth Color: dark red (18) Wind Furious Dragon Flame Ranking: 18th Color: earthy yellow (19) Qinglian Earth Heart Fire Ranking: 19th Color: pure cyan, dark cyan when extremely rich (20) Nether Poison Fire Ranking: 20th Color: green (21) Yin and Yang dual inflammation Ranking: 21st Color: black and white (22) Beast Spirit Fire Ranking: twenty-second Color: unknown (23) Xuanhuangyan Ranking: 23rd Color: dark yellow
It's okay, very good. I beg the author to accept it as much as possible. 1. Dou Po, brainless, mainly because of his background, and has a lot to do with Xiao Yan. 2. A little medical fairy with special physique and beauty. Xiao Yan has a lot of connections with her. 3 Give it to the fairy Yunyun for free, she is so beautiful in the anime. 4. The personal beauty snake, mainly the beautiful snake tail, has a close relationship with Xiao Yan. 5 Cheongsam Yafei, a female character with beautiful management and a close relationship with Xiao Yan. 6 Decorations are okay in Liu Fei's anime and have some scenes. 7 The tsundere girl Nalan Yanran is very beautiful in the anime, and she is tsundere and has personality. 8 Princess Yaoye is dispensable, mainly because of the aura of the female general and the anime. 9 Han Yue is related to Xiao Yan, similar to the plot of The Little Doctor, and she also has a sister with double buffs. 10Princess Ziyan Taixu Ancient Dragon. 11 If Su Mei is clean, I can keep it. Anyway, she seems to be very beautiful in the anime. 12 Xiao Yu can also arrange a fight to defeat the most beautiful legs, but the animation is too ugly. 13 Butterflies can also be added separately, mainly to superimpose double buffs. 14 Ruolin, the most important thing is the teacher-student relationship, which is okay in the anime, but her talent is a bit lacking. 15 The Cao family witch, the comic is also okay. 16 Danjia comics are a little ugly, but talented. 17 Yaolao, old lover, old and beautiful in the comics. There are still some forgotten. Nine Songs of Heaven. 1 Yan Lingji, she is so beautiful, I must keep her. 2 Zi Nu, so talented. 3 Nong Jade is okay. 4 The snow girl is very beautiful. 5 Shaosi. Bad people. 1 The empress is beautiful and has that taste, so she must be accepted. 2Xuanjingtian is beautiful. 3 Ao Gu, she looks so good in the anime. Swordsman 1 Dongfang Invincible, Huo Jianhua is still the same version, mainly because it is okay. 2 Ren Yingying. Forgot the others.
Dou Wang and Dou Huang compete against the weakest titled Douluo? 6 Martial arts versus fantasy, the writing is good, but the combat effectiveness is unsatisfactory. Give it four points, the combat effectiveness is too poisonous.
So comfortable
Embarrassment is secondary, why not just keep it to yourself? He had to push it so hard just to show off, and also gave him pills and fighting skills, pressed his IQ to the ground and rubbed him like crazy, so Zhang Daxian kept the baby? It's useless, wouldn't it be better to kill him?
Do you feel a sense of accomplishment in destroying the original work?
What are you writing about? Write Xiao Yan like this. Do you think you are writing about Tang San? Please, can you stop being so vicious and write your chat group properly? Does knocking people down help you?
Bookworm tests poison
This book ruins the original work and makes Xiao Yan such a dick Also, the main character was written in such a disgusting way that I couldn't stand it if he slipped away. I ran away first. He was so poisonous.
Q: No more books to read? ? ?
I was deceived by the recommendation. Liu ah, Tai Jian Shu, also recommended it here. There are really no books. You can post old books on this platform.
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Official(102)Scraped 11d ago
It's not well written and looks awkward.
The writing is not good, it looks awkward, and one thing is that it is really out of my mind.
Deeply servile
The plot is very awkward. You don't show off your talent and you complain that you are a handyman. Xiao Yaner asked someone to investigate and you just pretend to be affectionate? So disgusting
You're crazy, you have to hide all your energy at the ninth level at the age of fifteen, and you complain that you are a handyman disciple. If you don't hide it, the family will devote resources to training you. You deserve to be a handyman, you are really a cheap person. Gou is not that stubborn, nor is he a god-level talent. After all, Xiao Yan is an eleven-year-old fighter in front of him, and Xiao Xun'er's talent in the early stage is about the same.
Please take a good look at the characteristics of all strange fires
Introduction to the list of 23 different fires: (1) Emperor Yan (Ancient Emperor Tuoshe) Ranking: first Color: Brilliant and colorful, the color of the fusion of twenty-two different fires (2) Nothingness Swallowing Flame Ranking: Second Color: black (3) Pure Lotus Demon Fire Ranking: third Color: Milky white, pink in extreme richness (4) Golden Emperor Burning Sky Flame Ranking: fourth Color: gold (5) The flame of life Ranking: fifth Color: green (6) Eight Desolations Destroy Yan Ranking: Sixth Color: light black (7) Nine Nether Golden Ancestral Fire Ranking: seventh Color: gold (8) Red lotus karma fire Ranking: Eighth Color: deep red (9) Three Thousand Flames of Fire Ranking: Ninth Color: Purple-black, pure black when extremely concentrated (10) Jiuyou Fengyan Ranking: tenth Color: black (11) Bone Spirit Cold Fire Ranking: 11th Color: forest white (12) Kowloon Thunder Gang Fire Ranking: 12th Color: silver (13) Turtle Spirit Earth Fire Ranking: Thirteenth Color: brown (14) Fallen Heart Flame Ranking: Fourteenth Color: Transparent and colorless, milky white when extremely rich (15) Hai Xinyan Ranking: Fifteenth Color: dark blue (16) Fire Cloud Water Flame Ranking: 16th Color: unknown (17) Volcanic stone flame Ranking: Seventeenth Color: dark red (18) Wind Furious Dragon Flame Ranking: 18th Color: earthy yellow (19) Qinglian Earth Heart Fire Ranking: 19th Color: pure cyan, dark cyan when extremely rich (20) Nether Poison Fire Ranking: 20th Color: green (21) Yin and Yang dual inflammation Ranking: 21st Color: black and white (22) Beast Spirit Fire Ranking: twenty-second Color: unknown (23) Xuanhuangyan Ranking: 23rd Color: dark yellow
It's okay, very good. I beg the author to accept it as much as possible. 1. Dou Po, brainless, mainly because of his background, and has a lot to do with Xiao Yan. 2. A little medical fairy with special physique and beauty. Xiao Yan has a lot of connections with her. 3 Give it to the fairy Yunyun for free, she is so beautiful in the anime. 4. The personal beauty snake, mainly the beautiful snake tail, has a close relationship with Xiao Yan. 5 Cheongsam Yafei, a female character with beautiful management and a close relationship with Xiao Yan. 6 Decorations are okay in Liu Fei's anime and have some scenes. 7 The tsundere girl Nalan Yanran is very beautiful in the anime, and she is tsundere and has personality. 8 Princess Yaoye is dispensable, mainly because of the aura of the female general and the anime. 9 Han Yue is related to Xiao Yan, similar to the plot of The Little Doctor, and she also has a sister with double buffs. 10Princess Ziyan Taixu Ancient Dragon. 11 If Su Mei is clean, I can keep it. Anyway, she seems to be very beautiful in the anime. 12 Xiao Yu can also arrange a fight to defeat the most beautiful legs, but the animation is too ugly. 13 Butterflies can also be added separately, mainly to superimpose double buffs. 14 Ruolin, the most important thing is the teacher-student relationship, which is okay in the anime, but her talent is a bit lacking. 15 The Cao family witch, the comic is also okay. 16 Danjia comics are a little ugly, but talented. 17 Yaolao, old lover, old and beautiful in the comics. There are still some forgotten. Nine Songs of Heaven. 1 Yan Lingji, she is so beautiful, I must keep her. 2 Zi Nu, so talented. 3 Nong Jade is okay. 4 The snow girl is very beautiful. 5 Shaosi. Bad people. 1 The empress is beautiful and has that taste, so she must be accepted. 2Xuanjingtian is beautiful. 3 Ao Gu, she looks so good in the anime. Swordsman 1 Dongfang Invincible, Huo Jianhua is still the same version, mainly because it is okay. 2 Ren Yingying. Forgot the others.
Dou Wang and Dou Huang compete against the weakest titled Douluo? 6 Martial arts versus fantasy, the writing is good, but the combat effectiveness is unsatisfactory. Give it four points, the combat effectiveness is too poisonous.
So comfortable
Embarrassment is secondary, why not just keep it to yourself? He had to push it so hard just to show off, and also gave him pills and fighting skills, pressed his IQ to the ground and rubbed him like crazy, so Zhang Daxian kept the baby? It's useless, wouldn't it be better to kill him?
Do you feel a sense of accomplishment in destroying the original work?
What are you writing about? Write Xiao Yan like this. Do you think you are writing about Tang San? Please, can you stop being so vicious and write your chat group properly? Does knocking people down help you?
Bookworm tests poison
This book ruins the original work and makes Xiao Yan such a dick Also, the main character was written in such a disgusting way that I couldn't stand it if he slipped away. I ran away first. He was so poisonous.
Q: No more books to read? ? ?
I was deceived by the recommendation. Liu ah, Tai Jian Shu, also recommended it here. There are really no books. You can post old books on this platform.
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