
Pirate's Bounty Don't Run Away
by The Downtrodden Little Chastity
About This Novel
I have traveled to the world of One Piece, and the coordinates are probably a small village in the East China Sea. What should I do next? Waiting online, it's very urgent! Luo Gu had been waiting for three years. It wasn't until he activated a cheat called the 'Wanted Order'... That the strongest pirate hunter was born! [Introduction is incompetent, I want to cry...]
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Official(56)Scraped 29d ago
The writing is good at the beginning. When encountering pirates, you can decisively capture them, but later when you encounter the Straw Hats, they kneel down and lick you, not even once. Especially for Robin, it is simply unbearable to watch. The author, you fucking wrote that the protagonist is a pirate hunter who catches pirates. Don't tell us that you will wait for the Straw Hats to increase the bounty before catching them. Even if you have to wait for the bounty to increase before you catch them, there is no need to help them. You say you want to catch them but you kneel down and lick them. You also say that Robin does not trust the protagonist. I just laugh.
Originally, it would be good to have the protagonist as a bounty hunter parallel to Straw Hat.
As a result, Judiciary Island started to be licked again🐶? ? ? Forget about causing trouble, is it necessary to let Robin know his identity? If you treat pirates as a real world, then you need to think about two things clearly before doing this: First, if there were only a few CP9 people on Judiciary Island, there would have been so many lawless pirates who would have conquered Judiciary Island long ago. How come it has remained standing for so many years? Second, do you think you know all the characters' personalities just by reading the comics (or the unfinished version)? The first villain chosen by Naruto was a third-generation old man, and the final villain in Yan Chixia was the heroine of the original protagonist group. Can this protagonist confirm what kind of core this Robin is? If she had been brainwashed into a spy or even a spy herself, at least half of the protagonist's golden finger would be useless.
I want to write about everything, but I can't write anything well.
There are too many things at the end of the slide. If I buy a chapter to finish it, it would take more than 1,000 chapters to write it well. Everything is too sloppy.
good
When I first watched it, I felt very good. The protagonist is very decisive and unrestrained, and his strength is neither high nor low, which is a bit refreshing. But since the author assigned the protagonist a female crew member, the protagonist gradually started to fall apart. He was not decisive enough, and his early character design collapsed.
Even if Goldfinger can advance physical swordsmanship, he can also obtain the ability of Devil Fruit. I lost interest in watching this as soon as I saw this. I guess the protagonist has several abilities and is not afraid of sea water.
none
The author's timeline is too confusing. Are you writing about ten years before One Piece or one year before One Piece?
Say it yourself.
Can you tell me how long it has been since there was no update?
Fatten and then slaughter
Although it looks good, updates are still too slow. But it doesn't matter, I will go to school in a few days, and I am very nervous about studying in my senior year of high school. Don't be a eunuch anymore. I hope I can see you again during my vacation. I will share it with you after I finish the exam.
Uh uh uh uh uh uh uh
original characters
Laon Ai Or half fish man Red broken hair, full mouth of fangs, slight dark circles under the eyes Occupation: Chef Weapon: A human-sized kitchen knife Ability: Max swimming, great strength, high combat talent but no systematic training Personality: irritable, arrogant, kind Likes: cooking, reading, eggplant Laughter: Wow, wow...
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Official(56)Scraped 29d ago
The writing is good at the beginning. When encountering pirates, you can decisively capture them, but later when you encounter the Straw Hats, they kneel down and lick you, not even once. Especially for Robin, it is simply unbearable to watch. The author, you fucking wrote that the protagonist is a pirate hunter who catches pirates. Don't tell us that you will wait for the Straw Hats to increase the bounty before catching them. Even if you have to wait for the bounty to increase before you catch them, there is no need to help them. You say you want to catch them but you kneel down and lick them. You also say that Robin does not trust the protagonist. I just laugh.
Originally, it would be good to have the protagonist as a bounty hunter parallel to Straw Hat.
As a result, Judiciary Island started to be licked again🐶? ? ? Forget about causing trouble, is it necessary to let Robin know his identity? If you treat pirates as a real world, then you need to think about two things clearly before doing this: First, if there were only a few CP9 people on Judiciary Island, there would have been so many lawless pirates who would have conquered Judiciary Island long ago. How come it has remained standing for so many years? Second, do you think you know all the characters' personalities just by reading the comics (or the unfinished version)? The first villain chosen by Naruto was a third-generation old man, and the final villain in Yan Chixia was the heroine of the original protagonist group. Can this protagonist confirm what kind of core this Robin is? If she had been brainwashed into a spy or even a spy herself, at least half of the protagonist's golden finger would be useless.
I want to write about everything, but I can't write anything well.
There are too many things at the end of the slide. If I buy a chapter to finish it, it would take more than 1,000 chapters to write it well. Everything is too sloppy.
good
When I first watched it, I felt very good. The protagonist is very decisive and unrestrained, and his strength is neither high nor low, which is a bit refreshing. But since the author assigned the protagonist a female crew member, the protagonist gradually started to fall apart. He was not decisive enough, and his early character design collapsed.
Even if Goldfinger can advance physical swordsmanship, he can also obtain the ability of Devil Fruit. I lost interest in watching this as soon as I saw this. I guess the protagonist has several abilities and is not afraid of sea water.
none
The author's timeline is too confusing. Are you writing about ten years before One Piece or one year before One Piece?
Say it yourself.
Can you tell me how long it has been since there was no update?
Fatten and then slaughter
Although it looks good, updates are still too slow. But it doesn't matter, I will go to school in a few days, and I am very nervous about studying in my senior year of high school. Don't be a eunuch anymore. I hope I can see you again during my vacation. I will share it with you after I finish the exam.
Uh uh uh uh uh uh uh
original characters
Laon Ai Or half fish man Red broken hair, full mouth of fangs, slight dark circles under the eyes Occupation: Chef Weapon: A human-sized kitchen knife Ability: Max swimming, great strength, high combat talent but no systematic training Personality: irritable, arrogant, kind Likes: cooking, reading, eggplant Laughter: Wow, wow...
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[Grain] Introduction Incompetent, cute, want to... (=・Ω・=)




I have traveled to the world of One Piece, and the coordinates are probably a small village in the East China Sea. What should I do next? Waiting online, it's very urgent! Luo Gu had been waiting for three years. It wasn't until he activated a cheat called the 'Wanted Order'... That the strongest pirate hunter was born!



Rating: ☆☆ Overall, it can be seen that it is a pseudo-invincible flow. The characters are close to the comics and the writing is okay. System flow, capture pirates to get bounties, coins improve abilities, and you can also use keys to extract skills. I started to see that it was a very poisonous point to draw out the Split Fruit and then draw Laosha, but at least it is not too buggy so far, and it has drawn out some weird abilities, such as ballet. . . Currently, there is only one official crew member, Ms. Valentine, as well as Dusky, who is repaying his debt, and Robin, who is cooperative but not on board. I'm following the path of Straw Hat, and recently I got into trouble with Blackbeard. I hope I can write new ideas in the future.




It's not poisonous, okay! Should I switch to a fan book list? (¦3[▓▓]














