Douluo Chat Group: Bibi Dong Was Targeted at the Beginning

What does the author Gu Yuena plan to do? Dou San could be saved as soon as possible. Maybe Dou Si would send her to death as the last act of dignity? But I don't think the author would do this in the previous book. In this case, wouldn't Dou Si Gu Yuena have lost her memory? I suggest she let her lose her memory forever. Also, the CS of the Tang family must die, the rotten salted fish must die, Tang Wulin of Dou San depends on the period, at the beginning, if Tang San's consciousness is destroyed, the golden dragon bloodline is extracted, and Gu Yuena is taken away, then he can be left alone. If he enters the Tang Sect and Shrek, haha, let him die. The same goes for Tang Wulin of Dou Si. Gu Yuena, who could cure Dou Yi and Dou Er, asked them to do this. As for Douluo's method of dealing with it, she suggested that Dou Yi, Dou Two and Dou Three could destroy the Tang family's power and save it, while Dou Four and Dou Wu should directly destroy the planet.

I deleted it from the bookshelf. I came here to read about three-person torture and anal torture, but it turned out that a group of women could compare their breasts in the group for two chapters. It became less and less interesting. Wouldn't it be better to write if you leave the group? I can't see any progress at all. From 180,000 words to now, you have given me such a big mess. It's enough to fill more than ten chapters on something as big as shit, but I can't torture you, and I won't go back and forth in time to fight. The author has activated all the lightning points.

The author tells you the truth, don't pretend to be mysterious, don't pretend to be mysterious, and don't pretend to be like Ao Jiutian. The sweetness in the Douluo you eat really cannot be absorbed at all, so don't pretend to be mysterious. If you want to write a book of four or five hundred pages, don't pretend to be mysterious, because you won't be able to read it anymore after you put it in the back. Because if you write in this kind of chat group, you just pretend to be cool, slap in the face, and then accept girls. If your home is mysterious and you pretend to be high-class, no one will care about you. Now that your child is not writing long, you can just confess.

This book really made me laugh out loud! 10W is given away! Author I hope for a true happy ending! Keep your promise from the beginning, I want it all! Don't miss any of them if you can! I've only watched Dou Yi, a little bit of Dou Er, and a lot of other fans! I don't know who is disgusting and who is not disgusting in Dou 234! But the pseudo-man Tang San's forced virtue would not be normal when he writes! But you are the author, you can change Jiang Nannan, and others like Ye Xishui you wrote, you can also change, but Su doesn't know it now. I just want to be happy and happy! Douyi, the timeline you wrote is too short! Tang San's torture was not satisfying enough! The next battle with Shrek and Tang San from the God Realm of 234 impressed me! ! You can wake them up, but don't abuse women. Firstly, I hate plots of abusing women. Secondly, they were abnormal and miserable in the fictional Tang San's works! If you are tortured and turned into a person like the fake Tang San, then I have to take a look at your armpits! Shrek from the God Realm bullied me in front of me and tortured him to death! Is your last book Husband the current plot? You can also do it again! If you like it, I'll give it to you! ! !

In fact, I think everyone who has been brainwashed by Shrek and Tang Sect should die. I have already thought out my lines. You are Shi for one day and your whole life. I am too lazy to reason with you. You are not worthy of listening. Just accept destruction! 😪But the author probably wants to recruit girls, just pretend I didn't say that.

To be honest, there are quite a few bad points. For example, the character designs are more or less OOC, and the story logic is somewhat problematic. For example, when Goldfinger comes, a time traveler with normal brains will run away from Notting City according to normal logic. Any delay of one second is disrespectful to the system. What's more, in your plot, Tang San is still hostile to you, and there is no benefit to be gained in Notting City. A gentleman doesn't build a dangerous wall, and if you don't run away according to normal logic, what should you do? Another example is Tang San's inexplicable possessiveness towards Xiao Wu, which is different from the original work. Logically speaking, Tang San has no feelings for Xiao Wu. He's not that kind of villain. If he's really hostile to you, he won't show it. He's from the Tang Sect. He'll kill you with one blow and won't talk to you. It is recommended to reduce the proportion of the protagonist in the plot, focus more on the changes of other characters under the influence of the chat group, write more chat content, and the actual changes affected by the chat content, such as Hu Liena running away to join Qian Renxue, which would be good. When you wrote about the main character pretending to be fighting with Tang San in front of him, I jumped to watch it. The plot was so vulgar and poorly written. Target all the characters objectively, don't criticize them with any opinions. If the three idiots from Wuhundian are criticized, don't let go of the three idiots from Shrek. You should criticize them as well. Don't try to create a harem, it's boring. Douluo people have too many harems. The harem is badly written. It's boring to accept this one or that one. It's annoying to watch, but I have one thing to say: the female characters who appear in Douluo all have their faults to some extent. The more plots there are, the bigger the faults become. Why do some fans now accept Ye Lingling, Shui Bing'er and the like? Because the original novel has no plot and looks like a relatively normal person. You, the protagonist, should just be a tool to promote the plot of the chat group, downplay it, and at most come out occasionally to pretend to be happy. In the later stage, it will be almost finished and you will be lifted up in place.

After the protagonist was exposed, he became more and more confused. He had no useful information at all. The chat group was just a decoration. Moreover, the protagonist had no power. Bibi Dong already knew the protagonist and didn't come to kill him. The protagonist was still so jumpy.

More than two hundred chapters. Over a hundred chapters have been written recently, and the more I write, the more biased they become! Like this exposure stream, curtain stream, chat group, these fandoms, what everyone is watching is the plot of the protagonist pretending to be a saint when the secret is revealed! Look at the current chapters, the tension between the protagonist and the female character is getting more and more, more and more, and more and more boring! Who wants to see this? ! What's there to write about Bibi Dongfu's dissatisfaction? I love it, I love it, I'll be offended if I don't! Others are also chattering, talking about one sentence from you and another from her, rambling in random directions. Two chapters are updated in one day, and there are less than a thousand words of actual plot significance! Everything else is water! Water, water, water! It is simply the boundless water of the ocean! I discovered it from Chapter 100. I thought I would just endure it and write well later? As a result, it's chapter 221 now, and it's still water! . . . I lost, the author is great and slipped away.

The writing is not good and the dialogue between the characters is too plain. If Douluo is at the junior high school level, this fanfic by the author is at the second grade level.

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