A Song under the Sea, Depression All over the Internet
by Running Koi
About This Novel
"I'm not standing here today to prove how great I am!" "But I want others to know that I will definitely take back what once belonged to me!" Standing in front of reporters, you know nothing about depression. How can I live without you? Said the inspirational king and fanboy Bai Zhu. "What was that thing that once belonged to you? Was it your original traffic? Or was it your honor?" "No, it's my 140-square-meter house with four bedrooms and two living rooms!" "..."
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Official(24)Scraped 18d ago
I hope the author can meet this little requirement of mine.
To be honest, if the author's writing skills are not good enough, then he shouldn't set a middle-aged man who has been paying off the mortgage for thirty years as the background. Let's change it quickly. It is best to change it to a young man in his twenties who just bought a house and has owed the mortgage for thirty years, because the protagonist is more naive than a young man who has just entered the society, both in character and behavior.
Give it to me even more until death! Thanks.
Give it to me even more until death! Thank you.
Update quickly, update quickly, Yanzi, how can I live without you, Yanzi?
I want to accompany you over mountains and ridges, chase the sunset and look at the stars with you
Don't be ridiculous, let's have a concert when it's time to have a concert. You can't go on without writing some scenes of fighting with people, right? Just finished the praise and then returned to mediocrity? Aren't holding a concert and singing unexpectedly on the roadside some of the ways to write? Then I recommend Zhao Lei's song, I remember, this song is so well written
Too much poison
There are a lot of poisonous points, although they are not big, but there are too many and I have no desire to read anymore. I only read 9 chapters, and I skipped the next few chapters. 1. There is too much nonsense. I talked about time travel and systems for a long time. 2. The system is rubbish, giving skills to beginners and intermediates, and one-time character experience cards. 3. The singer who is not given by the system doesn't know how to do it at all. 4. The system does not register the copyright. You have to register the copyright for the songs given by the system. As a result, the protagonist gave it to his boss to register it for him. Has he never been out of society? 5. When describing the appearance of the protagonist, just write him as handsome. You should also add that like Leslie Cheung, there are many people who like him, but there are more people who have no feelings for him. In this way, many people will not have a sense of involvement at all.
The long night is lonely, even if you carry a heavy load, you have to keep going. [Rose]
The rain and wind are blowing wildly at the end of March, and there is no way to stay in the spring at dusk. Tears asked the flowers without saying a word, and the red flowers flew across the swing.
It all depends on water, one sentence can write a chapter, avoid pitfalls
Isn't there a name that sounds better than friendship?
I am coming
First, support, hey, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
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Official(24)Scraped 18d ago
I hope the author can meet this little requirement of mine.
To be honest, if the author's writing skills are not good enough, then he shouldn't set a middle-aged man who has been paying off the mortgage for thirty years as the background. Let's change it quickly. It is best to change it to a young man in his twenties who just bought a house and has owed the mortgage for thirty years, because the protagonist is more naive than a young man who has just entered the society, both in character and behavior.
Give it to me even more until death! Thanks.
Give it to me even more until death! Thank you.
Update quickly, update quickly, Yanzi, how can I live without you, Yanzi?
I want to accompany you over mountains and ridges, chase the sunset and look at the stars with you
Don't be ridiculous, let's have a concert when it's time to have a concert. You can't go on without writing some scenes of fighting with people, right? Just finished the praise and then returned to mediocrity? Aren't holding a concert and singing unexpectedly on the roadside some of the ways to write? Then I recommend Zhao Lei's song, I remember, this song is so well written
Too much poison
There are a lot of poisonous points, although they are not big, but there are too many and I have no desire to read anymore. I only read 9 chapters, and I skipped the next few chapters. 1. There is too much nonsense. I talked about time travel and systems for a long time. 2. The system is rubbish, giving skills to beginners and intermediates, and one-time character experience cards. 3. The singer who is not given by the system doesn't know how to do it at all. 4. The system does not register the copyright. You have to register the copyright for the songs given by the system. As a result, the protagonist gave it to his boss to register it for him. Has he never been out of society? 5. When describing the appearance of the protagonist, just write him as handsome. You should also add that like Leslie Cheung, there are many people who like him, but there are more people who have no feelings for him. In this way, many people will not have a sense of involvement at all.
The long night is lonely, even if you carry a heavy load, you have to keep going. [Rose]
The rain and wind are blowing wildly at the end of March, and there is no way to stay in the spring at dusk. Tears asked the flowers without saying a word, and the red flowers flew across the swing.
It all depends on water, one sentence can write a chapter, avoid pitfalls
Isn't there a name that sounds better than friendship?
I am coming
First, support, hey, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
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