Yu Wan Xian Ji

Let's get straight to the point: 1: Book friends all have their own restricted areas when reading books. If this book encounters your restricted area, I can only say that my writing is immature and does not appeal to you. I will not force you to stay. I sincerely ask you to leave silently and take your time without sending it away. Thank you. 😔 For those book lovers who complain about every chapter in the free chapters and just vent their frustrations without some constructive opinions, since there are so many flaws, why should you continue reading? Aren't you tired or upset? There are also some comments with personal attacks, which makes me even more upset. Those who leave such comments are embarrassed to delete them and ban them directly. 🤕 Isn't there three golden chapters in Yuewen? If the three chapters are not to your liking, let's just keep ourselves safe and get together and part ways. 😔 2: I will always delete posts and ban comments for personal attacks and will not accept rebuttal. 🤧 3: You need mood to read a book, and I need mood even more to write a book. As for the book review section, there are always less than one tenth of the book friends, or people who only look at the free chapters to define the entire book. If there is a negative review, I'm sorry, I will delete the post. 🙃 I am a new author and don't have many readers. I don't want to cause me to lose my original readers because of your one-sided and self-centered comment. If you really want to leave a message to complain about something that is not consistent with common sense, you can comment in the chapter! After all, these are the places you've actually seen! But in the book review area, please read it carefully and responsibly before commenting. If you can't stand it, there is no need to leave a message. I'll leave it alone. Thank you. 😫 4: About scoring! Rating in the book review area is the same as above. If you want to give a low score, please take it seriously. Even if it is still being serialized, shouldn't you see the latest update in the book rating? Instead of reading a few free chapters and touching on your weak points, you then use what you think is "a chapter review as a review of the entire book" to score? If this is the case, I'm sorry, please just make complaints to dissuade people who think the same as you, and please don't give points! Otherwise I will delete the post. 😪 After writing a book, I found that there are some interesting readers who have given you negative reviews or complained endlessly about the article that you don't like, but they still come back from time to time. Are you worried that I will delete your book review? I really don't know what you mean by going back and forth for a walk? 🙃 Don't worry, generally I'll keep it if the book review isn't excessive, but I think it's quite misleading, so I'll delete it as soon as I see the comment. I have also evolved from a reader to a novice author. This book is my first book. Even if it is not good, I will improve it as if it were my own child. I accept good suggestions, because with your suggestions and ideas, I will find its shortcomings. Even if there are comments and suggestions in the chapter on weekdays, I rarely reply, but I will remember this problem and improve it later. But for malicious complaints, as long as they are not excessive, I will not delete the post. After all, after a book is published, tens of millions of people will have millions of Hamlets, and it is difficult for everyone to like my book as if it were RMB. 😣 If there is no basic mutual respect between people, there is no need for me to save face! 👹 Today, what I have said so much is that I have seen some unsatisfactory comments that have affected my writing mood. Although some of the comments are not personal attacks, it can be seen that they are complained with an overbearing and critical vision, which makes people feel very bad. So I don't want to accommodate such a condescending reader, and I don't want to tell you if you have the ability to write one? It is impossible for you to do such a thing to refute this kind of book friend. Because I am a reader as well as an author, I just couldn't read enough books, so I wanted to try writing one myself. Only after I really entered the state of being an author did I realize that reading and writing books are basically two different concepts! When reading a book, you can immediately pick out a lot of thorns based on the clear scenes or events that the author has given, even if you are young enough to say whether a sentence is reasonable or not, etc.! When writing a book, there is no reference for you. It all depends on the scenes, events and characters you create and bring into it. Readers who don't write books cannot understand this difficulty at all. Is it reasonable for an author to have to think over the plot again and again when something happens? There is much more than what readers think, and both reasonable and unreasonable things must be taken into consideration. No matter how reasonable the writing is, it will still be unreasonable in the eyes of people who read it, not to mention that if you feel it is unreasonable afterwards, you will be criticized endlessly. 😲 Fortunately, my book friends who really like me are very kind to me. Although they don't leave many messages, I know that everyone has been silently pursuing my books, and thank you! ! 👴👴👴 Because of your support, even if you silently subscribe to support and continue to follow my articles, it is a great motivation and encouragement for me as a newbie. Here, my little turtle would also like to express my most sincere gratitude to you, thank you! ! ! 👴👴😽😽

It looks pretty good at the front, but it doesn't look good when you measure the spiritual roots at the back. An ordinary small mountain village is full of people who can cultivate immortals. Are all the spiritual roots like cabbage? Moreover, this is the counterattack trend of the useless heroine. The heroine is the heroine, not a novel where she is dressed as a female supporting character. Why did she create a weird Yu Lin? The spirit root and everything are similar to the heroine, as if she has completely become a shield for the heroine. It looks like the heroine is dressed as the heroine in the book, dim and dull, and Yu Lin is like the heroine, enjoying the radiance. What is the plot? It's really confusing.

How to say? I don't know why I don't like this Yu Lin very much, especially since the soul inside is actually Yu Wan? ? I don't like this setting very much. Isn't it just making people hate it for no reason? Besides, the attributes are similar to the heroine, I don't know what to say.

I feel that the sect you created is too undisciplined. You can start fights in the sect casually, and no one cares about it. You can quarrel below while the boss is talking, and you can arrange the monks who transform into gods at will without any estimate. This is too disrespectful. I feel like it is a sect after all. You did not write about their respect for the sect and the prestige of a sect. The supporting characters are too weak-minded and curse regardless of the occasion. This is an article about cultivating immortals, not a fight between families. This is purely a personal opinion, I hope the author can write better articles

I don't understand why the heroine has to show her useless qualifications when testing her spiritual roots, and then she has to be secretive when practicing. It's so controversial to seek a master. It's okay not to let people know the real spiritual root situation, but it can show an almost normal five spiritual root qualifications. It doesn't have to be too good but not too bad. Isn't this more conducive to hiding the true situation and not attracting so much attention? Anyway, the text seems to give people the feeling that the heroine's character is not that comfortable.

The main female protagonist only relies on fighting and killing without learning anything on her own. Isn't this a treasure trove without knowing it? It's a waste. The author is great. Please add some alchemy skills. It's really convenient. There are still spiritual stones left. You can earn a lot of spiritual stones.

It's okay to be a little ambiguous, ah ah ah ah ah

Is Yu Wan really going to die? Does she have a chance to be reborn? What is the meaning of heaven? How powerful is the Yuan Demon? What is beyond the tribulation? What is the final destination of the Demon-Slaying Blade? Can Li Mubai recover before the war? What kind of person is the leader of Xuantian Sect? How long will it take for the golden retriever to evolve again? Can the other major contract beasts become the most effective assistants? How is Yu Chen? What's the ending of Yu Lin? What will be the outcome of the final battle between Yu Wan and Yuan Mo? Heaven has faded and the old world is coming to an end. Will Yu Wan be the new master of the new world? If you want to know what happened after the funeral, please contact me three times (subscription, monthly ticket, reward)

I just want to ask a few questions. Is it Yu Lin or Yu Wan who is more powerful? Does Yu Lin have a better chance, or does Yu Wan have a better chance? Who has better qualifications? Is Yu Wan the root of chaos? The innate kind or the acquired kind that also becomes a spirit body?

She always describes her feelings and infatuation with Li Hao, and she also has five spiritual roots. I'm really afraid that she will inexplicably target the heroine in the future.