Swordsman in Ancient Times
by I'm Going Crazy With Poverty
About This Novel
The story of Wang Yu, a modern swordsman, who was experimented by a mysterious organization, escaped from death, and traveled to an unknown ancient world. New book "Nightmare Transcendence" has been released
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Official(27)Scraped 13d ago
Awesome
You actually spent 5.6 Chapters introducing a trivial character, and then he was killed in one encounter. The author is so awesome.
What are you writing about? You have written about the battlefield in an essay, but when you kill a sidekick, you have to spend a few chapters introducing the sidekick's life, inside and out? Haha... Who dares to read the paid chapters of this novel? Almost half of them are water numbers! ! !
The writing style is too wordy and a running account
The writing style is immature, the rhythm is like a running account, and each paragraph is very long, giving people no sense of involvement. It is like a primary school student writing a composition. What you are writing is a novel, not a composition. The other characters don't have to be so different, but the protagonist must be flexible.
Come on... support one! ! !
Come on... Support one! ! !
What kind of knife is it?
The author is great. What kind of sword does the protagonist have? Is it a Tang sword or a broad-backed sword?
Why is Zhao Kui's section so long?
The writing style is a bit immature, the environment description is good, the subject matter is very novel, and it's a bit watery!
Cheers to this book 2018!
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How to say it? I feel a little **, the writing is not very good, I don't know how the new book is. . .
It's so irritating to your eyes. It's so irritating to your eyes.
Too watery
Even a small person can write a few chapters and a stroke of water
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Community(0)
Official(27)Scraped 13d ago
Awesome
You actually spent 5.6 Chapters introducing a trivial character, and then he was killed in one encounter. The author is so awesome.
What are you writing about? You have written about the battlefield in an essay, but when you kill a sidekick, you have to spend a few chapters introducing the sidekick's life, inside and out? Haha... Who dares to read the paid chapters of this novel? Almost half of them are water numbers! ! !
The writing style is too wordy and a running account
The writing style is immature, the rhythm is like a running account, and each paragraph is very long, giving people no sense of involvement. It is like a primary school student writing a composition. What you are writing is a novel, not a composition. The other characters don't have to be so different, but the protagonist must be flexible.
Come on... support one! ! !
Come on... Support one! ! !
What kind of knife is it?
The author is great. What kind of sword does the protagonist have? Is it a Tang sword or a broad-backed sword?
Why is Zhao Kui's section so long?
The writing style is a bit immature, the environment description is good, the subject matter is very novel, and it's a bit watery!
Cheers to this book 2018!
.
How to say it? I feel a little **, the writing is not very good, I don't know how the new book is. . .
It's so irritating to your eyes. It's so irritating to your eyes.
Too watery
Even a small person can write a few chapters and a stroke of water
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