The Red Rose of the Elf Age

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The author's books are all good, but they are not popular. Why?

I originally thought your writing was pretty good, but the plots in the last few chapters are really disgusting. Wouldn't it be good to follow the original route? Create an organization, have Miss Firefly, and have a black dragon or a white dragon in terms of strength. The plot of the last few chapters has really cracked me up.

I highly recommend it! I don't really like dark literature I like this kind of writing in both black and white There is light and darkness in this world I like the protagonist's character very much, he only trusts himself I like not having a female protagonist, of course, I just wish As long as there aren't too many heroines, that'll be fine After all, it's really hard to imagine the protagonist's character falling in love. To be honest, the entry point of family affection is a bit insufficient. With a little foreshadowing, it would be better for the protagonist to accept them Someone you don't know, from a league you hate, says it's your mother Although there is evidence, is it really okay for you to call me mom so quickly? I feel like the protagonist was so aloof at first, but ended up accepting it so quickly... It was a bit uncomfortable. I think the description of the emotional scene is pretty good (maybe because I have never been in love ('-ωก̀)) But I know the emotion of secret love, so I think the description is good. And there's more I hope the author will definitely not give up! I think this book is really good It's so hard to find books that suit my taste (๑ १д१) So don't give up the trap.

Let me tell you my opinion The book is a good book, not even the top of the elven literature, but it is also relatively high-end. 1. Name. As a book lover who particularly likes to read elf books, I have been looking for good elf books. I don't know about other people. Anyway, when I saw the title, I felt that it was about a heroine. Of course, it's not that the heroine is not good. The main reason is that it looks awkward. This is why I have not collected it until now. 2. Routines. There are actually a lot of elf novels written now, and the routines are probably almost the same. Writing about civilians is nothing more than joining a dark organization and then standing out. One identity in the alliance and another in the darkness. However, I have seen that there are indeed few elves selected in this book in other elf books, so it is considered relatively good. 3. Plot, I think the emotional scene is the most failed one. I strongly recommend deleting it. Why does a girl like you immediately? How come a girl likes you? This is the rhythm of starting a harem and becoming a stallion. There are also every suspense. To be honest, the author does not write a running account, but there is no special urge for people to read it. There are still people reading what you have written. I am mainly afraid that if it is put on the shelf, people will drop it as soon as they need to spend money.

This book is very good-looking, and it is excellent in terms of elf writing. However, compared to the elf writing next door, it still seems to have some flaws. Looking at this book, I think the author has read Hong Yinya's book. The plot now has several directions. One is that he will fall in the Alliance from now on, and the other is that he will be with his mother (I believe this is the situation that all book friends least want to see) and then fall in Wenwen Township, and then become a virgin. . . 3 I believe this is what most people want to see: the protagonist recognizes the mother and sister, and then leaves. Don't compete with those Alliance dogs. Personally, I want to see the ending. It is better for the protagonist to be colder. The protagonist just leaves. The protagonist just recognizes them but leaves coldly without communicating with the shady guys in the alliance. Then the protagonist starts his own adventure. Dear book friends, please write down everything you want to write about below, and write down your most hoped-for ending to this incident. In addition, writing this one may trouble the author. I understand that people like us who have read a lot of books can more or less guess what the other person wants to write. This post is to help the author choose the most perfect ending. That's all. I don't know if this world is connected to Xiaozhi's world. Since the existence of Dr. Oak is explained in it (which chapter should I borrow? Dr. Oak is mentioned in the one about stealing meteorites), the author can add some plots about Xiaozhi and the theatrical version. That's all for the above, I hope the author can pick out a perfect ending! Ciao~.

Will you write about Douluo Dalu after this book is finished? I still prefer Douluo Dalu

I haven't read it yet, I don't know what happened, but why didn't I write about Douluo?

Dear author, you should try to write as few emotional scenes as possible! You are really not suitable for writing emotional dramas!

In the early stage, I followed the dark style, but when I met my family, my style changed too quickly.