Si Jin Shu
by Zhiyiyunshu
About This Novel
[1v1] The sweet pet arrived in a different world without any abuse. Xu Jinshu originally planned to go through the tribulation and leave safely. Who knew that something unexpected happened in the middle of the night, bringing him and Su Xiaofan to an unrecorded era. Xu Jinshu, who has never been a child, has experienced the joy of growing up slowly, gradually becoming more and more smoky, and meeting the person she has been with all her life. Although Heaven has given her a good family background and environment, Xu Jinshu still wants to point to Heaven: Don't let me see you out in the 33rd heaven again, or else I will scold you every time I see you!
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dizzy
The idea is pretty good, but the dialogue is messy. I don't even know what the sentence is saying during the dialogue, and who will answer the next sentence. Can the author change this? It's a good article, but it makes me irritated when there is no dialogue. Every time there is dialogue in the article, I don't know who is saying each sentence, and sometimes the words are a bit messy. I hope I can pay attention to this later
Already finished reading
I have finished reading the updated one. How can I say that, unlike the old jokes I have read in the past, the ideas and themes of this article are okay. However, the descriptions in many parts of the article are not very clear, which made me unable to keep up with the rhythm. Secondly, the introduction of individual characters is not very clear. It's my own problem. I can remember at most three of the names of the Dragon Nine Sons in the article. I hope the author will do his best in the future. The author may be a newbie. I hope that in the future, I can carefully update the article after reading it and produce more high-quality articles. Come on, come on＾0＾~
I feel like my identity is unclear!
The hero!
Who is the male protagonist? ? ? ? ? ?
The text is concise, vivid and lively
The dialogue is wonderful and the characters are vivid and vivid! ! !
Very nice. . . . . . .
I just watched the beginning, and the heroine's father and brother didn't like one thing or another, which made me dislike them both. And so is Kong Xuanmuhua.
Brother, come on!
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Not bad, great support
I think this novel is good
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Official(126)Scraped 25d ago
dizzy
The idea is pretty good, but the dialogue is messy. I don't even know what the sentence is saying during the dialogue, and who will answer the next sentence. Can the author change this? It's a good article, but it makes me irritated when there is no dialogue. Every time there is dialogue in the article, I don't know who is saying each sentence, and sometimes the words are a bit messy. I hope I can pay attention to this later
Already finished reading
I have finished reading the updated one. How can I say that, unlike the old jokes I have read in the past, the ideas and themes of this article are okay. However, the descriptions in many parts of the article are not very clear, which made me unable to keep up with the rhythm. Secondly, the introduction of individual characters is not very clear. It's my own problem. I can remember at most three of the names of the Dragon Nine Sons in the article. I hope the author will do his best in the future. The author may be a newbie. I hope that in the future, I can carefully update the article after reading it and produce more high-quality articles. Come on, come on＾0＾~
I feel like my identity is unclear!
The hero!
Who is the male protagonist? ? ? ? ? ?
The text is concise, vivid and lively
The dialogue is wonderful and the characters are vivid and vivid! ! !
Very nice. . . . . . .
I just watched the beginning, and the heroine's father and brother didn't like one thing or another, which made me dislike them both. And so is Kong Xuanmuhua.
Brother, come on!
Are you having fun watching it?
Sign in~~
Sign in~~
Not bad, great support
I think this novel is good
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