
Immortal Master, Don't Run Away
by Yoyo Nanshan
About This Novel
Gu Xun thought he was a master in love, but he was defeated by his master. Ye Nanxi was called the number one immortal master, but his eighteen martial arts skills could not match his apprentice's sweet words. If you don't cross the Forget River, you will have to pay for it in one life. Lord: Arrogant Hengtian, inconsistent on the outside, younger brother Gu Xun: "Master is the most beautiful! Master is the most powerful!" Later Gu Xun: "Xi'er, don't let me go. We have been married for a long time." Ye Nanxi: "..."----I am the dividing line----Master, in fact, when I first met you, I planned something against you.
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Official(15)Scraped 21d ago
Thank you cuties for your comments.
Since this is my first time writing and I am a novice, I would like to thank you for having the little cutie who can point out any shortcomings. The paragraphing of Chapter 1 is indeed not conducive to reading and has been revised. There may be such problems in the early stage, so I can only trouble the little cuties to put some effort into it, sorry😣. Later segmentation will be better ~ Welcome everyone to come and make corrections😊
The writing is very good and it really pokes me in the face. I hope it won't be too cruel later
reminder
Let me poke you and add more updates! [Emot=default,07/]
I want to see the next one, why don't I update it I can't stand it in the middle of the night.
Very well written I just wish I could divide it into more sections😂 There are too many words in this paragraph and it seems so densely packed🌚
Come on, I have a feeling that jealousy will explode in the future, hahaha
Are you going to be tortured later? Can you not abuse me?
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Community(0)
Official(15)Scraped 21d ago
Thank you cuties for your comments.
Since this is my first time writing and I am a novice, I would like to thank you for having the little cutie who can point out any shortcomings. The paragraphing of Chapter 1 is indeed not conducive to reading and has been revised. There may be such problems in the early stage, so I can only trouble the little cuties to put some effort into it, sorry😣. Later segmentation will be better ~ Welcome everyone to come and make corrections😊
The writing is very good and it really pokes me in the face. I hope it won't be too cruel later
reminder
Let me poke you and add more updates! [Emot=default,07/]
I want to see the next one, why don't I update it I can't stand it in the middle of the night.
Very well written I just wish I could divide it into more sections😂 There are too many words in this paragraph and it seems so densely packed🌚
Come on, I have a feeling that jealousy will explode in the future, hahaha
Are you going to be tortured later? Can you not abuse me?


