I Carry a Game World with Me

There are too many narrations. It barely brought me into the world view of the protagonist. It was just viewed from a third-person perspective. The dialogues that were basically nothing were all narrations.

Damn it, the word count isn't all put together with commas, right? I listened to it, and I died every time.

Especially when the body becomes a god, it clearly shows that there is something wrong with the thinking or personal consciousness. There are obviously bugs in the process of becoming a god, and later on when it is written about traveling to other worlds, I feel a bit disappointed. I hope it won't end unfinished in the future!

Author, Hello, I think your book is quite good, but when I read it, I felt weird, special, and uncomfortable. I love listening to novels, and I feel so annoyed when I listen to them.

After reading Chapter 43, I finally know what kind of world this is! The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The sky is blue waiting for misty rain and I am waiting for you. The azure is waiting for the misty rain and I am waiting for you, the azure is waiting for the misty rain and I am waiting for you, the azure is waiting for the misty rain and I am waiting for you, the azure is waiting for the misty rain and I am waiting for you, the azure is waiting for the misty rain and I am waiting for you, the azure is waiting for the misty rain and I am waiting for you.

After reading Chapter 9, I didn't want to read any more. I was so scared. Can't you go abroad? So write in such a long and verbose way that it will disgust a lot of readers?

I often mess up my writing. Once I read too much, I don't want to read anymore.

The writing is okay, but the protagonist is a bit rigid. Can't he hide when fighting monsters? After fighting monsters for such a long time, I can't dodge the monster's attacks every time. I feel that the protagonist will attack from a distance or attack from a stance. Can't he be more flexible? Well,,,,,

It looked good in the early stages. The pace jumped too fast. With 500,000 words, I'm already thousands of years old. I gave up when I reached chapter 120. I felt like I was falling apart.

The progress is very fast. After more than 100 chapters are completed, I directly change the world, but I think it is a bit strange to abandon the power. It's nothing if the pig loses this little strength. Although power does not require the protagonist, the protagonist needs power.