I Became an Immortal at the Beginning, but Was Pulled into a Chat Group?
About This Novel
Tens of thousands of years later, the world has gone through several reincarnations, but I am still high up, overlooking all living beings.
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Official(13)Scraped 26d ago
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I can't understand it, I'm wondering who the main character is.
How about changing the name? There are basically no chat groups except the front. The supporting role is not suitable
A eunuch? It's pretty well written.
I'm a little confused. Who is the protagonist? Long smoke? Male or female?
Ten damn words, water, water, water, water, water
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Judging from the author's description, you have visited Wangwang, right? I'm still studying Buddhist scriptures and Taoist canon. I haven't read them and I find it difficult to write this description.
There's no logic, I can't understand it, it's too confusing
I don't even know what you're writing about. I read it for a long time and didn't understand anything. I can't even understand your brain circuit. It's a complete mess.
The meaning is unclear, the purpose of the plot is unclear, it's a complete mess, the group of characters are spinning around, I suspect it was written on the spur of the moment, there is no specific plot outline, it feels really messy, there is no definite purpose, there is really nothing to see. I still don't know how the protagonist cultivated to become an Emperor Immortal later. Damn it, this should be the first Immortal realm in mythology. It can be achieved in 1,700 years. It must be made of damn water. Earthly immortals also have the five declines of heaven and human beings. Because of the heavenly immortals and golden immortals, they can gather in the country and not be afraid of the five declines of heaven and human beings.
I'm so confused. I'm so confused that I can't understand or remember.
It feels a bit chaotic, here and there.
The writing is a bit messy
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Official(13)Scraped 26d ago
😳😳😳😳😳
I can't understand it, I'm wondering who the main character is.
How about changing the name? There are basically no chat groups except the front. The supporting role is not suitable
A eunuch? It's pretty well written.
I'm a little confused. Who is the protagonist? Long smoke? Male or female?
Ten damn words, water, water, water, water, water
Got it on Tieba
Judging from the author's description, you have visited Wangwang, right? I'm still studying Buddhist scriptures and Taoist canon. I haven't read them and I find it difficult to write this description.
There's no logic, I can't understand it, it's too confusing
I don't even know what you're writing about. I read it for a long time and didn't understand anything. I can't even understand your brain circuit. It's a complete mess.
The meaning is unclear, the purpose of the plot is unclear, it's a complete mess, the group of characters are spinning around, I suspect it was written on the spur of the moment, there is no specific plot outline, it feels really messy, there is no definite purpose, there is really nothing to see. I still don't know how the protagonist cultivated to become an Emperor Immortal later. Damn it, this should be the first Immortal realm in mythology. It can be achieved in 1,700 years. It must be made of damn water. Earthly immortals also have the five declines of heaven and human beings. Because of the heavenly immortals and golden immortals, they can gather in the country and not be afraid of the five declines of heaven and human beings.
I'm so confused. I'm so confused that I can't understand or remember.
It feels a bit chaotic, here and there.
The writing is a bit messy
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