The Road to Becoming Stronger Starts with Swallowing

The Road to Becoming Stronger Starts with Swallowing

by Yiqu Qin Poetry

Length:
233Kwords115chapters
Latest:
Ch. 115Purple Soul Pearl
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About This Novel

A soul that is about to dissipate unexpectedly comes to the world of Swallowing Starry Sky where danger and opportunity coexist. Let's see how he can survive here and become stronger step by step from Swallowing. Newbie, please support me

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Abnormal47mo ago

A bit long-winded

There is too little in the main world and too much in the sub-world.

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Oh_ed47mo ago

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The writing is okay, but some places are a bit watery and wordy.

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怀瑾逸47mo ago

Just chat

I accept criticism, because it is inevitable that there will be mistakes and omissions when writing a book for the first time, but please read it clearly when criticizing. For example, the current Red Queen is the product of the fusion with Ta Ling. The reason why it is still called the Red Queen is that I am too lazy to change the name.

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