
The Road to Becoming Stronger Starts with Swallowing
About This Novel
A soul that is about to dissipate unexpectedly comes to the world of Swallowing Starry Sky where danger and opportunity coexist. Let's see how he can survive here and become stronger step by step from Swallowing. Newbie, please support me
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Official(3)Scraped 8d ago
A bit long-winded
There is too little in the main world and too much in the sub-world.
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The writing is okay, but some places are a bit watery and wordy.
Just chat
I accept criticism, because it is inevitable that there will be mistakes and omissions when writing a book for the first time, but please read it clearly when criticizing. For example, the current Red Queen is the product of the fusion with Ta Ling. The reason why it is still called the Red Queen is that I am too lazy to change the name.
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 8d ago
A bit long-winded
There is too little in the main world and too much in the sub-world.
. .
The writing is okay, but some places are a bit watery and wordy.
Just chat
I accept criticism, because it is inevitable that there will be mistakes and omissions when writing a book for the first time, but please read it clearly when criticizing. For example, the current Red Queen is the product of the fusion with Ta Ling. The reason why it is still called the Red Queen is that I am too lazy to change the name.









