Hktv: Your Opportunity is Mine!
by There Is A Road Monster In Shushan
About This Novel
He Bochen, who traveled to the Hong Kong Comprehensive World, got a Hu-cutting system, and he could gain benefits by intercepting other people's opportunities, so... "Uncle Da, your winning number is mine!" "Crow, it's me who should flip the table!"... Ruan Mei looked at He Bochen's girlfriend, the one named Ma Qingxia, and thought to herself: Does he have any thoughts about me?
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Official(19)Scraped 27d ago
Speechless.
Little white text, running accounts, and sentences are not fluent. The male protagonist doesn't know what's going on in his mind. He kills people at every turn. He has so much money, but he is still greedy for small money. Even if he has money, he doesn't know how to spend it or enjoy it. He uses the money to do things. He actually says that living in a 3 square meter room is the most comfortable. This is a typical small farmer's mentality. No matter how much money or plug-ins are given to this kind of person, it will be a waste and he will not enjoy it at all. It is also a complete eunuch behavior towards women. Fang Ting is obviously willing to like you and willing to be with you. Do you have to scare her away? I also don't understand why the male protagonist doesn't even mention that he likes Ruan Mei, so he doesn't want her to have contact with Fang Zhanbo? Is it just a matter of knowing the result and preventing it? That's something that you and I agree on, and you don't like her, so you insist on letting others get her, which is a typical example of harming others without benefiting oneself, and lack of brains. It is recommended that the author first open up his mind and establish the character image first. There is always a purpose in doing things, either for money, power, or women. If you want to avoid the three things, are you going to write philosophy or something else?
I've watched a lot of Hong Kong TV dramas and I can't say you're very good at writing, I can only say it's average! But the character of pig's feet
The character really attracts me! Revenge does not take overnight, eliminate all dangers and is justified! ! It shows that the author really writes with care! I hope I can continue to write well like this. It is a good book that people look forward to! ! !
Either all in Cantonese or all in vernacular. Just add a handsome character or a baa when writing.
chaos
At first, he said that he killed Ruan Mei in his previous life. Now he was trying to do it again. Then he said that he was not in good health. He was an athlete in his previous life. Who are you?
The pace is too fast and there is no detail at all. It looked awkward, and the plot always felt like something was wrong. [Emot=default,10/]
The pace is too fast. Suddenly the system is put in place and people take off. The space is so confusing that it requires energy and can only be used a few times and cannot be used infinitely. It is too compact. Events happen one after another and people keep killing people. Paranoia! Overall don't like it
Your golden finger is so exaggerated!
Goldfinger, ding! The novice gift pack arrives, the protagonist becomes a god, and the whole book is completed!
Daily check-in will bring you a wave of experience.
What I wrote before is very good. I hate the appearance of task arrangements. Is this kind of life still my own?
You don't need to read the beginning of this rubbish to know it's a rubbish novel.
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Official(19)Scraped 27d ago
Speechless.
Little white text, running accounts, and sentences are not fluent. The male protagonist doesn't know what's going on in his mind. He kills people at every turn. He has so much money, but he is still greedy for small money. Even if he has money, he doesn't know how to spend it or enjoy it. He uses the money to do things. He actually says that living in a 3 square meter room is the most comfortable. This is a typical small farmer's mentality. No matter how much money or plug-ins are given to this kind of person, it will be a waste and he will not enjoy it at all. It is also a complete eunuch behavior towards women. Fang Ting is obviously willing to like you and willing to be with you. Do you have to scare her away? I also don't understand why the male protagonist doesn't even mention that he likes Ruan Mei, so he doesn't want her to have contact with Fang Zhanbo? Is it just a matter of knowing the result and preventing it? That's something that you and I agree on, and you don't like her, so you insist on letting others get her, which is a typical example of harming others without benefiting oneself, and lack of brains. It is recommended that the author first open up his mind and establish the character image first. There is always a purpose in doing things, either for money, power, or women. If you want to avoid the three things, are you going to write philosophy or something else?
I've watched a lot of Hong Kong TV dramas and I can't say you're very good at writing, I can only say it's average! But the character of pig's feet
The character really attracts me! Revenge does not take overnight, eliminate all dangers and is justified! ! It shows that the author really writes with care! I hope I can continue to write well like this. It is a good book that people look forward to! ! !
Either all in Cantonese or all in vernacular. Just add a handsome character or a baa when writing.
chaos
At first, he said that he killed Ruan Mei in his previous life. Now he was trying to do it again. Then he said that he was not in good health. He was an athlete in his previous life. Who are you?
The pace is too fast and there is no detail at all. It looked awkward, and the plot always felt like something was wrong. [Emot=default,10/]
The pace is too fast. Suddenly the system is put in place and people take off. The space is so confusing that it requires energy and can only be used a few times and cannot be used infinitely. It is too compact. Events happen one after another and people keep killing people. Paranoia! Overall don't like it
Your golden finger is so exaggerated!
Goldfinger, ding! The novice gift pack arrives, the protagonist becomes a god, and the whole book is completed!
Daily check-in will bring you a wave of experience.
What I wrote before is very good. I hate the appearance of task arrangements. Is this kind of life still my own?
You don't need to read the beginning of this rubbish to know it's a rubbish novel.
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