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Accidentally entered the chat group and became an administrator. Zhang Luo was very tired of managing a group of troublemakers. Moon Worshiping Leader: "The flood is unstoppable!" Siren "Collapse is coming, and humans are reborn!" Serpent "If no living thing survives, the earth will be eternal!" Goetia "Humanity is burned, the planet is rebuilt..." Watching the destructive maniacs panicking one by one, I was a little panicked, until a bigger figure came into the group-- The God of Destruction abandoned the Emperor of Heaven. "The human world is filthy again." Zhang became even more panicked-- "Go and invite the Tathagata of the West... Ahem, go and invite the God of Heaven to come and calm the scene!!" Zhang Luo shouted like a dog managing a fox pretending to be a tiger.
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Official(91)Scraped 4d ago
About the strength of the character.
I think strength should not only depend on how strong the character is, but also the rules and regulations of the world. For example, One Punch Man, Saitama is invincible. But if he goes to another world, will his invincibility still exist? Goku and Beerus almost destroyed the universe. Their strength relies on the control of Qi (and it is still very superficial). If a monk who practices Qi is randomly thrown into their world, wouldn't they be invincible? Moreover, Sun Wukong also died of a heart attack. I hope the author can be more rigorous.
The difference between gods and immortals
God, often as a kind of belief, exists all over the world. It can be a living creature or a natural error. According to literature, gods in China are divided into three types: "gods of heaven, earth, and humans and ghosts." There are also differences between them. There are two types of gods among them: innate gods and acquired gods. There are many who worship gods innately, such as Sanqing, and those who become gods later in life. Immortals are people in ancient Han mythology who are said to have special abilities and can live forever. Immortals, unlike gods, have innate existence. Immortals can only be formed through acquired cultivation. Therefore, they are fundamentally different and have different starting points. Gods are reincarnated after death, and immortals are those who practice immortality. The real difference between immortals and gods is that immortals cultivate through life, while gods teach through death. Immortals are often associated with Taoism. As for gods, they become gods only after death. The power of gods is innate, while the power of immortals comes through practice. This is the biggest difference between gods and immortals. God holds the priesthood, accepts the prayers of believers, and gives blessings to believers. Immortals live as long as heaven and earth, and are free from things.
The novel should be divided into specific realms
The first to fourth levels can be divided by the martial arts world realm, and the fifth and higher levels can be divided by the fairy world realm. The first level is Acquired, the second level is Innate, the third level is Grandmaster, Grand Master, Broken Void, the fourth level is Yuanshen, the fifth level is Entering the Dao (Earth Immortal), the sixth level is Celestial Immortal, the seventh level is Golden Immortal, the eighth level is Da Luo, and the ninth level is Hunyuan.
I can't imagine that Madoka Magica is level 7😓😓
If Madoka can be at the seventh level, then the Monkey King derived from Journey to the West should not only be at the fifth level, which is too low. The world view of the magical girl world is not grand, and it may not be as good as the derivative world of Journey to the West. Even if she turns into a rule, she cannot be at the seventh level, and there are great restrictions (for example: only in her own world can she have a strength close to the seventh level, in other worlds it may not be at the fifth level or even lower). If a creation god like the Casting Star Dragon King is at the seventh level, it can be understood, but Madoka is at the seventh level and cannot be understood.
It's annoying to watch the protagonist pretending to be incompetent.
Hua Qiangu, Bao Zheng (Young Man Bao Qingtian), Tang San (Douluo Dalu), Yang Jian (Baolian Lantern), Ryder (The Great Paw Team), Jackie Chan (The Adventures of Jackie Chan), Lin Daiyu (Dream of Red Mansions), Xiao Yanzi (New Return of the Pearl) Princess), Xiao Dangjia, Bai Qian (Three Lives, Three Lives, Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms), Xiao Fugui, Fei Ge (Fei Ge and Little Buddha), Xiao Yan (Fights Break the Sphere), Iori Taiyi (Digimon), Nangong Wentian (Shen Wenjun), Di Ren Jie (Detective Di Renjie), Da Gu (Ultraman Tiga), Yue Fei (Yue Fei Biography) The author can write about these characters, Winx (Lei'er), Corpse Brother (Bai Xiaofei), Logan (Wolverine), Iori Yagami ( The King of Fighters), Deadpool, Warcraft, Zhou Weiqing (Dzi Bead Transformation), Liu Bei (Romance of the Three Kingdoms), Zeus, Chao Gai (Water Margin), Asakura Yewang, Miyanaga Saki, Yakumo Purple, Cang Yue, I hope the author can write about these characters
It makes no sense to write this novel like this.
The author has recently written about a world that few people have read, and women's clothing, ×.... We should write about some mythological worlds (Westward Journey, Journey to the West to Conquer Demons, and Zhu Xian), these worlds are the mainstream. At the same time, there are obvious problems with the division of the strength of the characters in the novel. The characters in the Western or some worlds are too strong...
Let me tell you the problem
1. The jump in the division of strength is too large and problematic, and people become immortals in an instant. 2. There is no main line, which leads to civil war in the later period and has always been hydrological (the main line here can actually consider the elimination of reincarnation time travellers) 3. The protagonist has a weak character and is not very strong (most people nowadays like cool novels, this is my own opinion) 4. The protagonist is just a bastard. He takes good and evil too seriously. He can lead evil sects or reincarnations into his world to destroy it. Isn't this just guiding? 5. You can learn a little bit from other books, as long as you can write your own flavor.
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Official(91)Scraped 4d ago
About the strength of the character.
I think strength should not only depend on how strong the character is, but also the rules and regulations of the world. For example, One Punch Man, Saitama is invincible. But if he goes to another world, will his invincibility still exist? Goku and Beerus almost destroyed the universe. Their strength relies on the control of Qi (and it is still very superficial). If a monk who practices Qi is randomly thrown into their world, wouldn't they be invincible? Moreover, Sun Wukong also died of a heart attack. I hope the author can be more rigorous.
The difference between gods and immortals
God, often as a kind of belief, exists all over the world. It can be a living creature or a natural error. According to literature, gods in China are divided into three types: "gods of heaven, earth, and humans and ghosts." There are also differences between them. There are two types of gods among them: innate gods and acquired gods. There are many who worship gods innately, such as Sanqing, and those who become gods later in life. Immortals are people in ancient Han mythology who are said to have special abilities and can live forever. Immortals, unlike gods, have innate existence. Immortals can only be formed through acquired cultivation. Therefore, they are fundamentally different and have different starting points. Gods are reincarnated after death, and immortals are those who practice immortality. The real difference between immortals and gods is that immortals cultivate through life, while gods teach through death. Immortals are often associated with Taoism. As for gods, they become gods only after death. The power of gods is innate, while the power of immortals comes through practice. This is the biggest difference between gods and immortals. God holds the priesthood, accepts the prayers of believers, and gives blessings to believers. Immortals live as long as heaven and earth, and are free from things.
The novel should be divided into specific realms
The first to fourth levels can be divided by the martial arts world realm, and the fifth and higher levels can be divided by the fairy world realm. The first level is Acquired, the second level is Innate, the third level is Grandmaster, Grand Master, Broken Void, the fourth level is Yuanshen, the fifth level is Entering the Dao (Earth Immortal), the sixth level is Celestial Immortal, the seventh level is Golden Immortal, the eighth level is Da Luo, and the ninth level is Hunyuan.
I can't imagine that Madoka Magica is level 7😓😓
If Madoka can be at the seventh level, then the Monkey King derived from Journey to the West should not only be at the fifth level, which is too low. The world view of the magical girl world is not grand, and it may not be as good as the derivative world of Journey to the West. Even if she turns into a rule, she cannot be at the seventh level, and there are great restrictions (for example: only in her own world can she have a strength close to the seventh level, in other worlds it may not be at the fifth level or even lower). If a creation god like the Casting Star Dragon King is at the seventh level, it can be understood, but Madoka is at the seventh level and cannot be understood.
It's annoying to watch the protagonist pretending to be incompetent.
Hua Qiangu, Bao Zheng (Young Man Bao Qingtian), Tang San (Douluo Dalu), Yang Jian (Baolian Lantern), Ryder (The Great Paw Team), Jackie Chan (The Adventures of Jackie Chan), Lin Daiyu (Dream of Red Mansions), Xiao Yanzi (New Return of the Pearl) Princess), Xiao Dangjia, Bai Qian (Three Lives, Three Lives, Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms), Xiao Fugui, Fei Ge (Fei Ge and Little Buddha), Xiao Yan (Fights Break the Sphere), Iori Taiyi (Digimon), Nangong Wentian (Shen Wenjun), Di Ren Jie (Detective Di Renjie), Da Gu (Ultraman Tiga), Yue Fei (Yue Fei Biography) The author can write about these characters, Winx (Lei'er), Corpse Brother (Bai Xiaofei), Logan (Wolverine), Iori Yagami ( The King of Fighters), Deadpool, Warcraft, Zhou Weiqing (Dzi Bead Transformation), Liu Bei (Romance of the Three Kingdoms), Zeus, Chao Gai (Water Margin), Asakura Yewang, Miyanaga Saki, Yakumo Purple, Cang Yue, I hope the author can write about these characters
It makes no sense to write this novel like this.
The author has recently written about a world that few people have read, and women's clothing, ×.... We should write about some mythological worlds (Westward Journey, Journey to the West to Conquer Demons, and Zhu Xian), these worlds are the mainstream. At the same time, there are obvious problems with the division of the strength of the characters in the novel. The characters in the Western or some worlds are too strong...
Let me tell you the problem
1. The jump in the division of strength is too large and problematic, and people become immortals in an instant. 2. There is no main line, which leads to civil war in the later period and has always been hydrological (the main line here can actually consider the elimination of reincarnation time travellers) 3. The protagonist has a weak character and is not very strong (most people nowadays like cool novels, this is my own opinion) 4. The protagonist is just a bastard. He takes good and evil too seriously. He can lead evil sects or reincarnations into his world to destroy it. Isn't this just guiding? 5. You can learn a little bit from other books, as long as you can write your own flavor.


























