Struggle in Valoran

Isn't the harem fragrant? →_→→_→

Wouldn't it be nice if the heroine had more stimulation and stimulation in the harem? Stay away from ntr.

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The male protagonist's character concept is not very good, and he prefers to be a Virgin bitch. When the protagonist's birthplace is chosen as a slave in the Noxus Arena, it has cut off the development of the Virgin. But the male protagonist still has such a character. It is difficult to emerge from the mire without being stained, to be in the clear water without being a monster. It is acceptable for the male protagonist to be kind, and it is acceptable to save Cherna. However, it is unacceptable to join Ai Xi and save refugees along the way. The author has no explanation for this. It is just that the plot requires the follow-up development, so he saved the refugees along the way. It's clearly written as a tribal war, but it's actually a clash of ideas. The male protagonist's actions are quite inconsistent with his character. It's like he talks about benevolence and morality while killing people. Generally speaking, the writing is really good. There are some flaws in the details. The male protagonist has his own actions but not his own soul. Many things are done for the needs of the plot.

Please author, please don't add anything like the harem, it has already affected the quality of the novel. Furthermore, the male protagonists in these recent chapters have been a bit too mundane. Even the heir of the Dragon Prince, his arrogance and domineering were gone, but he was becoming more and more stupid. To be honest, the quality of this novel is seriously declining.

The male protagonist's character always feels weird. After going through so many things, he still feels like he hasn't grown much.

I think it's okay, the subject matter is very good, and it attracts many masturbation friends including me (all of them understand it), but I suggest the author not to make the protagonist feel like a lonely star. He just wants to learn magic and go home. There are so many troubles on the way there, and it feels emotional. The connection between plots is a bit stiff. For example, the protagonist wants to go to Shurima, but after meeting Ashe, he provides all kinds of help. Then it feels like the author wants to write about places other than Freljord, and creates a sword demon, and then the protagonist has to leave. It feels very deliberate. How can there be so many Heroes and protagonists can be encountered casually. It doesn't matter if they are basically certain ones, such as Garen, Jarvan IV, Ashe, etc. These heroes have fixed places to appear. Sword Demon, Volibear and the like are completely unnecessary. Then there are I feel that the plot is not ups and downs enough. There is a small explosive point every few chapters, and then there are several small explosive points and then a big explosive point. After reading it for a long time, I will get tired of reading. If it is still like this in the next dozens of chapters, then my love for League of Legends will not allow me to continue to support the author. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

It was going well in the early stage as usual, but it suddenly exploded.

Haoming used his mind power to control Payne's hands and feet and twisted them. Payne's hands and feet were twisted at 180 degrees. Payne realized his situation and flew away. Haoming saw Payne flying towards the distance and followed him. In the cave, Uchiha Itachi looked at Hao Ming leaving and thought to himself, I also used illusions on him just now. Although it was not to the level of Tsukuyomi, it was not something that an average Kage-level powerhouse could break away from, and yet he didn't react. What's going on? Even Payne, who has the Samsara Eye, would not be able to react to his affected area. I'm going to follow you and see how the battle turns out. Then Uchiha Itachi jumped onto the tree and ran towards the place where Hoshiaki and Pain were fighting. Haoming chased Payne in front of him and found that he suddenly stopped, and Haoming also stopped behind him. I thought you were going to run off somewhere. Payne turned back to look at Haoming and said, "That trick can be used here." Haoming heard Payne talking to himself, what was that move? Will these things work for me? What's the use of something that can't even break through my defenses? Then Haoming rushed towards Payne, opening his palms at the same time, and a ** zone appeared ten meters around. It turns out that Haoming compressed the ten meters of air around him to a point in front of his palm. In this way, as long as the back palm is slightly closer to Payne, and Haoming loosens control of the telekinesis in front of the palm, the compressed air will rush out crazily. Forming something similar to an air cannon, this move was something Haoming came up with on a whim just now, feeling the wind pressure around him. How powerful is it to implement this move now? Just as Haoming flew towards Payne, Payne raised his hands. Earth explodes and stars explode! Haoming felt a sudden suction force appear above him, and his body flew uncontrollably towards the sky. Just when Haoming was sucked into the sky, there was no evidence in the sky, a stone ball about one meter long. Haoming was adsorbed on this stone ball. Haoming slapped the stone ball with his palm, and the air in his hand exploded instantly. The stone ball, which was about one meter long, was also exploded. And the broken stones scattered wildly around, and many even hit Haoming, but they were all blocked by Haoming's telepathy shield. But after breaking the stone, Haoming felt that the suction force was still there. It looked like Payne. Since he couldn't solve the suction force, he went to deal with the person who launched the ninjutsu. Haoming used his mind power to support himself so as not to be sucked away by this suction force. Then he rushed towards Payne. Book Recommendation (Nian Li Haoming)

I look forward to the author's subsequent performance and write slowly to ensure quality.