Questioning the Great Xia Martial God? There is a Way to Die!
by Chaolu
About This Novel
Su Qiu traveled through the fantasy world and became the Martial God of Great Xia. In the 341st year of the Extraordinary Calendar, when he opened his eyes, he saw that the country was in turmoil, with internal and external troubles; powerful enemies were waiting around, and demons were raging; alien beasts were ferocious, and the demon blood was overwhelming, and they vowed to destroy our Great Xia. In the year 1341 of the Extraordinary Calendar, he saw that everyone in Daxia was like a dragon. But the demon is crazy, the soul clan is weird, and the true god is indifferent. The holy angel race is as cold as gods; the cold-blooded mechanical race is as cold as iron. All the races in the sky are coming fiercely, refusing to give the human race any chance of life. In the year 2141 of the Extraordinary Calendar, he also saw that all the geniuses of the human race came out, and all the people practiced martial arts and entered the extraordinary world; they fought all over the wasteland and stained the nine heavens with blood, just to protect the fire of Great Xia... All nations hated him. He died and lived for the human race for tens of millions of years! The ten thousand years before the Extraordinary Calendar were the Spark Calendar in which the ancestors of all generations struggled to survive and turned themselves into sparks. He saw the continuous struggles of countless sages and the soul of Daxia that never surrenders! Spark Calendar Years Before. He also saw that the human emperor ruled the world, and all the tribes came to court; the Great Xia prospered, and the king ruled over the heavens... The thousand-year dream, is it the sun and the moon, or is it just a dream? Su Qiu faces destiny and steps into reincarnation; slays evil spirits with the sword and reshapes the way of heaven! He wants the world to be peaceful and the human race to be prosperous; he wants the light of Great Xia to shine in the heavens!
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Official(37)Scraped 6d ago
Nice writing and matching illustrations. Come on, work hard, strive for constant updates, don't delay updates, good luck is waiting for you, and the best writer of the year will eventually belong to you.
Typical male videos
The illustrations in the article are good, and the plot is also a slap-in-the-face type of article. If you don't accept it, you will do it. Anyway, you will feel happy, and it will be destroyed if you don't agree with it. Well, come on!
Brother, if you call me boss, I will throw away my brain and help you read it. If you ask me to give you some advice, I will put my brain back and tell the truth. First of all, cool articles have an audience. You may feel good reading them at first, but you will get tired of them after reading too much. Nowadays, books like yours are everywhere in the street, and online articles are all the same. People like me have already passed this stage. Under normal circumstances, I would never click on a book with a title like yours. Since you have already written so much, I won't say much more. Second point, although your main audience is no longer bookworms, I still want to mention a few words. The most basic writing style is the details of language, such as punctuation marks. Don't always use commas, but learn to use semicolons and periods; such as the rhythm of long and short sentences. Many online articles have the sentence pattern of "what, what, what, what", which is too long and awkward. If the main clause and subordinate clause have the same subject, they can be changed to "what, what, how". "What kind of thing"; such as character language, vulgar language style, streamlined language style, gorgeous language style, etc. The most important thing is that the author's own language habits cannot be forced to cover all characters. All characters and narrations have the same style, and even the mouth and catchphrases are the same, which is inappropriate. Similarly, the character's behavioral habits, possible thinking habits of the character, and the corresponding plot all need to be carefully considered. The author needs to enter the character's psychology to think about what the character might be like and why is it like this? All these require you to read more excellent online articles and learn from them. The third point is that plot logic is the framework of the article, and it is also the most important point. It requires a bit of common sense. Many works have been criticized because of this poor implementation. For example, in your article, I couldn't finish the first chapter: Ninth-grade Martial God, the only ninth-grade Martial God in your country, is such an awesome existence. Instead of fawning over him and showing no favoritism to him, your country's officials and patriarchs even try to embarrass him. Isn't this just an idiot? Normal people must be coaxing people to pay for it, so shouldn't nuclear weapons be taken good care of? And if we treat our own people so badly in front of people from other countries, the country's image is no longer good? What if the God of War gets angry and moves to another country? How can such an idiot sit in such a high position? I forced myself to comfort myself, maybe my predecessor was a coward and was used to being bullied, and everyone was used to bullying him, and then I saw you, a majestic ninth-grade Martial God, died after being stabbed in the back by Bai Yueguang? I comforted myself that I might have been seriously injured due to being attacked, and then I read that a group of idiots besieged the protagonist... I was tired and didn't want to make excuses anymore. These characters are idiots. You know, this is called poison. The fourth point is the icing on the cake. After the basic framework is set up, we must consider how to create high-IQ characters, how to write conspiracies well and integrate them into the outline, how to write coincidences, how to write twists and turns and vivid battle scenes, how to write hard-core details, which will naturally make readers feel that this book is awesome: fantasy requires Taoist culture, and spiritual practice requires knowing the scriptures. Pulse and acupuncture points, for weapon training you need to know something about materials and metallurgical machinery. If you want to practice close combat, not to mention traditional martial arts, you should at least know something about mixed martial arts. For fortune telling and feng shui, you need to know a bit about numerology. You need to understand some of this mess like the Book of Changes, Liu Ren Qi Men Tai Yi, Zodiac 12 Palaces, Qing Sang Jade Ruler Sutra. If you want to write about the Western Bald Donkey, you have to understand the basics of Buddhism. If you want to write about the mind, you should also understand Taoist philosophy, right? I recommend you the Chinese Taoist Association. In short, no matter what you write, you have to collect information. Don't take it for granted, otherwise people who understand will know that there is a problem as soon as they read it. Look at those awesome online articles, mysticism, Western myths and legends, history, economics and politics, military, physical and chemical biology, information technology, at least the main fields involved are very rigorous, which requires long-term accumulation. The threshold for online writing is low, and more and more people are starting to write. Of course, the competition is becoming more and more fierce. If you want to make more money, of course you have to put more effort into it. Come on, I wish you write better and better.
No one is watching, so I can only shamelessly give it five stars.
New author, new book, please give me some advice~ This article is Gaowu Invincible. It is about the world of Gaowu where society was restarted three hundred years after modern society was destroyed. The full text highlights a "cool" aspect, never drags on, and adds a lot of jokes. The full text is also upgraded rapidly and is unrivaled in the world. Of course, the crisis of invasion by all races and some foreshadowings have also been added. All the previous foreshadowings will be revealed, and the new foreshadowings will be revealed within 10 chapters. The code is currently very dynamic🖖 Recruit some supporting actors/villains/female supporting characters Just write down your name and personality. If you have any incident that would be better, you can post it below👴
118,000 words, the first big plot is completed, please take a look
No one is watching, so I can only push it myself. The title of the book is a bit discouraging, and I am just trying to catch the popularity, so I beg my friends to take a look at the content. 1. The first big plot has ended. There are more than a dozen echoing places before and after, and all the big and small foreshadowings left in the previous part have been solved (except for a few hooks of the second big plot). Friends who are book lovers can take a look😊 2. For readers who pursue pure enjoyment, you can watch it directly and watch it quickly👴 3. Readers who pursue details can read more slowly, as there are many foreshadowings👴 4. Female readers, if you like to watch be sadomasochism, you can also watch it. There may be some bloody violence that may cause discomfort, but the emotions are definitely under control👴 5. I beg you guys to keep reading. I haven't passed PK1 and I have almost no recommendations. Every day I write a few collections here and there. Until now, 194 friends have added bookshelf (I don't know how many robots there are yet). Please give me some motivation. Please give me some monthly tickets and recommendation votes. It's okay if you don't have them. I'd like to ask you to keep reading. Thank you post below😷 1. Special thanks to book friend 202312246292 for his six recommendation votes every day for twenty consecutive days. 2. Thank you very much to book friends 20240722620742, Xiaobenben_Ea, Wuliang Your Father, Tianzun for their monthly votes and many recommendation votes for their support! 3. Thank you very much to Vast Misty Wave~, Cultivation is a Lifetime Achievement, Chen QQ, Lord of Elements [True Love Fan], Farian, Pengpeng_Bb, The Dog Sitting on the Rooftop in a Daze, The Unobtainable Rose, and friends for their large number of recommendation votes! 4. Thank you very much for the comments and support from Siweihuoyu, Duliu Shen, Dog Sitting on the Rooftop in a Daze, Farian and others! Other big guys have not listed them one by one 😊Thank you! 5. I am very grateful to Stressed_Eb, 20240401806_AD, and Mr. Yue Qinghua for their suggestions on organizing ideas, especially book friend 20240401806_AD for their good ideas, which were used as a reference for the first big plot. 6. Finally, thank you Xiaoyao#小'bee' for the reward! Also, I would like to thank many book friends for their support, allowing me to continue writing. I will not list them one by one.
Yes, good luck to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง, here's a five-star review
Please read, please recommend, please vote for me~
I beg you guys, please use your little hands to get rich, and cast a few votes. It's been almost a month since I started writing this book. I haven't recommended it since I tried the water. I read it many times a day, but this collection just won't go up. I beg you guys, if you can like this book, please vote a few times. Thank you! I'm so grateful! Finally, if you are a passing blogger, please give me a thumbs up😊
All the comments that other people should give have been given.
My evaluation is very good, but there is still room for improvement. I feel that the plot may move faster, but after all, it is a cool novel. My uncle said he liked it very much
The article has novel ideas, original themes, clear paragraphs, strange plots, ups and downs, clear main lines, fascinating, and extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious, every sentence is a classic, and it is a model that our generation should learn from. His articles are full of insights and every word is precious. It makes people deeply realize the benefits of opening a book. He has become a good teacher and friend that everyone has never met. Everyone is looking forward to the continuous publication of his masterpieces.
Very well written. Come on, author!
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Official(37)Scraped 6d ago
Nice writing and matching illustrations. Come on, work hard, strive for constant updates, don't delay updates, good luck is waiting for you, and the best writer of the year will eventually belong to you.
Typical male videos
The illustrations in the article are good, and the plot is also a slap-in-the-face type of article. If you don't accept it, you will do it. Anyway, you will feel happy, and it will be destroyed if you don't agree with it. Well, come on!
Brother, if you call me boss, I will throw away my brain and help you read it. If you ask me to give you some advice, I will put my brain back and tell the truth. First of all, cool articles have an audience. You may feel good reading them at first, but you will get tired of them after reading too much. Nowadays, books like yours are everywhere in the street, and online articles are all the same. People like me have already passed this stage. Under normal circumstances, I would never click on a book with a title like yours. Since you have already written so much, I won't say much more. Second point, although your main audience is no longer bookworms, I still want to mention a few words. The most basic writing style is the details of language, such as punctuation marks. Don't always use commas, but learn to use semicolons and periods; such as the rhythm of long and short sentences. Many online articles have the sentence pattern of "what, what, what, what", which is too long and awkward. If the main clause and subordinate clause have the same subject, they can be changed to "what, what, how". "What kind of thing"; such as character language, vulgar language style, streamlined language style, gorgeous language style, etc. The most important thing is that the author's own language habits cannot be forced to cover all characters. All characters and narrations have the same style, and even the mouth and catchphrases are the same, which is inappropriate. Similarly, the character's behavioral habits, possible thinking habits of the character, and the corresponding plot all need to be carefully considered. The author needs to enter the character's psychology to think about what the character might be like and why is it like this? All these require you to read more excellent online articles and learn from them. The third point is that plot logic is the framework of the article, and it is also the most important point. It requires a bit of common sense. Many works have been criticized because of this poor implementation. For example, in your article, I couldn't finish the first chapter: Ninth-grade Martial God, the only ninth-grade Martial God in your country, is such an awesome existence. Instead of fawning over him and showing no favoritism to him, your country's officials and patriarchs even try to embarrass him. Isn't this just an idiot? Normal people must be coaxing people to pay for it, so shouldn't nuclear weapons be taken good care of? And if we treat our own people so badly in front of people from other countries, the country's image is no longer good? What if the God of War gets angry and moves to another country? How can such an idiot sit in such a high position? I forced myself to comfort myself, maybe my predecessor was a coward and was used to being bullied, and everyone was used to bullying him, and then I saw you, a majestic ninth-grade Martial God, died after being stabbed in the back by Bai Yueguang? I comforted myself that I might have been seriously injured due to being attacked, and then I read that a group of idiots besieged the protagonist... I was tired and didn't want to make excuses anymore. These characters are idiots. You know, this is called poison. The fourth point is the icing on the cake. After the basic framework is set up, we must consider how to create high-IQ characters, how to write conspiracies well and integrate them into the outline, how to write coincidences, how to write twists and turns and vivid battle scenes, how to write hard-core details, which will naturally make readers feel that this book is awesome: fantasy requires Taoist culture, and spiritual practice requires knowing the scriptures. Pulse and acupuncture points, for weapon training you need to know something about materials and metallurgical machinery. If you want to practice close combat, not to mention traditional martial arts, you should at least know something about mixed martial arts. For fortune telling and feng shui, you need to know a bit about numerology. You need to understand some of this mess like the Book of Changes, Liu Ren Qi Men Tai Yi, Zodiac 12 Palaces, Qing Sang Jade Ruler Sutra. If you want to write about the Western Bald Donkey, you have to understand the basics of Buddhism. If you want to write about the mind, you should also understand Taoist philosophy, right? I recommend you the Chinese Taoist Association. In short, no matter what you write, you have to collect information. Don't take it for granted, otherwise people who understand will know that there is a problem as soon as they read it. Look at those awesome online articles, mysticism, Western myths and legends, history, economics and politics, military, physical and chemical biology, information technology, at least the main fields involved are very rigorous, which requires long-term accumulation. The threshold for online writing is low, and more and more people are starting to write. Of course, the competition is becoming more and more fierce. If you want to make more money, of course you have to put more effort into it. Come on, I wish you write better and better.
No one is watching, so I can only shamelessly give it five stars.
New author, new book, please give me some advice~ This article is Gaowu Invincible. It is about the world of Gaowu where society was restarted three hundred years after modern society was destroyed. The full text highlights a "cool" aspect, never drags on, and adds a lot of jokes. The full text is also upgraded rapidly and is unrivaled in the world. Of course, the crisis of invasion by all races and some foreshadowings have also been added. All the previous foreshadowings will be revealed, and the new foreshadowings will be revealed within 10 chapters. The code is currently very dynamic🖖 Recruit some supporting actors/villains/female supporting characters Just write down your name and personality. If you have any incident that would be better, you can post it below👴
118,000 words, the first big plot is completed, please take a look
No one is watching, so I can only push it myself. The title of the book is a bit discouraging, and I am just trying to catch the popularity, so I beg my friends to take a look at the content. 1. The first big plot has ended. There are more than a dozen echoing places before and after, and all the big and small foreshadowings left in the previous part have been solved (except for a few hooks of the second big plot). Friends who are book lovers can take a look😊 2. For readers who pursue pure enjoyment, you can watch it directly and watch it quickly👴 3. Readers who pursue details can read more slowly, as there are many foreshadowings👴 4. Female readers, if you like to watch be sadomasochism, you can also watch it. There may be some bloody violence that may cause discomfort, but the emotions are definitely under control👴 5. I beg you guys to keep reading. I haven't passed PK1 and I have almost no recommendations. Every day I write a few collections here and there. Until now, 194 friends have added bookshelf (I don't know how many robots there are yet). Please give me some motivation. Please give me some monthly tickets and recommendation votes. It's okay if you don't have them. I'd like to ask you to keep reading. Thank you post below😷 1. Special thanks to book friend 202312246292 for his six recommendation votes every day for twenty consecutive days. 2. Thank you very much to book friends 20240722620742, Xiaobenben_Ea, Wuliang Your Father, Tianzun for their monthly votes and many recommendation votes for their support! 3. Thank you very much to Vast Misty Wave~, Cultivation is a Lifetime Achievement, Chen QQ, Lord of Elements [True Love Fan], Farian, Pengpeng_Bb, The Dog Sitting on the Rooftop in a Daze, The Unobtainable Rose, and friends for their large number of recommendation votes! 4. Thank you very much for the comments and support from Siweihuoyu, Duliu Shen, Dog Sitting on the Rooftop in a Daze, Farian and others! Other big guys have not listed them one by one 😊Thank you! 5. I am very grateful to Stressed_Eb, 20240401806_AD, and Mr. Yue Qinghua for their suggestions on organizing ideas, especially book friend 20240401806_AD for their good ideas, which were used as a reference for the first big plot. 6. Finally, thank you Xiaoyao#小'bee' for the reward! Also, I would like to thank many book friends for their support, allowing me to continue writing. I will not list them one by one.
Yes, good luck to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง, here's a five-star review
Please read, please recommend, please vote for me~
I beg you guys, please use your little hands to get rich, and cast a few votes. It's been almost a month since I started writing this book. I haven't recommended it since I tried the water. I read it many times a day, but this collection just won't go up. I beg you guys, if you can like this book, please vote a few times. Thank you! I'm so grateful! Finally, if you are a passing blogger, please give me a thumbs up😊
All the comments that other people should give have been given.
My evaluation is very good, but there is still room for improvement. I feel that the plot may move faster, but after all, it is a cool novel. My uncle said he liked it very much
The article has novel ideas, original themes, clear paragraphs, strange plots, ups and downs, clear main lines, fascinating, and extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious, every sentence is a classic, and it is a model that our generation should learn from. His articles are full of insights and every word is precious. It makes people deeply realize the benefits of opening a book. He has become a good teacher and friend that everyone has never met. Everyone is looking forward to the continuous publication of his masterpieces.
Very well written. Come on, author!
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