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Dear author, after reading about 40 chapters, I discovered some problems based on my years of experience in reading articles: ①Character. Let's just say that the heroine has awakened after living for more than ten years. She knows that her family will change in the future. Facing a half-sister who is considered vicious from her perspective, she has been framed many times. Why not get to the bottom of it or prepare in advance? Even if it is to adjust the monitoring, get a voice recorder or something. Speaking of the male protagonist, he is obviously a cold-hearted and cold-blooded Buddhist, but he actually lets the rumors about the original female protagonist spread everywhere because of the female protagonist's face? How could you be kind to a person who clearly knows that he often talks bad things about the heroine behind her back? To make sense, it should be for the sake of the heroine's "brother". Let's not talk about how the original heroine's fans' comments spread, even the friends in the male protagonist's circle think that they are a good match. The hero will not refute this matter in front of the male protagonist, which is not consistent with the character of Buddha at all! In a family where the heroine has raised her brother for 18 years, does it mean that her brother has no IQ and cannot be seen as a cheap slander? There is also the original heroine, whose methods are very childish every time, and she has no abilities that the original heroine should have. She just succeeds every time with a little effort, allowing other characters to follow her brain. The most annoying thing about reading novels is the various supporting characters who lose their wits as soon as they encounter the plot. Being brainless will no longer work in 2024! ! ! ②Plot. Nowadays, maybe because of all the bad things in real life, everyone no longer wants to see all kinds of silly, sweet, stupid and pig-like characters on the Internet, and prefers cool articles and slap-in-the-face articles. If this book has this kind of idea, my suggestion is that it deserves its place! ! ! To give a character such a personality, there must be a supporting plot to enrich the character's image. First of all, don't delay. For example, the original heroine slapped herself and said it was the heroine. My brother believed it and only believed it. It was so brainless. He obviously had surveillance but didn't watch it, so he just let it go. It really made the reader feel like a stick in the throat, like a thorn in the back, sitting on pins and needles, and walking on thin ice! ! ! Don't pick up this kind of plot and put it down gently! ! ! Although the love story between the male and female protagonists is the main line, other plots must also be taken into consideration! The advice is: Don't cast your supporting roles mindlessly! No incomplete plot! ! ! Virtue deserves his position! ! ! ! ! !

Passing by, I read the last sentence of the introduction about throwing Buddhist beads in the trash can, and people were numb.

There are so many typos, can't you pay attention to them?