
Love Summer and Breeze
About This Novel
Qingyu said that there is nothing more humble than secret love. Excerpt 1: Qingyu looked at his deskmate and said, are you angry because I did better than you in the test again this time? The deskmate glanced at Qing Yu and said, next time the first place will be mine. Excerpt 2: He gave me a bottle of mango milkshake, but I'm allergic to mangoes. Forget it, throw away the milkshake and keep the bottle. Fragment 3: Qingyu said that in daily memory, he likes black, he hates eating carrots, and he kind of likes eating strawberry-flavored candies. ... Come to Yuewen to read more of my works.
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Official(3)Scraped 15d ago
It's just random, don't worry about it
Dear author, let me make some suggestions. Just read them and don't take them to heart. I am not the audience for this type of article, so my evaluation will not be objective and may be changed later. 1. Issues with punctuation and paragraphing. Your punctuation and paragraphing are really random, which makes my obsessive-compulsive disorder as uncomfortable as eating glass particles. I hope it can be optimized; 2. The novel cannot be like a running account. This seems too boring. You have to be more specific and more specific. That's all for now. I'm also a novice author, and I know writing is not easy. Come on!
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Official(3)Scraped 15d ago
It's just random, don't worry about it
Dear author, let me make some suggestions. Just read them and don't take them to heart. I am not the audience for this type of article, so my evaluation will not be objective and may be changed later. 1. Issues with punctuation and paragraphing. Your punctuation and paragraphing are really random, which makes my obsessive-compulsive disorder as uncomfortable as eating glass particles. I hope it can be optimized; 2. The novel cannot be like a running account. This seems too boring. You have to be more specific and more specific. That's all for now. I'm also a novice author, and I know writing is not easy. Come on!










