Whirlwind Girl: Restart
About This Novel
There are many people gathered in the airport lobby, including reporters and people picking up the plane. The people picking up the plane are all holding the same sign. Who are you waiting for? Which star is it? Songbai Gym was having its annual gym exchange. A man and a woman walked into the gym, and a voice sounded, "Long time no see, are you all okay?" This familiar voice shocked the students of the gym... What stories will happen in Anyang, where Yuan Martial Gyms gather together? The writing is scummy and there are too many dialogues. Please forgive me. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I'm sorry. (After watching the first season of Tornado Girl, I suddenly wanted to start writing a novel and add characters based on the original work. The content has nothing to do with the original work. Some of the content will involve the original work. The heroine is original. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Turn left.)
What Readers Think
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Official(10)Scraped 21d ago
Not good-looking at all, Baicao is such an innocent girl. How could it be like this? Author, you are just writing nonsense and not responsible at all. I don't like your novel. Bad review! Bad review! ! Bad review! ! !
The author would like to read:
Hello! Why do you say the author is great? Since you have read and collected it, it means you like reading this book. If you don't think it's good, don't read it. Do you know how hard it is to write a book? It takes time every day to draft, revise, and then send it to QQ for reading. It takes a lot of time. If you really like it, give the author a big encouragement. If you don't like it and hate it, please go out and turn left (walk slowly without seeing him off)! This is what I want to say to readers. The author is: Hello! I like the plot of your book very much, and I support you very much. I believe that there are many people who support the author like me. You must continue to work hard and make those who don't like to read your books stare, stare, mouth, and be dumbfounded!
Very Good!
The only problem is that there are too many dialogues. (I had an idea) I came up with something - a movie script.
The author is a primary school student~ If you don't know how to write, don't write. I'm afraid it's not a bad idea to tamper with the plot of Tornado Girl. Randomly adding characters to tamper with the CP plot. The writing is really bad~
The author's technique is immature, and some characters' values are questionable. I hope the author can improve them.
The author still needs to learn more about the description of characters, environment, etc.
The author is great, you can use more description instead of simple dialogue between characters. If I were to just watch the dialogue, I'd rather not watch it. You also need to learn to segment. In short, the revolution has not yet succeeded, and comrades still need to work hard.
He makes me want to vomit when he sees it, doesn't he know how to do it in vain? Composition written by primary school students
Randomly dismantling cp
Anyway, overall, it's not that good. There are too many dialogues between the characters, and the heroine is written as something else. I'm impressed.
The author greatly supports you↖(^ω^)↗Come on↖(^ω^)↗Come on↖(^ω^)↗Come on!
Rating
Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 21d ago
Not good-looking at all, Baicao is such an innocent girl. How could it be like this? Author, you are just writing nonsense and not responsible at all. I don't like your novel. Bad review! Bad review! ! Bad review! ! !
The author would like to read:
Hello! Why do you say the author is great? Since you have read and collected it, it means you like reading this book. If you don't think it's good, don't read it. Do you know how hard it is to write a book? It takes time every day to draft, revise, and then send it to QQ for reading. It takes a lot of time. If you really like it, give the author a big encouragement. If you don't like it and hate it, please go out and turn left (walk slowly without seeing him off)! This is what I want to say to readers. The author is: Hello! I like the plot of your book very much, and I support you very much. I believe that there are many people who support the author like me. You must continue to work hard and make those who don't like to read your books stare, stare, mouth, and be dumbfounded!
Very Good!
The only problem is that there are too many dialogues. (I had an idea) I came up with something - a movie script.
The author is a primary school student~ If you don't know how to write, don't write. I'm afraid it's not a bad idea to tamper with the plot of Tornado Girl. Randomly adding characters to tamper with the CP plot. The writing is really bad~
The author's technique is immature, and some characters' values are questionable. I hope the author can improve them.
The author still needs to learn more about the description of characters, environment, etc.
The author is great, you can use more description instead of simple dialogue between characters. If I were to just watch the dialogue, I'd rather not watch it. You also need to learn to segment. In short, the revolution has not yet succeeded, and comrades still need to work hard.
He makes me want to vomit when he sees it, doesn't he know how to do it in vain? Composition written by primary school students
Randomly dismantling cp
Anyway, overall, it's not that good. There are too many dialogues between the characters, and the heroine is written as something else. I'm impressed.
The author greatly supports you↖(^ω^)↗Come on↖(^ω^)↗Come on↖(^ω^)↗Come on!
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