After Dressing up as an Abandoned Concubine, I Was Favored by Powerful Officials

After Dressing up as an Abandoned Concubine, I Was Favored by Powerful Officials

by Ineffective Breathing

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Dream Glazed Shadow21d ago

Dressed as an abandoned concubine, the system said I could live for three chapters

Shen Zhiyi woke up due to the fishy sweetness in her throat. Consciousness returned, severe pain radiated from his limbs, and in his ears was the suppressed sob of the maid Cui'er: "Miss, please don't sleep... Please, don't sleep... The regent, the prince, he wants to divorce you, and also ordered you to be sent to this other hospital to fend for yourself... This, this is going to cost you your life!" What regent? What abandonment? Didn't she just finish an operation and fall asleep in the duty room due to exhaustion? The next second, memories that did not belong to her crazily flooded into her mind - Shen Zhiyi, the legitimate daughter of Prime Minister Dasheng, was accused of being an "unfortunate daughter", killed her biological mother, and was rejected by her family. An imperial edict granted her marriage to Xiao Jingheng, the cold-faced regent who held sway over the entire court. On the wedding day, Xiao Jingheng walked away without even lifting his hijab. However, in March, a letter of divorce was delivered, and she was charged with "childlessness, unworthiness, and bad tongue." She was then escorted to this remote house and imprisoned here. And last night, someone sneaked in and fed her a bowl of poison. The original owner has passed away. She is Shen Zhiyi, a doctor of modern Chinese medicine, who slipped into an ancient novel that she casually flipped through, and became the cannon fodder and abandoned concubine who was given a box lunch at the beginning of the chapter! According to the plot, she would quietly "die" of illness in this villa within three days. The strong desire to survive made her struggle to get up, but she coughed up more black blood, and her eyesight turned black. [Tip--Strong will to survive is detected, and the 'fate correction system' is activated. [Host: Shen Zhiyi (dying state)] [Main mission: Survive. Current survival probability: 0.3%] [Newbie tip: Your 'husband', Prince Regent Xiao Jingheng, will pass by the outskirts of the courtyard in an hour. This is your only chance of survival. [Task reward: basic survival material package. A cold mechanical sound sounded in my mind. Shen Zhiyi bit the tip of his tongue hard, and the severe pain brought him a moment of clarity. The only chance of survival? The man who ordered her to be divorced and left here to die? She held her body in severe pain and looked at the bronze mirror. The woman in the mirror had a pale complexion and her lips were stained with blood. Only her eyes were burning with a calm flame that was tempered in desperate situations and did not belong to this era. No, she can't die. Whether it was for the unknown grievances of the original owner of this body, or for herself. "Tui'er," she said in a hoarse voice, with every word full of passion, "help me wash up and find the plainest clothes. Then, help me to... The courtyard gate." "Miss! Your body..." "Do as you are told." Shen Zhiyi's tone was calm, but with unquestionable power, "If you want to live, do as I say." An hour later, the dilapidated wooden door in the other courtyard, which was almost never opened, was slowly pushed open from the inside. In the cold spring weather, Shen Zhiyi was wrapped in thin old clothes and leaning against the door. His face was as pale as paper, but his back was straight. In the distance, the regent's car-driven honor guard was slowly approaching. She knew she was betting. Bet on the one in 10,000 possibility, bet that in the man's heart, there may be a trace of curiosity about the life and death of the "nominal princess", or some value for gaming. The sound of wheels approaches. She raised her eyes, peering through the morning mist and looking precisely at the black carriage. Jamel Xiao, here I come.

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书友20260226587226d ago

It looks so good, I can't stop looking so good. The heroine is so pampered.

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书友20260226587228d ago

"Intellectual" survival in desperate situations

1. What touches people at the beginning is not the setting of "threading books" itself, but the heroine Shen Zhiyi's "sense of contrast" and "desire to survive." 1. The ultimate contrast in identity: * Modern: She is the youngest postdoctoral fellow at the University of Traditional Chinese Medicine and is synonymous with rationality, science, and rigor. * Ancient times: She was an abandoned concubine who was slandered, abandoned, and about to be executed. She was synonymous with despair, helplessness, and being at the mercy of others. *Perception: This huge gap creates strong dramatic tension. Readers will instinctively look forward to how a highly educated woman with modern thinking will use her knowledge and wisdom to fight back against the desperate situation in ancient times. 2. Embodiment of the desire to survive: * Shen Zhiyi did not cry like a traditional Silly Baitian, nor did she immediately turn on the "Gold Finger" invincibility mode. When facing death, she experienced a psychological process from "absurdity" to "fear" to "calm calculation". * Reflection: She chose "wine" instead of "rope", this detail is very wonderful. This is not just survival, but also her instinctive reaction to toxicology as a doctor of traditional Chinese medicine - as long as death is not instantaneous, there is an antidote and there is life. This kind of calmness based on professionalism is more convincing and convincing than the simple "protagonist halo". 2. Analysis of key points and highlights 1. The opening chapter is high-energy and has excellent rhythm control (corresponding to "explosion at the beginning") * Highlights: There is no nonsense in the first chapter, starting directly from "death". * Environment description: The "smell of mold, blood, and cold straw" at the beginning instantly pulls the reader into the depressing and desperate woodshed environment. * Pre-conflict: There is no lengthy description of the time travel process. When you wake up, you are in a desperate situation. The woman comes in with a rope and poisoned wine, and the conflict is full. * Psychological description: The heroine's psychological transformation from "who am I" to "where am I" to "I want to live" is very rapid and reasonable, without any sloppiness. 2. The introduction of the system is just right * Highlights: The system does not appear the first second the heroine wakes up, but appears when she faces a life-and-death decision and her desire to survive reaches its peak. * Timing: This "survival from desperate situation" setting makes the system seem less abrupt and more like the last chance given to her by fate. * Setting: The system prompts are concise and powerful (countdown, tasks, punishment), which increases the sense of urgency and also clarifies the heroine's next goal - to survive tonight. 3. The detailed description is authentic and credible * Highlights: The author's description of the senses is very delicate. * Touch: cold straw, rough hemp rope, cold wine flask. * Smell: musty smell, bloody smell, stench of rotten food. * Pain: sharp pain that tears the skull, dull pain that makes the bones scream. *Perception: These details allow readers to empathize with the heroine's pain and despair, and thus look forward to her counterattack. 3. Summary This chapter, as the opening chapter, "exploded" very successfully. It not only established a strong sense of substitution, but also successfully created an image of a smart, calm, and professional heroine.

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Dream Glazed Shadow21d ago

There is a shortage of books, any subject matter is fine! ! !

Brother, please read. There is a shortage of books, like the Dragon King or something like that. Don't recommend it to me if you don't have brain flow.

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