Douluo: Traveling Through Huo Yuhao, Starting with Yao Lao

How about using Bone Spirit Cold Fire to suppress Ma Xiaotao's evil fire? Gu Yuena, Brigitte, Don't let go of the Demon Queen, Lan Fuzi, and the Demon Emperor

The heroine is currently undecided. It is expected that Wang Donger and Wang Qiuer will be added to the cast. If you have any better suggestions, please put them forward at this level.

Huo Yuhao's practice of Fen Jue was indeed a bit advanced. I feel like the plot is pretty good so far, so please give it a boost, author!

I liked it very much, and I was planning to vote for it 20 times a month, but your second design suddenly shocked me. If you want to make money, just meet the needs of readers and don't make messy things. The addition of the fighting element made me like it very much. You are really speechless.

Excellent creativity and good writing style make this book stand out from the crowd of fans. It is very popular and has become the first one on my reading list. It looks quite interesting from the beginning. I have been looking forward to the choice of the protagonist and the arrangement of the author after this bad competition is over. However, , getting more and more watery, making me wonder if the author has changed. Until recently, Xu Tianji, a rascal, took a picture of my face, opened my mouth and poured the chicken soup into my stomach before I could react, and told me with real stomach pain, "What are you looking at, get out of here."

The first part is okay, but the later plot is a bit watered down. The funniest thing is a child's prophecy. Is this a joke? A child can see this, but can the Harpoon King see it? It's really speechless. You don't have the strength to pretend to be so realistic and don't know how to die. If Shrek the strong kills you, will the Noumenon Sect fight for you? Dead geniuses are nothing!

Overall, it's very good, but some characters are too dark, let's just say Tang San. Although his appearance is ugly, the writing in this book feels weird. If I have to say it, what others did is actually not very wrong, but it is wrong in front of the public because he violated their interests, the interests of gods. Needless to say, double standards. After all, who doesn't have double standards? If it is hypocritical, it is still quite hypocritical, a bit like that kind of ancient hypocrite, he did From the perspective of his family, he is right. Let's use an analogy. The wolf wants to eat the sheep, and then you protect the sheep. The wolf cannot eat the sheep and starves to death. So are you protecting the sheep or indirectly killing the wolf? So there is no right or wrong. It's just that you are not strong enough. Just like some rich second generation who committed a small crime and then used money to file a lawsuit. In the end, it is the victim's fault. Why not punish it in the eyes of the victim? But in the eyes of that rich second generation, he was filled with contempt and contempt. Why didn't he do that if he was strong enough? Although he doesn't have to do this, why should he listen to you? So reading novels is just for fun, don't let your brain get into it

Started amazingly, then mediocre, now poor The first time I read this book was when I had just finished the second grade assessment. At that time, I thought it was well written, the elements of fighting and breaking were integrated smoothly, and the plot adaptation also had highlights. The second time I read the book, it was updated to the chapter about Mr. Mu's death. I felt it was a little slow-paced, but the highlights are still there. This is the third time I read it. It has been updated to chapter 500. It gives me the feeling that either someone has changed the writing, or the previous outline only ended with leaving Shrek, with only nodes at the end, and the serial parts in the middle were written wherever I thought. It is completely messy. This is also the current situation of most Douluo fans. Once they leave the scope of the original plot, the ability to control the plot begins to collapse. I hope the author can continue writing, and let me see if this dish, which becomes more and more stale as it gets fried, can finally get back on track.

It is recommended not to have a female protagonist, it is of no use at all, except for falling in love. It can't help the protagonist, and it will be held back in various ways. The protagonist has to give the protagonist a chance to force things forward despite his talent and strength. It's okay to make friends, but it's not necessary for Chun Chun. If you have that time to fall in love, you might as well look for opportunities to improve your strength and repay your two masters. Otherwise, like Huo Yuhao in the original work, he talks so much about avenging his mother and restoring Electrolux, but then nothing happens and he just becomes a dog, which is disgusting. Also, wasn't the theme at the beginning of the original work that the protagonist embarks on the road to becoming stronger and avenges his mother (think about why the Lotus Lantern is so classic, Chen Xiang never forgets the responsibility of saving his mother), as the story goes on, the Tang Sect rises again. Since it is about the rise of the Tang Sect again, why not set Huo Yuhao as the last Tang Sect disciple, but other unrelated people. In addition to giving an admission quota. What about avenging my mother? I wrote it so passionately at the beginning, describing how much I felt wronged to my mother when I was a child. But later on, when others gave me some love and candy, I forgot about avenging my mother, and even changed my surname back to "Dai". It really used "love" to influence everything. When the Snow Emperor comes, he has to post "Holy Nebula" and like it. The character is completely collapsed. [Emot=default,20/] The Tang Sect borrowed chickens to lay eggs, Tang Ya went to become an evil soul master, and the Tang Sect developed back. Shrek basically gave him the title of Seven Monsters and the title of Pavilion Master and wanted to tie her to death without any effort. He was brainless. The grievances he and his mother suffered when they were young and the teacher Electrolux losing consciousness to save him, they just forget about it when they fall in love. In the end, I looked like I wanted nothing but love. I lost my soul, became a dog of the Tang family, and changed my name to Dai Yuhao. The whole family is happy, Electrolux and the three-eyed Jinmao want to die "filial piety" Therefore, you cannot be as powerful as the protagonist. If you want a heroine, you will be just like a pendant. The heroines in the original Douluo novels are all pendants, all love brains

This book is a classic novice novel. It has no content to speak of and is not exciting. After reading one or two chapters, I said I couldn't stand it anymore. The author's writing style is immature. Give it three stars as an encouragement to the author. I hope your writing style can be improved and the content enriched.