Struggle in the Red Mansion

Sorry, I don't have any bad thoughts about this book. I just read dozens of chapters and have doubts about the five- or six-year-old Jia Huan writing poems and selling books. Are all children in ancient times so awesome? Can such a big kid do these things? Don't others find it confusing? Well, these are just some of my crude thoughts, please forgive me!

The author has studied the Dream of Red Mansions thoroughly. According to some of the comments written by the author on the Dream of Red Mansions, I have a better understanding of the Dream of Red Mansions. The articles often quote the views of some red scholars, but the author is not limited to their views and always has his own ideas. After reading it, I feel refreshed and admired! [Emot=default,01/]But I want to say that there are some explanations in the novel about the protagonist's methods of doing things and dealing with people, which are a bit difficult to understand. Moreover, as a reader, I don't want to thoroughly understand the detailed explanation of the reasons for each step of the protagonist's plan. The author only needs to use an easy-to-understand method. It's enough for us to have a general understanding of the formula, and there is no need for long explanations. Of course, these are just some of my personal thoughts. The author can thoroughly explain the reasons for the protagonist's every step of the plan and has great cultural background. Come on, I will continue to read your novel .

I personally think that the author may dig a hole for Jia Huan to take the test, and there will be twists and turns. People who are hostile to Jia Huan may secretly cause trouble to frame Jia Huan. I still hope that Jia Huan can successfully win the test and save a lot of unnecessary plots. I hope that Jiuwu will be more generous and make the transition from the test level to smooth without any extraneous things. There is nothing wrong with the smooth transition of the plot. If the male protagonist takes many chapters to prepare for the Jinshi examination, will the plot of this book be too complicated? If the plot is too ups and downs, it may not be able to capture the readers' hearts. My personal opinion is that book friends should not criticize it.

The fierce food grab in Shushan, the house fight with Ci Zhen, the Jinling grain killing bureau, Bao and Dai drinking together, Jiangnan Vernacular Newspaper, Beijing Pravda... What I saw was the calm talent and will of a ten-year-old man with a thirty-year-old soul. What I saw was the true nature of a green pine man who distinguishes right from wrong and good and evil. What I saw was the author's reverie about the Red Mansion and his yearning for a happy ending. I like the plot inside and benefited a lot from the taste.

This is the only book on Red Mansions. I am obsessed with Red Mansions and am famous for the latest bastard affair. Overall this book is too depressing. For those who like reading cool articles, forget it. The plot is too slow. The structure is too small. Even though they all talk about one thing after another, after more than 600 chapters, the protagonist still fails to break through the Jia family. The plot is too far-fetched. Many arrangements in the court are too childish. They are almost based on words and have no real power. How can they have the aura to guide the country?

What kind of harem does the male protagonist have? What is the ending of Qin Keqing?

Since it is a fanfic of Red Mansion, and if I dare to write a fanfic of Red Mansion, the wording should be more rigorous, especially the parts involving poetry. However, there are several lines of poems in the book that are copied incorrectly, which is really unacceptable. The most obvious thing is that "talented people come from every generation". Anyone who has been to junior high school should know that "talented people" are the right ones. Of course, a few minor errors can be considered to be the author's clerical errors, but the logic of the palace fight part is really unreadable, and it feels like he is forcing a far-fetched reason for the palace fight scene! For example, Jia Huan and Jia She used a trick to retaliate against Mrs. Wang for not allowing her to go out to study. They made the other party fight back because of Mrs. Jia She's suggestion of dismissal. The book strongly emphasizes the fault of this statement, but it feels like forceful reasoning. A suggestion of punishment has such great power. I really want to ask where this energy comes from? Earlier, Jia She argued hard and argued so well that Wang was at a loss for words. How could the suggestion of dismissal become his own fault? Where is the reason? When it comes to relationships, everyone is competing to see who can say the most powerful words, which makes sense! In addition, people who have read Red Mansions will probably have their own opinions about the characters in it, whether they like or dislike it. However, the author has a strong sense of subjective evaluation in the book. Those who disagree with the author's views are difficult to follow. I do

The best elevated red building I have seen so far. The writing, rhythm, and fighting are both good. Recently, the plot is about to close the harem, and the evaluation has dropped a notch.

In the 22nd year of Yongzhi's reign, Huan asked the Qing emperor to come to his side, but failed. The emperor trapped him and his wife and concubines were sent to the Jiaofang Department. This book is finished.

Come here! Lock Jiuwu up for me and concentrate on coding!