Douluo: Martial Spirit White Tiger, I Am the White Emperor of Heaven

First of all, I awakened the White Tiger Martial Spirit and had my first spirit ring for 450 years. There is nothing much to say about this, but when I was arguing with Emperor Xingluo, the poems I said looked really embarrassing. Another one is the innate soul power, which is very rare in Dou Yi. Tang San, Feng Xiaotian, Bibi Dong, Oscar, Qian Renxue (Xiao Wu's transformed soul beast is not included). Now counting the protagonist, the question arises. When Dou Yi has very little innate soul power, the author writes that the emperor wants to send the protagonist who is innate soul power to a city full of killings? ? ? Euphemistically called sharpening the protagonist's character? Instead of thinking about how to protect this kind of top genius, he wants to devolve it when the protagonist is six years old? For training, you can go anywhere, even go to the killing city when you become an adult. But I was sent down at the age of six and am still only a tenth-level soul master. I don't understand this. It was explained in Chapter 17 of the article. How many Gintama coins were the compensation received? A skull of 60,000-year-old wisdom? As we all know, the skull of wisdom that has been condensed for 60,000 years first appeared in the Soul Master Elite Competition, and the soul bone was hunted and obtained by Bibi Dong personally. Then the question arises again, how did the protagonist's father get it? It only says that the Tiandou Empire compensated a number of silver soul coins and a 60,000-year-old skull. Can I understand that this 60,000-year-old skull belongs to the Tiandou Imperial Family? But in Douyi, even the titled Douluo doesn't have soul bones, such as Chrysanthemum Ghost Douluo, and soul bones are the treasure of the blood river. Therefore, this point is written very stupidly. They just launched a war, and there was the Spirit Hall as a mediator in the middle. Why should I compensate you for a very valuable skull? As for Wuhun Palace's compensation, it's even more impossible. Let's talk about the compensation for Silver Soul Coins. Anyone who has seen Douluo Yi knows that the currency Dou Yi has the largest face value is the Gold Soul Coin (except for rare gems). When the two countries are fighting and one side loses, the compensation is only a few Silver Soul Coins? Is it because the author doesn't know what a gold soul coin is? Or haven't you read the original work at all? In short, the author's normal thinking people cannot understand I won't say much about the rest, space is limited. I don't know how this book got an 8.5 Rating

Now is the testing period. Whether you can advance depends on the pursuit, so the pursuit is very important. I beg all readers to follow up. Thank you!

Originally, I was looking for something to read due to the book shortage, but this one was so embarrassing that I decided to quit after reading more than ten chapters. I wrote the book review here to keep everyone out of the blue. Of course, if this book opens low and sells high, you are welcome to write a chapter review and comment on me. I am willing to apologize. 1. The plot is too heavily filled with water. The cultivation and growth are all mentioned in one stroke, and then water is poured in. You can understand how many sentences with exclamation points and modified sentences are there; 2. There is no support from the plot structure to force the value. It is probably due to too much Douyin and not paying attention to rationality. You see those things and words on Douyin that make you passionate. They are supported by realistic plots and character expressions. I can't see the character of all the characters in your novel. They are all accompanying the protagonist to fight for blood; 3. The writing style is really bad. One sentence after another, Internet jokes and various idioms and words describing awesomeness are crammed in, and they are used frequently. For example, I saw "Strive to Save the Sky" three times on one page. It's really not a small border town, and it's really amazing that two little kids under ten years old can lead an army of ten thousand to fight each other. At this age, even the third young master of the Tang family dared not write about the beginning of love. The author has already begun to fall in love due to the war. It's not just that I don't have enough writing power and can't write good things, I either copy popular Internet sentences to make headlines or teenage love stories; 4. It's too hard to find something. If you want to do this kind of high-value and sensational thing, you can wear it from the Han Dynasty, Wei Jin, Sui and Tang Dynasties, and wear a man in his twenties and thirties to lead troops in war. Wearing a Douluo is still a form of starting from scratch, making a bunch of things that are not there. I really don't know if you have written an outline or a set of internal contents to evaluate yourself before writing a book.

If you have made Douluo so civilized, you won't be able to create even a single skill, right?

I have read so many Douluo fanfics, and I just want to ask why the protagonist wants to become a so-called "god" after traveling to Douluo Continent? As we all know, the "gods" of Douluo are almost the slimmest among the gods in many books. It doesn't matter that they are stronger humans. Why do they really want to become Douluo gods with a limit to their ability after being exposed to extraordinary power? Instead of taking this opportunity to grow into a being capable of destroying and creating the galaxy? (We say the Milky Way instead of the universe because we have an accurate idea of the size of the Milky Way) It's not an insult to this book, it's just that I read too many Douluo fanfics and this question came up, so I wanted to ask. I think this kind of author should be able to answer my doubts, thank you ๑•́₃•̀๑!

It's actually one star, but I understand everything. I started bragging about the White Emperor and the Holy Beast, and I got curious. Was this one produced by the same studio as the Phoenix book? ? They are all inexplicably arrogant, they are all inexplicably aloof, and they feel like they are pretending just for the sake of pretending. It doesn't matter where you eat the garbage before you travel. After you travel, you pick it up and it feels like it's both authentic and upright. I feel that after living for so many years and meeting a lot of people, I have never met such a person in real life. Is it stupid to time travel? ?

I've only read a little bit so far and can't stand it any longer. Let me talk about what I think is the poisonous point. 1. Character's wisdom As the city lord of a border city, is it strange to see a demoted prince with Contra protecting him? What's more, when the army is approaching, a general who has been guarding the border all year round does not encourage the morale of the soldiers, but follows the protagonist like a follower to the city wall to watch the enemy? 2. A little self-pleasure The Titled Douluo beside Qian Renxue is from Wuhun Palace. How could he intercept and kill your scouts on the battlefield? Attacking the city is just a means to stabilize the Crown Prince's position. Because the Titled Douluo was exposed in the Battle of Fudaidian, is it possible? 3. The wording is not appropriate It really feels like the author rushed to use some words he saw on Douyin, and even registered them as death warriors first. Climbing first refers to the merit of being the first to climb the enemy's wall. It is only for the attacker. Why do you, a defender, climb first? Does the enemy have a wall? Moreover, the author said that the 30,000 troops who attack the city and the 10,000 defenders represent a disparity in strength (of course there may be a gap in military strength, but there is still a Contra on the defender side). Under normal circumstances where the individual combat effectiveness of the soldiers is not much different, the defender's terrain is dangerous, the attacker's troops are 30,000, and the defender's strength is 30,000. With 10,000 troops, it is difficult to capture a city (in military theory, a 3:1 troop ratio is usually regarded as the "benchmark threshold" for siege warfare. This is without the influence of terrain, 3:1 is normal, and the author also said that the terrain is dangerous and easy to defend but difficult to attack) Anyway, I've only seen this so far, and I feel it's a bit poisonous. I haven't had enough fun yet, so I ran away. (Only personal views, if you have different opinions, welcome to discuss)

Just like the title, after reading more than 160 pictures, I have a high probability of knowing what the author wants to write. However, the author's writing style is really not enough, causing the author to write down the entire article, which is constantly embarrassing, but it also makes people wonder where and where people can be. I really can't talk anymore, what should I say? Anyway, after reading this book, it's like you were panning for gold in ten miles, and the gold finally came out. As a result, 2/3 of the gold was created by Yoneda. All in all, author, you have good ideas and creativity, but I beg you to improve your writing skills! Or go read more articles! Not everywhere is suitable for a very popular poem. I know that you wanted to establish a literary peak at the beginning, but you didn't even lay out the plot context, and you suddenly said, I don't know the beginning of the other year, if I can repay the white emperor and let the peach blossom bloom? Don't you know where this poem is used? Chapter 60 is also written in a mess. It really makes people feel physically uncomfortable when reading it. After reading the whole book, I only have one thought, and that is the author's literary skills, or the sheer quantity of words. Let's not talk about the three money cards. Let's talk about the 60th or so pictures in the middle. One card must contain two or three poems or words. But the author has never considered whether these poems are suitable to be placed now? It's like you are in the first and second chapters, and Wen Feng doesn't even understand it, and the context has not been roughly dissected. As a result, you are constantly embarrassed. It's amazing to see that I know ten things, but I don't know anything, and I'm confused at the same time. At the same time, I probably understand the author's idea. The author wants to create a traveler from another world who has cultural foundation and is like a model soldier, right? But the author has a very important question here, that is, the author, have you never considered the problem of insufficient writing?

Who is the heroine of the author? Is it Zhu Zhuqing or Qian Renxue?

It's a good book, but I read it too early, and the book is too new. I suggest that the author be tied up so that he can update hundreds of chapters later. If you are willing, come to me to sign up and tie the author together.