Lu Mingfei: It's Over, the Secret Has Been Exposed
About This Novel
When the sky falls and Lu Mingfei's future is revealed, what will he do? If you run out of money, you can come back again. When people leave, they are really gone. Mr. Caesar Gattuso, that change is very hot. Has it burned through your pride? Your proud weasel allows you to clearly hear all the sounds of the girl's bones being smashed. Mr. Chu Zihang, when you and Caesar, who is violently bloody for the third time, cannot defeat Yuan Zhisheng even if you join forces with Caesar for the second time. Do you understand whether you killed Shami or Jormungandr? Of course, no girl will ever lower her head to kiss your face under the sun. Mr. Lu Mingfei, is Gao Tianyuan's wine delicious? Has it extinguished your cowardice? She prepared a test paper for you, and she would give you full marks no matter what you wrote, but you missed the test. One hundred and three hundred and twenty flower tickets can't keep you, so you can't keep her even if you spend a quarter of your life. There are many private settings. In my setting, the black king and the white king are not villains. After all, I think the characters of the Dragon Kings can hardly be called villains. If the Black King is a dictator, it is impossible to divide power. So in my setting, the real villain is desire, which cannot be suppressed. Whether it is a human or a dragon, the villain is the one who loses to desire. By the way, Herzog must die! If nothing unexpected happens, the material is probably taken from the analysis of the big guys in Xia Zi and Mo Hua.
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Official(9)Scraped 8d ago
How can this AI smell pass the test?
How can this AI smell pass the test? Is it okay if the main text doesn't match the introduction?
If you really want to write about Lu Mingfei, just stop painting Liyi one after another. Take a step back and say that you have never loved Lu Mingfei, only regret. Or you can make your own original one so that you can substitute it for yourself. Every time I read the Dragon Clan fanfic, I can't get around this and it almost makes me sick.
It's a bit too repressed, and the feeling of separation is too severe
The sense of separation between Lu Mingfei's empty strength and cowardly mentality, the delicacy of psychological description and the roughness of language expression. This is the first time I encountered the youth trauma literature written by Dragon Clan fans, which made me feel more uncomfortable than the writing style of Jiangnan Old Thief. Judging from the amount of text in each chapter, this should be the author's own writing style rather than simply imitating the green-faced beast. Therefore, I think it is necessary to read more simple and relaxed articles to adjust my writing mentality. This article contains a lot of extremely redundant psychological descriptions, and the portrayal of Lu Mingfei's own cowardice is a bit too much. Although he has a strong body and multiple spirits and has experienced various special events, his mentality is still the same as in the first chapter. The protagonist's relationship with Mai Shutoku is even more awkward... This is not to say that Lu Mingfei should be written as the male protagonist of a cool novel, but the author seems to have underestimated the impact of bloodline awakening on a person. In the original work, a person can be changed without any reason. However, even if Lu Mingfei in this article awakens his bloodline, it has almost no impact on his daily life. It is better to say that he is even worse than in the past - at least he could live life carelessly in the past. Now he has no power (not even strong enough) but has been forcibly suppressed by the author in terms of psychological growth, so that his life is even more confused and painful than before. Especially after experiencing the battle plot, Lu Mingfei's performance of being attacked by Zhao Menghua is no longer in line with the original work but deviates from common sense. If the supernatural plot is not helpful to Shao Zai's psychological growth, then the entire plot has no meaning. This fanfic is even more uncomfortable to watch than the original work. In short, come on, author, I hope you can achieve results.
Isn't it a canopy if you don't understand? I didn't see much of the plot of Tianmu either.
It's really good and I spent a long time working on it but I can't understand what the topic is.
It's very well written, and I'm really mentally disturbed.
The description of the text is very careful and the writing style is also very good. There is always an oppressive feeling that covers the whole person under the quilt. He is clearly out of breath and refuses to get out. From time to time, he sticks his head out to breathe, and then buries himself under the quilt. It feels a little uncomfortable.
It looks good, but why is the main plot pushed so slowly?
How big the world is depends on how many people you know. Every time you meet someone, the world becomes a little bigger for you. There are many cities in this world, including Beijing, Tokyo, London, Cairo, and Istanbul, but many cities are just names to you. You have never been there, and there are no people you want to visit there, so they do not actually belong to your world. There are many, many people in this world, but you don't know them, and they don't belong to your world. There are many delicious, fun, and beautiful things in this world, but the world that really belongs to you is actually very small. It is just the places you have been, the things you have eaten, the sunsets you have seen, and the friends who care about your life and death. The world that truly belongs to us is not vast in the geographical sense, but the depth of emotional connections.
I can't understand the first chapter, I don't know the main plot
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Official(9)Scraped 8d ago
How can this AI smell pass the test?
How can this AI smell pass the test? Is it okay if the main text doesn't match the introduction?
If you really want to write about Lu Mingfei, just stop painting Liyi one after another. Take a step back and say that you have never loved Lu Mingfei, only regret. Or you can make your own original one so that you can substitute it for yourself. Every time I read the Dragon Clan fanfic, I can't get around this and it almost makes me sick.
It's a bit too repressed, and the feeling of separation is too severe
The sense of separation between Lu Mingfei's empty strength and cowardly mentality, the delicacy of psychological description and the roughness of language expression. This is the first time I encountered the youth trauma literature written by Dragon Clan fans, which made me feel more uncomfortable than the writing style of Jiangnan Old Thief. Judging from the amount of text in each chapter, this should be the author's own writing style rather than simply imitating the green-faced beast. Therefore, I think it is necessary to read more simple and relaxed articles to adjust my writing mentality. This article contains a lot of extremely redundant psychological descriptions, and the portrayal of Lu Mingfei's own cowardice is a bit too much. Although he has a strong body and multiple spirits and has experienced various special events, his mentality is still the same as in the first chapter. The protagonist's relationship with Mai Shutoku is even more awkward... This is not to say that Lu Mingfei should be written as the male protagonist of a cool novel, but the author seems to have underestimated the impact of bloodline awakening on a person. In the original work, a person can be changed without any reason. However, even if Lu Mingfei in this article awakens his bloodline, it has almost no impact on his daily life. It is better to say that he is even worse than in the past - at least he could live life carelessly in the past. Now he has no power (not even strong enough) but has been forcibly suppressed by the author in terms of psychological growth, so that his life is even more confused and painful than before. Especially after experiencing the battle plot, Lu Mingfei's performance of being attacked by Zhao Menghua is no longer in line with the original work but deviates from common sense. If the supernatural plot is not helpful to Shao Zai's psychological growth, then the entire plot has no meaning. This fanfic is even more uncomfortable to watch than the original work. In short, come on, author, I hope you can achieve results.
Isn't it a canopy if you don't understand? I didn't see much of the plot of Tianmu either.
It's really good and I spent a long time working on it but I can't understand what the topic is.
It's very well written, and I'm really mentally disturbed.
The description of the text is very careful and the writing style is also very good. There is always an oppressive feeling that covers the whole person under the quilt. He is clearly out of breath and refuses to get out. From time to time, he sticks his head out to breathe, and then buries himself under the quilt. It feels a little uncomfortable.
It looks good, but why is the main plot pushed so slowly?
How big the world is depends on how many people you know. Every time you meet someone, the world becomes a little bigger for you. There are many cities in this world, including Beijing, Tokyo, London, Cairo, and Istanbul, but many cities are just names to you. You have never been there, and there are no people you want to visit there, so they do not actually belong to your world. There are many, many people in this world, but you don't know them, and they don't belong to your world. There are many delicious, fun, and beautiful things in this world, but the world that really belongs to you is actually very small. It is just the places you have been, the things you have eaten, the sunsets you have seen, and the friends who care about your life and death. The world that truly belongs to us is not vast in the geographical sense, but the depth of emotional connections.
I can't understand the first chapter, I don't know the main plot
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