Xuanwu Splits the Sky
by Lan Ting
About This Novel
It is recorded in history books that people with "three yin and broken pulses" will not be able to practice martial arts for the rest of their lives, and almost no one will be lucky enough to survive past the age of thirteen. Fate closed all the doors of luck, but opened a window, allowing him to turn around in a desperate situation. When he climbed to the top on a mountain of corpses and a sea of blood, he was shocked to discover a shocking secret. Looking back at dusk, I was shocked to realize that the world beneath my feet was like grains of sand in the Ganges River, as small as a speck of dust. Where to go...
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Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
No one has commented, so I'll just sit down on the first floor. The first few chapters are pretty good, giving people a feeling that the protagonist is unfathomable, and the writing is also very good. But after writing the eighth chapter, I couldn't stand it at all. I just couldn't stand it after reading chapter 16. I didn't continue reading, and I was very confused. If the protagonist was abandoned and married, it would not be the protagonist. The reincarnation life experience would be more interesting. It was okay to write that after becoming the first in the martial arts, he achieved the golden elixir and entered immortality. Then the style of the story changed to participating in a secret mission of the special forces and being ambushed to death. . . . There are no details and no connotation. Then it starts with a lot of old routines. In a few days, people's skills are upgraded to hundreds of levels, and then they form their own forces to find orphans. The content is all written in one stroke. I want to sleep when I see it. It's so boring.
It's too ugly. The content is okay, but the structure is ugly. A quarter of it is talking about other people, and the protagonist has no role.
I can't read it, there is no logic in the whole thing, I write whatever comes to my mind, it looks like a garbage dump at first glance, it's dizzying
Author, do you still want to write? More than 1,000 words.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
No one has commented, so I'll just sit down on the first floor. The first few chapters are pretty good, giving people a feeling that the protagonist is unfathomable, and the writing is also very good. But after writing the eighth chapter, I couldn't stand it at all. I just couldn't stand it after reading chapter 16. I didn't continue reading, and I was very confused. If the protagonist was abandoned and married, it would not be the protagonist. The reincarnation life experience would be more interesting. It was okay to write that after becoming the first in the martial arts, he achieved the golden elixir and entered immortality. Then the style of the story changed to participating in a secret mission of the special forces and being ambushed to death. . . . There are no details and no connotation. Then it starts with a lot of old routines. In a few days, people's skills are upgraded to hundreds of levels, and then they form their own forces to find orphans. The content is all written in one stroke. I want to sleep when I see it. It's so boring.
It's too ugly. The content is okay, but the structure is ugly. A quarter of it is talking about other people, and the protagonist has no role.
I can't read it, there is no logic in the whole thing, I write whatever comes to my mind, it looks like a garbage dump at first glance, it's dizzying
Author, do you still want to write? More than 1,000 words.
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