Quickly Wear the Host, She is Willing to Help Others

After reading the first three aspects, I read the fourth aspect of the apocalyptic story. As for the first three aspects, the perspective of looking at the gender aspects of men and women will make girls feel like they have a sudden realization. It really tells the position of most women in real life. If you write about female awakening, I support you and you can write very well. You have written very well about the limitations that women in the first three dimensions face in the social environment they live in. It is to write about the difficulties encountered and then how to resist. However, as far as writing fast-traveling articles are concerned, the ideas and themes expressed are too single. Of course, it's not that a single subject matter is bad. The overall idea of ​​those stories about fast travel and childbirth is just to go to various aspects to get pregnant and give birth to children. It's also good that the thoughts you express in your writing can bring resistance to women in all aspects. But the host you chose is a big shot in the realm of immortality. As you said in your article, because she is powerful enough, no matter what environment you put her in, she can avert danger. So your choice is to let her bring new ideas to women in other aspects, so that women themselves can awaken. It's not wrong to write it this way. But for readers, in addition to the strong sense of substitution for the status of women, the sense of substitution for the subsequent resistance is not so strong. In the early stage, the status of women is extensively described, but in the later stage, the main methods of resistance are rarely described. Even every time the host goes to a world, the people in the world will find out that she is not herself. In fact, I feel that she is a bit superior, because she does not belong to that world, so she looks down on the women in that world, and thinks that they will not resist the oppression they are subjected to? And then see yourself as a savior to save women in other worlds? Is there a problem with the author's writing ability, or is this the problem you want to express? Excessive emphasis on resisting women's awakening is actually not good. Men and women have never been antagonistic. You probably thought so in your first world.

There are a lot of truths, but I don't have the experience of reading a novel. It feels like an ordinary story, with little involvement of the protagonist. Most of the participants are in vernacular, and the elements of the novel are very simple, neither interesting nor interesting.

Except for the doomsday disaster, all the other small worlds are very exciting, and it is a very pure and refreshing novel. The heroine's golden finger is that she has endless knowledge in the system, but I think the biggest golden finger is herself. She is sober, confident, calm and self-sustained, and she never slacks off in learning. There are many plots in it that we have experienced or are currently experiencing. We have compromised for various reasons, and no matter how reluctant we are, we have to consider the need to maintain the relationship. The heroine comes and goes alone, not kidnapped by family, love, and friendship. She relies on herself for everything, and never gives up her right to speak no matter who she faces. We live in a huge human society, so we can't do it, at least we ordinary people can't do it.

What has Zhang Mu been doing lately? . . . . . . . Hahahaha

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It's true that your habit is not very good. Although you may feel that you won't read it if you don't want to read it, I still want to say that it affects the reader's experience. How many are there in one sentence? Two or three sentences end with one, and the writing style needs to be strengthened to be a bit novice.

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Come on👍, I like it very much🌹Looking forward to the exciting stories in the future📝

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