Perfect World: Sign in to Tiandao Treasure Body at the Beginning
About This Novel
The new book "Swallowing the Starry Sky: Evolution from the Deep Sea Demonic Whale King" is online and Shi Xiu is reborn in a perfect world. Obtain the world-winning creation system. At the beginning, the treasure body of heaven is awakened, which can reach the heaven and earth and the holy land. If you become a Taoist couple with him, you can get an immortal body. Soon he became the most popular person in the world. Liu Shen protected him, and the ruthless emperor gave him a meeting gift. The saint of Butian Sect fell in love with him. The female God of War invited him to join Zhulu Academy. Even the ancient girl with double pupils gave him valuable treasures as a gift. An Lan, Hei Huang, and Wu Shi all put aside their olive branches... Countless Taoist masters were vying to be his father-in-law.
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Official(166)Scraped 20d ago
The ruthless emperor put down the black boat. Just when she was about to turn around and leave, she saw something falling in the direction of the human world in the lower world. It might be the body of Tao Fruit.
The writing is terrible, and the corrections made by myself are even worse.
You changed all the characters' personalities, and the writing was awkward and you didn't know how to fill in the holes. Who are the protagonist's parents? The protagonist's physique automatically awakens at the age of 18? It's so embarrassing. The beginning of the writing doesn't match the back end. It's so bad. The protagonist just flies away. He has nothing but the things he got for nothing, and he has no way. He just goes with the flow and relies on his physique to eat women for the rest of his life. I really want to laugh. With this physique, everyone revolves around you, even the immortal kings and emperors revolve around you. It's really awesome. It's so embarrassing. If you don't know how to write, why don't you write it? OK? If you want to create a harem, you can either copy the harem from the original work or make the characters more distinct, okay? What rubbish?
Time flies to find out, how did the empress and the goddess meet?
Personally, I feel that if you haven't watched Zhetian and Shengxu and watch Perfect World alone, it's actually quite difficult to understand. The ruthless emperor and Shi Hao were originally from two different time and space, and they crossed the river of time to help. Maybe only those who have read the original work know this...
This book is very contradictory. The double-eyed girl, An Lan, and Liu Shen are true immortals and immortal kings. They have immortal bodies in themselves, and the ruthless emperor. There is a classic saying, not to become an immortal, just to wait for your return in the world of mortals. Even the immortal body cannot attract him. Besides, they practice the sky-swallowing demon skill. Wouldn't it be better to directly swallow the protagonist and let his chaotic body go further. You have just awakened the Heavenly Dao Treasure Body and made such a big noise. Everyone knows that you are the Heavenly Dao Treasure Body. Do you have the strength to defend yourself? Whether it is a ferocious beast or a human being, you are a great complement in their eyes. At that time, the powerful people from the upper world will come down to the lower world, and the ferocious beasts will come. At that time, you will be the lamb to be slaughtered. What can grow is the treasure body. If you cannot grow, it will be a trouble. Therefore, authors need to use their brains when writing novels.
Rubbish novels, ruining my youth
The author is a fan of Perfect World at first glance, otherwise he wouldn't have written such a perfect fanfic that ruins the world's outlook, it's a disgusting thing
It was fine before! How disgusting is it to go to the Celestial Clan! Damn it, just like a dog! Very speechless, bad reviews, abandoned
Isn't Liu Shen the giant of the Supreme Immortal King of Nine Heavens and Ten Earths? Why is she the goddess of the upper world? I just want to ask
This book is a bit depressing to my IQ and is not very refreshing.
I just commented and banned me. How should I put it? It depends on my personal preference. It's okay.
Vomited
I read Golden Chapter Three, Humanoid Aphrodisiac. One look and you can decide whether to become a Taoist couple. What the hell
I'm convinced. It's just a gift to a girl. Isn't that a bit ridiculous? The ruthless emperor will come directly to give it to you.
I'm convinced. It's just a gift to a girl. Isn't that a bit ridiculous? The ruthless emperor will come directly to give it to you.
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Community(0)
Official(166)Scraped 20d ago
The ruthless emperor put down the black boat. Just when she was about to turn around and leave, she saw something falling in the direction of the human world in the lower world. It might be the body of Tao Fruit.
The writing is terrible, and the corrections made by myself are even worse.
You changed all the characters' personalities, and the writing was awkward and you didn't know how to fill in the holes. Who are the protagonist's parents? The protagonist's physique automatically awakens at the age of 18? It's so embarrassing. The beginning of the writing doesn't match the back end. It's so bad. The protagonist just flies away. He has nothing but the things he got for nothing, and he has no way. He just goes with the flow and relies on his physique to eat women for the rest of his life. I really want to laugh. With this physique, everyone revolves around you, even the immortal kings and emperors revolve around you. It's really awesome. It's so embarrassing. If you don't know how to write, why don't you write it? OK? If you want to create a harem, you can either copy the harem from the original work or make the characters more distinct, okay? What rubbish?
Time flies to find out, how did the empress and the goddess meet?
Personally, I feel that if you haven't watched Zhetian and Shengxu and watch Perfect World alone, it's actually quite difficult to understand. The ruthless emperor and Shi Hao were originally from two different time and space, and they crossed the river of time to help. Maybe only those who have read the original work know this...
This book is very contradictory. The double-eyed girl, An Lan, and Liu Shen are true immortals and immortal kings. They have immortal bodies in themselves, and the ruthless emperor. There is a classic saying, not to become an immortal, just to wait for your return in the world of mortals. Even the immortal body cannot attract him. Besides, they practice the sky-swallowing demon skill. Wouldn't it be better to directly swallow the protagonist and let his chaotic body go further. You have just awakened the Heavenly Dao Treasure Body and made such a big noise. Everyone knows that you are the Heavenly Dao Treasure Body. Do you have the strength to defend yourself? Whether it is a ferocious beast or a human being, you are a great complement in their eyes. At that time, the powerful people from the upper world will come down to the lower world, and the ferocious beasts will come. At that time, you will be the lamb to be slaughtered. What can grow is the treasure body. If you cannot grow, it will be a trouble. Therefore, authors need to use their brains when writing novels.
Rubbish novels, ruining my youth
The author is a fan of Perfect World at first glance, otherwise he wouldn't have written such a perfect fanfic that ruins the world's outlook, it's a disgusting thing
It was fine before! How disgusting is it to go to the Celestial Clan! Damn it, just like a dog! Very speechless, bad reviews, abandoned
Isn't Liu Shen the giant of the Supreme Immortal King of Nine Heavens and Ten Earths? Why is she the goddess of the upper world? I just want to ask
This book is a bit depressing to my IQ and is not very refreshing.
I just commented and banned me. How should I put it? It depends on my personal preference. It's okay.
Vomited
I read Golden Chapter Three, Humanoid Aphrodisiac. One look and you can decide whether to become a Taoist couple. What the hell
I'm convinced. It's just a gift to a girl. Isn't that a bit ridiculous? The ruthless emperor will come directly to give it to you.
I'm convinced. It's just a gift to a girl. Isn't that a bit ridiculous? The ruthless emperor will come directly to give it to you.
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