Pokémon Academy
About This Novel
I am a novice writer, please support me if you like it, thank you! Everything that happens in Pokémon Academy, grow up with Pokémon. Tags: pokemon, pokemon, pokémon
What Readers Think
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Official(4)Scraped 5d ago
Could the author have the protagonist pick up an abandoned quasi-god larvae on the road?
I prefer these three quasi-gods, Round Land Shark, Mini Dragon, and Young Kilas.
Come on! ! I like it,,,
The word count is a little too short and not enough to read, so save it first!
Well, some of my opinions
Although the text is good, it feels like it is written like a primary school composition. Also, when I read the previous article, the author used me to refer to the protagonist, which felt a bit weird. I suggest changing it. The writing style also looks weird. It seems like there is something missing in the book. Hmm... The plot is missing. The plot progresses too fast and can easily collapse. Moreover, it seems to be missing a kind of emotion, which is indescribable.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 5d ago
Could the author have the protagonist pick up an abandoned quasi-god larvae on the road?
I prefer these three quasi-gods, Round Land Shark, Mini Dragon, and Young Kilas.
Come on! ! I like it,,,
The word count is a little too short and not enough to read, so save it first!
Well, some of my opinions
Although the text is good, it feels like it is written like a primary school composition. Also, when I read the previous article, the author used me to refer to the protagonist, which felt a bit weird. I suggest changing it. The writing style also looks weird. It seems like there is something missing in the book. Hmm... The plot is missing. The plot progresses too fast and can easily collapse. Moreover, it seems to be missing a kind of emotion, which is indescribable.
