Skill Extraction Starting from Dragon Clan

Counting the time, it's almost time to start choosing where to travel to the next world. While you can still modify the outline, readers can write down the world they want to see below, and I will make the selection based on the number of likes and comments.

When I saw that, when the protagonist killed Deadpool with instant noodles, I was extremely shocked. There are really no useless skills, only skills used wrongly.

I have seen chapter 151 so far, and the world of dragons has progressed more than halfway. Until now, the protagonist has merged fire and mountain. Isn't the power of the two kings and the familiarity of the plot enough? It is still a meaningless development. I don't understand. It may be suitable for friends who like behind-the-scenes streaming.

Looking back at this book after it was finished, I found that the first copy of Dragon Clan was the best written. It basically restored the taste of the original work without any sloppiness, and there were no regrets. It can be said that all the expectations in the introduction have been written. The skill of instant noodles is also quite present. The second copy is also okay. Although many newcomers have not seen Xingyue now, Xingyue has always been a classic place for unlimited streaming. But the writing is actually not very interesting. From the perspective of refreshing writing, it is not interesting enough. If it wants depth, there is actually no depth at all. Moreover, the system skills are basically invisible starting from this copy. Generally speaking, the writing is quite satisfactory. It won't work from the beginning of the third world. Normally, after a low-demon copy of a person has experienced a high-demon like the Moon God Generation, the master should hide among the people, and then come out from time to time to show off. But the author cut off a wave of protagonists, and the abilities of the previous dungeon were basically reduced. Moreover, in the middle of this dungeon, the alien setting appeared inexplicably, which directly drove away the vast majority of readers, which was a failure. There is not much to say about the last copy. Although it is barely finished, the author must have done it on a routine basis and there are not many readers. I also have a feeling that the author will finish this copy. It is good to have an ending, but there is nothing to say. The book can be said to be very good if it can finish the Dragon Clan. It is good for Dragon Clan fans to have this level. After all, Dragon Clan fans are either eunuchs or use the Dragon Clan as the background to write their own stories, which does not have any Dragon Clan flavor. The non-sloppy ending of this book is perfect. Even just clicking in to read a copy of Dragons is worth the price. To sum up, the author probably doesn't have much experience. He originally conceived a very interesting dragon fanfic. If he writes a cool article at this pace and has fun with it, he should be able to pass the results. But from the beginning of the first copy, the author wanted to write something in-depth (or overly self-indulgent), but the result was that it gradually failed, and the system in the back actually had no sense of existence. According to the dragon copy, I can actually write a long and flowing article. I can only say that the author of this book seems to be just having fun, and just wants to write something he wants to write instead of making a living by writing a book. If there is another book, I hope I can learn from the experience of this book.

The writing was okay, but I was a little disappointed that there was no heroine in this book. I thought the heroine would be Xia Mi, but I didn't expect that she was chosen by Chu Zihang

The writing of the Dragon Clan chapter was okay, but the use of hooks was not particularly good, and the Xingyue chapter was even worse. The awesome hooks were used blindly, and the benefits were not maximized at all. The protagonist was like a fool, and things involving his own combat power were made like a joke. The plot design was too gentle, and the protagonist was. Never eaten any turtle

You can put your own designed extras here, and I will pick them up when needed. The supporting actor should have a name, personality and other information, the more detailed the better. As for the name of the supporting player, try to choose something that is similar to the style of the current world.

I really don't understand why at the beginning of the dragon clan, Xingyue surpassed the main god level strength, and then went to the one-person world, and the highest combat power of one person could not reach the immortal level. It's not that you are not allowed to write about learning to cultivate immortality. At least go to Journey to the West or the prehistoric world. This is a world where at least the powers are equal. Then you say that each side has its advantages and it is reasonable for you to learn from it. The world levels are all crushed. What can be useful among a bunch of people who are difficult to become immortals and even cannot reach the level of heroes on the other side? Let me put it another way and understand. If someone wrote that Sanqing went to Harry Potter to learn magic, would you find it funny? If the order of the books were reversed, and one person starts with it, then goes to Dragon Clan, and then to Xingyue, it would still be okay. Anyway, the main character is playing house for one person, which makes people uncomfortable to watch. The only reason I can think of for writing this is to take advantage of one person's popularity. There is no reason at all in terms of the plausibility of the plot. In the end, I wrote so much not to criticize this book, but to pity this book. In the beginning, Dragon World was written first-rate, and Shape Moon was slightly worse, but it was still good. However, it took a sudden turn for the worse, because it would be far-fetched to find a reason for an unreasonable thing. I originally insisted on the previous level to become an immortal grass in various astronomical texts, but now I can only count it as food.

There is no heroine in time travel and no emotional line. The pace is too fast. Many plots only appear once. There is too little excitement. If Xia Ya was taken in through time travel and there were more emotional lines, this book might have more readers.

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