Douluo: Wuhun Mengdie, Refining Falsehood into Reality

The theme is good, but the martial arts setting should be subtle, not dazzling. First, Gangzi is indeed capable of asking others for soul skills. After all, Gangzi, who is cowardly and arrogant by nature, has never looked down on civilian soul masters. But after you know it, you still play with your nerves, which is very stupid. . You have already introduced the first soul skill, cutting. You can tell her before, secretly curse in your mind, you can get Tang San's knowledge, take advantage of Tang San's blacksmithing to influence Xiao Wu, teach her how to be low-key and defensive, etc. Before leaving. You're off to a bad start. Do you expect Tang Hao to let you go? Who do you think you are if you don't let your wife go? Second, the explanation here in Tiandou's shop is ominous. You can go to other blacksmiths to make several low-level hidden weapons, kill a level 30 human trafficker on the way, save a girl, and obtain low-level soul tools and money. . After that, he went to the hotel to teach girls to be doormen, and he worked behind the scenes to try to change his appearance and age. When you meet a woman you need to get started with, do it in a room that is protected from detection. Do you really think Qibao is a good person? Exposing your talent and age will only lead to faster death. Don't take the beautiful setting of Tang San in the original work. No one dares to offend Tang San's school if he has a strong character, and Hao Zi protects him behind his back. The exposure of talent is suppressed by a papal decree. . Remember this is fantasy, even the sewers are fantasy. On the surface, I don't dare to kill, but I don't know how many assassinations there are, let alone so many strange martial arts spirits. Take the original Tang San's entrance test. What will happen to Zhao Wuji? Winning so much money from Shrek's soul fighting was just because Tang Hao was not seen behind the scenes to deal with it. Do you think there are a few civilians in the original novel who were born with level 8 or above geniuses and have become successful without joining the big forces? Either enter the Spirit Hall, join a noble sect, or die. . Oscar and Ma were both brought back by Flanders who worked part-time in Awakening. . Qin, the only talented person in Shi Laike, was also brainwashed and then given 5 rings of purple. The protagonist just reveals his talent too early. After conquering Dugu Yan, you can try to expose some, but not all, of them. It is only reasonable to arrange for Poison Douluo to live nearby.

This is the second time I've played it. The first time I played it last time, I felt like the fight with Tang San in Chapter 6 was really ridiculous! You clearly know that Tang Hao is basically nearby, after all, his son has come out! It looks like they are going to fight, and their lives may be in danger, so it is impossible to say not to follow! Basically anyone with any brain should know this! In the end, you just beat him after you beat him, and you still want to kill him. It can only be said that Tang Hao is still too kind! When I slap you to death, Ah! I regret so much why why? Why kill him? I can only say that the subject matter is okay, but it's a bit shabby and a bit stupid! Doing something you know you can't do is sometimes awesome, sometimes stupid!

Tang Yuehua just needs to be a slave, don't be a mistress.

I saw the first six pictures, and I was speechless. Without strength and background, what could you do to Tang San? In the end, Tang Hao taught him a lesson, and he just licked his wounds like a 🤡

Five stars for ideas, one star for character. The plot and writing are barely adequate, so deduct one star. But he's too arrogant and self-righteous. He becomes lawless after level 20 and plays with people's hearts. Has his ability been exposed to Ning Rongrong? It's still hidden in the front, haha, it can play with people's dreams. Do you think all your customers will want to kill you after knowing it? Those who treat others as fools have also fallen into the trap themselves. Tang San wants to deal with you, and you want to take revenge on Tang Yuehua. Although I feel uncomfortable, I can understand it. It's understandable that you want to plan for fairy grass and pick up Dugu Yan. Are you slacking off when dealing with Ning Rongrong? Arrogance, others are fools, you are the only one who is smart

Although I didn't read your novel on QQ Reading, I saw your video outside, so I didn't write about you, but I searched for you based on my own righteousness. I heard it is very good.

I can only say that if you give up your brain, this book can still be read. It is probably a pure harem. The protagonist accepts one after another. It is not that he hates harem. If the harem is well written, it is actually not bad, but the problem is that purebreds will accept a woman when they see one. 🖊️

Let's start a new book again, this one is useless, the plot is rubbish.

Comment after reading the latest chapter: I like to watch this kind of slow training plot😋Of course, this is apart from everything else. If you write this dream well, basically every heroine's emotional line won't be too brainless. The following are comments on the previous chapters: You are so clueless at the beginning, you are really invincible, you are really not afraid of death when you talk arrogantly. It's so frustrating, especially in Chapter 5. If you can run or not, you have to kill Tang San. Didn't you know there was Tang Hao? Knowing that Tang Hao was there, you still went to die? Later, you even said that you would take revenge in front of others. You said arrogantly in front of Tang Hao and he wouldn't kill you? Do you really regard Tang Hao as a good person? Or are you really taking it upon yourself? Give yourself such a heavy protagonist halo? Then what's the point of writing this? Writing like this will do nothing but make readers feel uncomfortable. Now, unlike more than ten years ago, not many people are willing to be 🐢 and suffer injustice.

When I left Luoding City, I realized that Tang San had to go to blacksmithing every day to make money, so I couldn't have chosen that time to leave, but he was still being followed, and Tang Hao took action and you said something similar to a threat.