Stay Away from Conan

At seven years old, you enter primary school. On the day you enter school, you are bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. At thirteen years old, you are at the peak of your sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the air of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet the strong people in the junior high school level. Even the weakest junior high school strong people, their strength is by no means comparable to yours. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips! So scary. So you make up your mind to enter junior high school. At the age of sixteen, you have reached the state of junior high school, through years of study and hard work. You already look down on your classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the limitations of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In the ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful and obtain the great path. But in the current world trend, where the vitality of heaven and earth is so thin, it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary, if you go against it, you will become an immortal. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. At this time, your girlfriend of four years actually belongs to a huge family power. In their eyes, you without financial resources are like an ant. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You just remember that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made a three-year contract with you. You recall the shame, the powerlessness, and the pain you experienced that day in elementary school. The heart of the house is roaring and roaring. The veins on your hands are popping up. When I come back, I will dye the sky with demon blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you chose the Internet. From then on, you enter a big company and get the guidance of a big boss. Even the time spent sitting on the toilet is used to study. As he continued to grow stronger, he discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair and encountered danger. From Beijing to. From Shanghai to Shenzhen, I met strong people who worked hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the guidance of a mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from college. They all become your strength to move forward. Three years later, everything was calm and peaceful at the woman's home. Do you think he will come? Hearing this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter in her heart. In the past three years, she had refused many blind dates arranged by her family. Now it's almost reaching its limit. The sun is almost setting. Is it just a disappointment after all? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The mother-in-law's expression changed slightly at the sound of the mount. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the end it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is real, but this sound is different. The father-in-law suddenly thought of something, his face suddenly turned pale and he started to tremble, this was impossible. How can you do it. No matter how hard I try for half my life, I can't overcome it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are well. A man's voice sounded. Sure enough, a golden dragon Rolls-Royce came down from the doorstep. Suddenly there was silence in the house, and the mother-in-law asked cautiously. Where is the mansion? Answer day. In the magical city of Taiyi Xianfu (urban area), the mother-in-law lowered her head in shame and arranged for the wedding, and the young couple needless to say. Another year passed, and on this day a man named Ma wearing glasses rode a penguin to visit. After some pleasantries, you are invited to enter the new map Zhengdao Alliance (Internet Conference). As soon as you enter, you find that there are about dozens of people present, and their strength is unfathomable. Among them, you can hear that I have no interest in money and I have not received a salary for a month. Set a small goal and earn one hundred million first. I am face blind and don't know whether it is beautiful or not. Things like that. You can't help but be stunned for a while. Recalling what I saw and heard along the way, it feels like a lifetime ago.

There are some suggestions. Now that I have seen the incident where the protagonist was bitten by a poisonous snake, the protagonist said that he was careless. This is not because the protagonist was careless, but that there was something wrong with the author. The protagonist should have experienced many incidents. Not only is there an organization here, but every criminal here is extremely vicious. Every case may involve the organization. He is not invincible. His memory about the case cannot prevent him from falling into the consciousness of a case. Things like being beaten up on Mermaid Island, meeting the Shiho trio on New Year's Eve, etc. Should make the protagonist always vigilant. Especially, in the protagonist's second promotion mission, because the protagonist had a guess but did not tell the police, he was hit by a car (it would have been a shame if it was not a prop). The police also asked the protagonist why he did not communicate, and the protagonist said it was because it was just a bold guess. I just want to know if it's just a guess, can't I bring a police officer with me? With the protagonist's reputation at this time, can't I tell the police that I have a guess and need the cooperation of a police officer? All of this is because the author has made the protagonist act alone many times in order to highlight the protagonist. The author ignores the convenience that the police can bring to the protagonist, and makes the police seem useless (although the police in Conan are indeed quite incompetent, the author of this book only makes the police provide case information and arrest criminals, and have no role in early deployment and pursuit). The author please pay attention to the role of the police and let the protagonist make more use of the police. For example, in a case where the protagonist is bitten by a snake, you can send a text message in advance to ask the police to cooperate, or you can even anonymously report problems in the warehouse (I can't think of the best solution, so I just give an example of a mistake). In future plots, you can consider the role of the police, even if you just ask a police officer to follow the protagonist to investigate the case and protect the protagonist. Don't always let the protagonist be beaten because of carelessness (this kind of thing is actually very poisonous, and if it is not handled well, it is silly to blame it on carelessness). The beating and killing part can be left to the police. The above is just my personal opinion, I like the book very much.

Here are some more pictures of Xiaolan and their beauties.

But I hope there will be Xiaolan, Qingzi, and Ye. After all, the first two are just like the two sisters, so LSP knows what it feels like. Finally, I hope to add the two sisters Yukiko, Fei Yingli, Bellmode, and Haibara Ai.

Conan didn't appear until chapter 200, and it took more than 300 chapters to realize that cases with Conan would become more difficult! At first, I thought that the protagonist gave the system props to Xiao Ai, thinking she should be the heroine. Later, there was a prop for a swordsman master. I think it was probably given to Tie Zhuyu! Mariko is starting to fall in love with the male protagonist again! The male protagonist is a bit straight, and there are a lot of women around him, so he is neither good nor bad to anyone! How to say it! When I watch Conan, I just want to watch it with a single female protagonist. I thought I would watch it because of the single female protagonist. I especially hate plots with single female protagonists that are ambiguous with other female characters! It feels like there will be a story with each of the women later, and it feels like there will be that kind of disgusting story that jumps around.

I saw Chapter 65. Except for the interesting writing in the second half of the first chapter, the subsequent plot has been mediocre and has no climax. There is no distinction between priorities and Kudo Shinichi's role is much more than that of the protagonist.

Chapter 138, a lot of holes have not been filled, and new holes are being dug all the time. It is estimated that there will still be several months before Conan appears. . .

When are you going to abduct Xiaolan? ! ! ! Lanjiang Saigao

The more I read, the more I say, there are many good things, and I can see that the author writes very delicately and seriously. There are many advantages. Unlike other Conan fans, the case is written more smoothly. The author is really careful and serious in writing. The live-action and non-animated comic chapters, such as Generic and Blackbeard, are included, as well as the attributes of the god of death that save Miyano Akemi and the subsequent vegetative setting. The logic and foreshadowing are amazing and delicate. There are also some word puzzles. It can be seen that the author is a fan of Conan and a communications or computer major. But with all due respect, I think there are more shortcomings... A lot of female characters have been added to correspond to the Tarot card culture, and Golden Finger is also a Tarot card toy... This has led to a lot of problems that I think. First, the emotional issue. I still have many readers who want to read on. The big reason is because Ai Jiang is the single female protagonist. The protagonist will always call Xiao Ai Haiyuan... Would you die if you changed it to Ai Jiang? One more thing, do you want to learn from Zeng Xiaoxian... You drag the chapter on the serious issue of feelings. Do you directly state that you will die? , Who else is here? You want to show that straight men don't have to be like this. What age are you still doing this? What's even more ruining your relationship is that you are ambiguous with a few custom characters, and you are ordinary to Aijiang. It's very bland. I don't know if you want your love to blossom or something. How to end it through dreams... Oh my God, you want to have a fake harem and a single female protagonist who loves each other and has an unrequited love with the original CP, right? It's coy and blushing... Why is the first question about feelings? Nonsense, readers see Ke Tong, the first element is not the detective element, but Aijiang or other CP elements, and the second element is something else or something. Secondly, I have skipped all the questions about life experience. I insist on adding a prototype, which is the Mitsubishi Consortium's Mitarai family's inheritance battle and the rationality of the Shiho Takema Line coming to the park... The pen is in your hand, why do you have to have this relationship to shape it, past is past, now is essential..., I am so tired, there are so many cousins, my God... Third, organizational issues, Louis, Hennessy, Camus, etc., The first two are still young girls or even high school students. As expected, Japanese comics are well studied and very Japanese. I know the author wants to highlight the awesomeness of the organization, but I have no words to say. It just feels very inconsistent, especially the conflict between Louis and Aijiang. It is very weird. There is already Sister Bei, and she is running away in a flower field. Hennessy has other plans... Isn't this just like a winery with water? That's so awesome. If you want to unite forces that can be united, why not contact the FBI... Fourth, the golden finger question. I was speechless after reading the tarot cards and a bunch of trials, especially the episode where Shiho's consciousness fell into a dream, and the protagonist was in a coma, and found a bunch of people to fall into a dream and become lonely. I thought everyone would get a glimpse of the protagonist's predecessor, and it was also hinted that before and after time travel, the real world where the protagonist lives and the world of Conan are actually the same world. I don't know why you set Goldfinger like this. Why don't you add some points to Dark Blue to save yourself from the Tarot card trial? It's exhausting to watch, so why can't you make it more enjoyable... Fifth, the problem of the protagonist shrinking in size after drinking or taking antidote... It is really a *** setting, especially the part where he and Shiho are still blushing and shy after shrinking, and the part in Hokkaido, when they shrink and huddle in the closet... They all feel embarrassed and shameful and helpless. Is this trying to replicate the identity exchange between Conan and Xiao Ai in the original work... You feel ashamed, why don't you do this... This antidote is not related to the protagonist's blood. You might as well write an article based on tissue research data... Sixth, after a thousand episodes, you know how to send every case, and you know all the names of the prisoners. This is actually a common problem in many fan fiction... Instead of setting Conan and the protagonist to escalate the difficulty of the case to prevent the protagonist from predicting the case beforehand, it would be easier to set the protagonist to not know anything about the case. In this article about the Cupido Hotel, Ai-chan couldn't get through to the protagonist. She wanted to avoid the escalation of the difficulty of the case... But also wanted to get involved... I have never seen such a split... Seventh, I still want to talk about emotional issues. The so-called shipwreck turns around, and it's already been a thousand and hundreds chapters. I don't expect the author to change the setting. Be more honest with Ai Jiang. Even if you tell the truth directly, don't be afraid. It makes me feel like Zeng Xiaoxian. The pen is in your hand, okay? The relationship should be more direct. If you like it, you love it. Don't pretend to be straight. Is it okay? You don't have to transfer some key plot driving forces to other romances? It's very cumbersome to want to have pure love with the single heroine but also want to indulge in romance with a custom female character... Eighth, it's the problem of the protagonist himself. Intelligence is online. In fact, you don't have to go through this detective system to grow. It doesn't matter if you directly reach the level of the boss. Conan fellows, solving the case actually doesn't show the so-called growth or learning process. There is actually no big change in the character. I was just afraid that the winery didn't mention it much later. It's clear that everyone just entered the game to calculate. Based on your description of the protagonist who was afraid of being lonely in the brewery in the early stage, and who looked angry at everyone, but also has fighting ability, look at Mr. Aoyama, as long as the main son character, Toru Akai Shuichi, Amuro Kidou, reasoning and combat ability are all written in a frivolous way. The author does not need to belittle himself, just let it go. You can quickly and Kyogoku really don't fall behind. What's wrong with Shuichi Akai when I just turned 20? What happened to me going from a rookie to a sharpshooter in less than half a year?

None of the comments in all the comments are lower than 4 stars. It's funny. It's so good that it has become a god so early. I have almost deleted all the malicious negative comments. As for pretending like this? Funny