Film and Tv: Starting from the Time-traveling Little Joy

Let me give you an evaluation. It's a complete miscellany. A novel without a soul. First of all, let's not talk about the excitement of a normal person traveling through another world and what he wants to do. Your protagonist is completely confused from beginning to end and is completely a puppet at your mercy. There is no feeling of soul. There are too many worlds and you can't write well. You might as well write one world at a time. As for the heroine, I can only tell you that this is a novel, not a TV series. The review is not as strict as a TV series. You don't need to be so conservative at all. Not to mention multiple heroines. At least you have to have a clear goal. After all, you traveled back in time and I don't believe you have any interest in the protagonist group. Even awesome readers are thinking about how to win over Tong Wenjie, Song Qian and Li Meng. Believe it or not, the heroine is the g point of many male readers, and the young woman is the h point of many LSPs. It's okay if you don't write a heroine. But from the beginning to the end, you are completely afraid that the plot is not enough to write, forcibly integrating other worlds, and then there is not enough writing to turn it into a bloody mess. That has no meaning at all.

The protagonist is kicked when he first saves someone, or just kicked in the face. Doesn't this make the reader feel uncomfortable at once? Has the author considered

Too much, too confusing, and it will deviate from the main line later on.

I didn't see the mental state of the 28-year-old in my previous life at all. He behaved like a child, and he actually made a fistfight with a gangster, sb.

I didn't find the main point of this book, so I just kept getting lost in it.

Who are the heroines? I hope there will be multiple heroines. If it is a single heroine, don't describe the other girls too much. It's really disgusting to have so much foreshadowing and give away the girl at the end!

Lu Xun: I have said a lot of things, but now I have mostly forgotten them. When and where did I say this sentence? Looking back, I have no memory at all, or maybe I didn't actually say it, but that's not necessarily the case. I am not Mr. Hu Shizhi who is obsessed with textual research, so I have no intention of researching the text. If the textual research turns out to be true and it turns out that he has not said anything, wouldn't it be a disgrace to this gentleman? Although it won't cost him his job, it will inevitably lead to some enmity. Although I am not afraid of fighting with others, after all, I have been dead for many years, and if I care about it seriously, I will inevitably be criticized as being narrow-minded by knowledgeable people. So if you say yes, then yes!

Come on, keep at it, the writing is quite to my liking.

I think the author's writing is very good, better than most fan fiction.

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