Leisurely Time to Cultivate Immortality

There's not much else, I just feel like anyone can practice with me. Too easy. I quite like this kind of power in the first hundred chapters. Later, I could just find someone to do it in a few days, and things that everyone knew became cheaper, and the sense of expectation was gone.

I was attracted by the three names of the heroines in the comment section. But I read it from beginning to end and didn't find the three names of the heroine in January. However, the article is well written, but there are many gaps, lack of connection, and jumps too fast. I also prefer to watch one-on-one dramas, and I don't like to watch one-to-many ones where the male or female protagonist is more fickle.

The ending is a bit hasty, can't I continue writing? ? ? ? ?

A heroine has three names. No wonder so few people watch her. The first name is Zhang Xiaoshi, the second name is Zhang Shiyi, and the third name is Zhang Shiqi. I don't even know which app the author saw this novel on and then adapted it?

So-so, the feeling changes as I write about it

It's just that the beginning of a chapter often doesn't match up with the previous chapter. For example, if you fight a gangster and take notes, in the next chapter you suddenly arrive home, or you grab something in the village and go back to eat, and in the next chapter you suddenly check your phone in a mobile phone store, it's really an inexplicable jump. But the content is fine

Many holes have not been filled yet After reading the author's words, it turns out that the competition is fierce.

The ending was too rushed. Otherwise it would be better.