Peak Divine Animal Husbandry
by Mu Lan
About This Novel
After being betrayed and killed at the peak of her life, Le Nuannuan experienced an instant switch between heaven and hell. But everything was not over yet. She returned to the starting point of everything, one month before the launch of the "Morning Light" server. Working towards a better life, Le Nuannuan tried her best. But what happened to this world? Everything seemed to be going awry. Is this rebirth or time travel?
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This book is really confusing. The male protagonist is named Yun Feng, and in the game he is called Fengyun, but the female protagonist calls him Yun Feng in the game. No one has said anything yet. Isn't it said that it is most taboo to reveal real-life information in the game? There is also the matter of the heroine making money every minute. Doesn't it mean that she lives a very poor life? The heroine's father is the same. He can't be embarrassed to go home because he is injured. He is afraid that his grandfather will worry so he keeps the two children with him to endure hardship. I wonder if the heroine dropped out of school halfway through her studies to take care of her father at home and support his younger brother in school. Also, the heroine exposed so much information in the early stage. People have to consider whether the rebirth information will be exposed when reborn. It would be better for her to directly tell the information about the dungeon boss, ultimate move, and attack range. Another time when she was playing a dungeon, there was a GM next to her who just looked at her and said a lot without suspecting anything. She was really drunk. The article is unfinished again, it doesn't finish the story at all, and many of the holes dug in the early stages have not been filled in. It is really just a novel to pass the book shortage! Is it really difficult to write the ending of an online game novel? Almost all of the ones I've seen suck.
Le Nuannuan chose a pastor, and she will not be one in the future. . . Violent animal husbandry 😂 The kind that keeps teammates alive with only a trace of health left, and then desperately deals damage? ? Although the name of the game is warmth, I shudder for your teammates
Author, did you write the ending too hastily? This should be an online game article, right? Nuan Nuan has not yet reached her peak, has not yet figured out what that sentence means, and has not yet let readers know why old Ziller was injured. Readers have not yet been told why the Wings of Holy Light in the game were brought to reality by Nuan Nuan. There are still many, many things that have not been made clear to the readers. Everything is not over yet, and you have already begun the ending. I originally wanted to give you a five-star rating, but because your ending was too hasty. So I'm sorry!
Why are there repeated chapters after sleeping and waking up in Chapter 211?
The front part is pretty good, but since the real world turned into an angel, it has become too cool. I didn't think much of it at first. Also, you didn't even thank Xiaoxiao and Qin for that pairing. Hey, how can it be so embarrassing for a rotten girl like us?
The more you write, the more exaggerated you become😥😥😥
Hey, it would be better if Xiaoxiao and Yan were also written Y(^o^)Y
The last part is a bit messy and I can't always connect. It's really confusing.
There are always chapters that cannot be linked to in the later stages. Originally, the game reality in the later stages opened up my imagination, but it is really confusing that the chapters cannot be linked.
Na. After Le Nuannuan fainted at first, Xiao Wuyan acted very anxious. But Le Nuannuan said she saw the corners of Xiao Wuyan's lips raised? ? ? It can't be Le Nuannuan designed by Xiao Wuyan. In terms of design, there is no need to continue the show in the end.
Reality is a bit magical, and it is confused with the game, making it easy for people to blur the distinction. The writing style in the opening chapter is too simple, like bamboo, one section after another, and the writing has no smooth and smooth feeling.
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This book is really confusing. The male protagonist is named Yun Feng, and in the game he is called Fengyun, but the female protagonist calls him Yun Feng in the game. No one has said anything yet. Isn't it said that it is most taboo to reveal real-life information in the game? There is also the matter of the heroine making money every minute. Doesn't it mean that she lives a very poor life? The heroine's father is the same. He can't be embarrassed to go home because he is injured. He is afraid that his grandfather will worry so he keeps the two children with him to endure hardship. I wonder if the heroine dropped out of school halfway through her studies to take care of her father at home and support his younger brother in school. Also, the heroine exposed so much information in the early stage. People have to consider whether the rebirth information will be exposed when reborn. It would be better for her to directly tell the information about the dungeon boss, ultimate move, and attack range. Another time when she was playing a dungeon, there was a GM next to her who just looked at her and said a lot without suspecting anything. She was really drunk. The article is unfinished again, it doesn't finish the story at all, and many of the holes dug in the early stages have not been filled in. It is really just a novel to pass the book shortage! Is it really difficult to write the ending of an online game novel? Almost all of the ones I've seen suck.
Le Nuannuan chose a pastor, and she will not be one in the future. . . Violent animal husbandry 😂 The kind that keeps teammates alive with only a trace of health left, and then desperately deals damage? ? Although the name of the game is warmth, I shudder for your teammates
Author, did you write the ending too hastily? This should be an online game article, right? Nuan Nuan has not yet reached her peak, has not yet figured out what that sentence means, and has not yet let readers know why old Ziller was injured. Readers have not yet been told why the Wings of Holy Light in the game were brought to reality by Nuan Nuan. There are still many, many things that have not been made clear to the readers. Everything is not over yet, and you have already begun the ending. I originally wanted to give you a five-star rating, but because your ending was too hasty. So I'm sorry!
Why are there repeated chapters after sleeping and waking up in Chapter 211?
The front part is pretty good, but since the real world turned into an angel, it has become too cool. I didn't think much of it at first. Also, you didn't even thank Xiaoxiao and Qin for that pairing. Hey, how can it be so embarrassing for a rotten girl like us?
The more you write, the more exaggerated you become😥😥😥
Hey, it would be better if Xiaoxiao and Yan were also written Y(^o^)Y
The last part is a bit messy and I can't always connect. It's really confusing.
There are always chapters that cannot be linked to in the later stages. Originally, the game reality in the later stages opened up my imagination, but it is really confusing that the chapters cannot be linked.
Na. After Le Nuannuan fainted at first, Xiao Wuyan acted very anxious. But Le Nuannuan said she saw the corners of Xiao Wuyan's lips raised? ? ? It can't be Le Nuannuan designed by Xiao Wuyan. In terms of design, there is no need to continue the show in the end.
Reality is a bit magical, and it is confused with the game, making it easy for people to blur the distinction. The writing style in the opening chapter is too simple, like bamboo, one section after another, and the writing has no smooth and smooth feeling.
