I, the Lord of God, Recruit Witches to Make Money

I saw an author complaining in the comments section. Today's readers can't accept foreshadowing. As long as the protagonist eats some turtles but doesn't immediately slap him in the face, he thinks it's poisonous. I didn't think too much about it at the time, but after reading your novel, I suddenly thought of how to answer it. You are originally a semi-invincible protagonist. In order to advance the plot and background, the protagonist is attacked by someone, and the girlfriend goes undercover to the enemy. Doesn't it mean that your writing skills are not enough to grasp the plot? It would be okay if there was only one protagonist, but didn't your book start around the story of the protagonist and his miko? The protagonist is semi-invincible but the witches are not semi-invincible. Maybe this is the shackles of a fixed story line. The only way to push the plot is to rely on the villain. In fact, the clown can also be written with flesh and blood. So to summarize, when I read this novel, I looked at the name and resume and thought it was a story about the protagonist teaching his shrine maidens and accompanying them to grow up, but after reading it, it was not good enough. Chapter 45: The festival is just a carnival day.

I mean, there's no big problem with the setting. It's just that I lost interest in it after taking in three witches. You can look forward to it at the beginning, but after finishing it, you no longer feel that way. (It's not that it's bad to accept witches, it's just that the writing makes people less interested in reading further)

In other words, the author did not portray it well. As a result, most people should be disgusted with this woman. Although I'm not sure if it's most people, but when I saw this woman being described, many comments were dissatisfied with her. I'm not happy either. The protagonist is a bit of a dog licker. She was not portrayed well, and the early story was insufficient. She suddenly appeared and the protagonist was like a boiling sheep, and then she was portrayed very casually and stubbornly. This kind of character would be good if he could be portrayed well, but it's a pity that it's not possible. The most off-putting thing is the author's attitude. At the same time, I want to make a woman very pure, but at the same time, I feel like an exhibitionist.

Water word count, water experience task completed

The novel is very well written, and the plot settings are not bad. Don't enter the palace.

I don't seem to understand the finale, I'm a little confused

After more than ten chapters, only the characters and locations were briefly mentioned, and the world view was not introduced. This made me unable to continue reading.

The heroine's description is not good. I personally resent this situation.

The concept is very clever, and a lot of suspense is set up in the book, waiting to be solved one by one, it is worth savoring

I'm a little lazy later on, so I'll find some time to replenish my brain to avoid running out of ideas. By the way, expand the picture. Anyway, if you have the ability, if you can't write anymore, just travel through time and space and go to the fan fiction or movie world for a while. This way you can get through more than a thousand chapters😘😘😘