Abandoning Son-in-law and Taking Over

I think the author only needs to ensure that the relationship between the hero and heroine will not be shaken. Of course, the more exciting the other things are written, the better. I personally think the author's recent writing is quite exciting. [Emot=default,80/]

I think this book is very good, but the author has written too many details, and sometimes it is too detailed. On the contrary, it is a little different from the taste of your book. Don't always make so many twists and turns. It is almost enough, and it is broken when it is necessary to bring out the masculinity of the protagonist.

How to write the future relationship between Qin Hongyan and Su Muqing in this book is the key. After all, no matter the protagonist has deep feelings for the two of them, they cannot let go. Never write about betrayal again.

This book is too poisonous and cannot be read by ordinary people. It is recommended that novices and people with no ability to resist poison should not read it! !

I really didn't expect the author to write this. Does it mean that a beautiful woman must have a hypocritical face? Did the author carefully write this, or did he just write it casually? There was no foreshadowing at all before, and no flaws could be seen. It didn't just write about the part where he and Ye Chen got along, but also about the conversation between her and the Su family? Could he be related to Ye Xuan? Why define her as a scumbag again? I don't know if you were on a whim or carefully planned, but no matter what the situation is, it's not good. Su Muqing is definitely not pretending. Didn't Ye Chen learn the look of Mai Yi? Couldn't he tell if she was lying? Don't tell me that Su Muqing also understands Mai's appearance. Her emotions are all fake. Even if you tell me, I won't believe it. Did you deliberately write that Wang Jiayao and Su Muqing are very similar, just to show that they have the same nature? If they are similar, Ye Chen should also know about this through Mai Shenxiang. Don't even say that Ye Tian knew about this matter. No one within the Su family knew how he could investigate it, and Ye Chen should have investigated it when he suspected Su Muqing. Your plot setting is to finally marry Qin Hongyan. The previous marriages were all pretense. At present, Ye Chen's children are suitable for marriages with women he does not want. Anyway, through these people, and then find out the secrets of the family, and then those people are just passing supporting characters. The protagonist is Qin Hongyan, and other women are bad people, and she is the only good person. Is it okay to keep writing plots like this? We all find it boring to watch plots like this all the time. I started catching up on it when it was about 200 chapters ago, and I always thought it was interesting. But after reading it today, I feel that there is really no need to read it anymore! Do beautiful women have a grudge against you? If I hadn't read today's chapter, my impression would have always been good, and I would love to pursue it, but writing it today would really disappoint me. Are all the big families bad guys, except for the Ye family? Today I saw that your title actually had two exclamation points. I knew the result must be positive. I was even more surprised when I saw your text. I know that you will never look back after writing like this. Although I don't know what the purpose of your writing is, I think this must be what you want to write, because you don't care about other people's comments at all, just to complete your own work. Maybe in your mind, this is a good work. You don't need the intervention of others. You can just write according to your own ideas, because you rarely interact with readers. But I think you have been watching, but you just didn't reply. Reading urban novels is more relaxing, but when I read this novel, especially today's one, I was in a very bad mood. Although seeing Wang Jiayao like that made me feel uncomfortable, it is necessary for writing after all. But the same thing happened twice, is that interesting? The most disgusting thing about urban novels is that the plots are repetitive. There is an author who writes urban novels, and his writing is quite good, but many of his novels have the same plot. This creates a sense of disgust. I don't know if it's too late to look back at this time, but I am telling you clearly that if you don't look back, the popularity of the novel will be affected, no matter what you write later, because many readers will not be able to read it after seeing this, and of course, that includes me. I used to like this novel very much and gave many recommendation votes. Although my level is very low and I don't have many votes, I voted for this novel every day. But the novel turned out to be like this, so I was speechless and felt that all my recommendation votes were wrong. This is the first time I have posted such a long comment, because I have never been a troll, and I have never trolled any book, but today I finally couldn't bear my depressed mood, and I have one less book to follow in the future. [Emot=default,02/]

If you have never been in love, you won't understand. . . .

Reposted from Tieba. This is one of the few short long articles I have written. I skipped some chapters and read them quickly. There may be missing or missing information. If anyone can correct me, I hope you can correct me. Plot angle Qin was raised by Chu for three years at first, and was promoted to the vice-president in the following seven years. After that, he met the male protagonist Ye, experienced so many hardships and "true love", and then the Huang possession incident, and then committed suicide. (I will use darkness instead of table in the following text) Is Qin a cousin? It is mentioned in the article that it is 17%. I have mentioned 0 and 100% in my previous post. The bad word is "the watch that can be saved", and the good word is "the heroine who is lost and takes the wrong path" Qin gave us the initial character, a strong female humanoid beautiful CEO. She basically has all the qualities of the heroine, but there is also a dark side buried in it; (Darkness) Chu Yang's lover, (Darkness) William incident, being rejected by Ye after the truth, (Darkness) Uncle Ye coming out as gay, (Darkness) Purple Stranger This type is the dark side; in fact, we also ignored it. The first time we met was at the family meeting of Mrs. Wang, and the road was broken. (Darkness) Qin actually did the same thing, knelt down and apologized, but also gave him a way to survive as his bodyguard; At first reaction, these people are all GG, but as the plot develops, we slowly accept Qin because of the heroine qualities she embodies; Su agreed to Qin being a sister, and Qin agreed. After experiencing the William incident, and later (darkly) Luo becoming the harem, Qin was opposed, and we both understood and did not understand; Reader's perspective Many friends regard Qin as a lover + a person. This kind of setting does not give people a high position. In fact, it is disgraceful in itself. So Qin was just a cheat from the beginning? In fact, there are hints or expressions in the article, but I don't think so. It can be proved 100% that it is; giving me feelings is more for the needs of the plot, to torture for the sake of torture; why? To determine whether Qin is a Biao, that means denying her various heroine qualities in the past (which is equivalent to denying ourselves first). This is a bit difficult. If Biao has the qualities of a heroine, how can she still be Biao? The normal first reaction of readers is that they can't accept it and try to correct it. Later, when they look back, they feel that Qin is the proof of Pyo, and even think that she is hopeless. I think these behaviors are normal. There is no need to excuse Qin, as far as the plot is concerned, she is; but she can be saved; Author's perspective Many people will probably criticize my mother and be disgusting. What kind of brain circuit can a watch save? In fact, my answer is as I said at the beginning, 0 and 100% are relative in the novel. To put it bluntly, they are both false. Since you can travel through time and change, the conclusion is: "The present is the future, and the future is the past." This is equivalent to giving you results. You can continue to repair and fill in the process, and finally it becomes a fact that is beneficial and acceptable to you. You have changed the past, but you don't know that the you now is the arrangement of you in the future. The future has not happened, but the present and even the past you have not yet been involved? That is the past = present = future; (the poisonous pit dug by the readers, the torment of us readers, I even suspect that the author has changed the text, to torture, disgust, or heat...) If you still can't accept it, let me explain it this way. If the current Qin is the high-match king in the past, do you think it will be normal and natural? Good guy, it turns out to be a scheming, hidden so deep. But let me give you another explanation. The current Qin is the Su who will become black in the future. It is estimated that some people will come up directly and become the 3rd Company of Cranky. Su is the only remaining conscience in the whole article, but conscience also has 1%. Combined with my previous 0 and 100%, they are both untrustworthy (the author retaliates against society, why can't he write about it?), There are more or less secrets about Su, and there is a probability of 1%. Is this an explicit or implicit statement, or will it be revealed in the future that he has stepped into the footsteps of Wang and Qin due to time travel. What happened to Qin today, what we readers are experiencing is just a new cycle? I feel that except for the author, none of us can guarantee that this will really happen in the future; but I believe that people are kind. My explanation is that I choose to sacrifice 1% for the male protagonist. Su is a human being, so she is not perfect, so she appears to be rare and valuable, the quality of a true heroine; What I mean by these metaphors and explanations is, can you accept the same thing with a different heroine? Is there a premise, foreshadowing, hint, or explicit statement, so that in the end you will accept it and convince yourself? Is Wang's behavior (bad people doing bad things) normal; Qin's behavior (bad people doing good things or good people doing bad things) is abnormal; Su's behavior (good people doing good things) is normal? Angry P author Being led away by the author, if the author says yes, that's it, it has to be hinted, expressed, and foreshadowed. I'll write it and you can just read it. It feels like whether you want to read it or not. Including the male protagonist Ye in the back, just because he is the male protagonist, he can be accepted and forgiven. It seems that the quality of the male protagonist does not grow up step by step. Because he is the male protagonist, he is the male protagonist, so he should have what he should have, and the scum can be forgiven. Bad qualities such as being rotten, hypocritical, and condescending can all be overshadowed by the halo of the male protagonist. Looking at other characters, if they are bad guys, they deserve what they get, and if they go against the male protagonist, they should be embarrassed; I know the author wants the story to have ups and downs, twists and turns, and more three-dimensional and full characters, but please be merciful in writing, 99 children, 3 think and write well, step by step, if the writing is bad, the readers can accept it, and if it is written for people to read, it will be criticized as normal. Please also believe that there are readers who can resonate and like it. Not everyone is a mindless troll; are you the same type of author who is popular for cruelty, and the king you write and the Qin behind you? I have said so much in the end, and I guess my writing is not very good, but I just want to say a few words, and welcome exchanges. These are my personal opinions, and I am biased and biased. Corrections and exchanges are also welcome. I will open a post to talk about the male protagonist Ye when I have time. This really deserves to be scolded and criticized! #(Cold)

But this plot is a bit sadistic and not suitable for newcomers. As an old bookworm, I feel a little uncomfortable watching it . It's only over 100 chapters now. It's okay to go back in time. How can a young master from a plutocratic family be so naughty? If I had written the male protagonist a little colder from the beginning and not written so much about the ex-wife, I wouldn't have been criticized by so many people. If you have a harem, write more about the opportunities for male protagonists and develop the plot starting from the harem. If it had a single female protagonist, it could be written more around business. If you continue to write about this ex-wife, your book will be GG! In fact, your plot with twists and turns is quite interesting. The male protagonist is very engaging in the early stage. He is handsome and a billionaire, so it is easy to draw readers into the plot. However, you are so licky later on that your head turns green , which can easily disgust readers. So whether your writing is good alone, you have to understand what book friends want. Directly written articles are rated higher than they are now.

We must come together, we must, don't leave the harem, just Qin Hongyan

I originally thought that the toxicity of this book could be tolerated, but I didn't know that the poison is poison within the poison, and the poison is intertwined with each other. It is really extremely poisonous. I will go first, and all book friends, take care...