Interstellar White Rabbit Candy

Let me briefly share my views. I have been a bookworm for ten years and have written fantasy novels myself. I am also very disgusted with the mainstream trend of online writing today, and I can understand the author's inner helplessness. But I have to say that this book has serious problems. I think the author's writing is passable, but the biggest and biggest problem with this book is that the character image of Two Thousand Five was not given in the early golden recommendation time. It was not until dozens of chapters later that the image of Two Thousand Five was given, but she was still a speechless girl. The distinct image of the heroine was not quickly established at all, and it seriously affected the warm interaction with Bai Ze. It's really unjustifiable that you haven't responded to the title of White Rabbit Candy after reading dozens of chapters. This time the author's idea was too random. In fact, the outline could have been changed to a plot of hiding with the girl to avoid being chased. This shows that the author is not yet proficient in skills. In addition, the author's grasp of high-level combat patterns needs to be improved. This problem was very serious in the previous book. It was all based on Rob's unparalleled promotion. The content was enjoyable, but there were no other outstanding supporting characters. What makes me most dissatisfied is the author's description of pets. The bird can obviously become a very important supporting role, but it turns a very good setting into a mouthless attribute. It is as failed as the setting of 2500. My last long critical comment seemed to have been deleted by the comment administrator. I hope it will not be deleted this time because the author himself admitted that there was a problem. Such criticism is helpful to the author. I hope the comment administrator realizes this. Thank you.

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I think the reason why no one has read it is the title of the book . These titles are really easy to skip when looking for a book. When I first watched Genius, I entered with a boring mentality.

There is an anime in Japan called White Rabbit Candy. I watched the anime and it was pretty good. But the comic ends with the father getting married! Can't accept it! The author will reveal it first. If my father gets married, I will leave first.

Life is full of many dissatisfactions. While reading the author's previous story, I also learned about fragments of the author's life. I am a person who reads pirated books, but when I read pirated books, I always give some gifts to the authors of novels I have read in the past. Or subscribe again. Make up some money. I hope the author will stick to it. And have better grades and life! I'm here to pay!

If you like online novels, but feel that many current novels lack depth or even the most basic logical thinking and judgment, then this book will revive your interest and expectations in online novels. First of all, the author's writing style is obvious to everyone. Sometimes a simple outline of the picture can be very powerful, and a few details of the characters' actions can arouse the readers' emotions. Anyway, I fell in love with it. And the highlight is that the author's depth of thought should be that he has read a lot of history books, sociology, psychology, and has a certain degree of thinking, so that he can have some unique insights into life. As for the plot and background, they try their best to conform to the public's aesthetics, but also have their own innovative elements in it. They are much more carefree than the routine templates of many online articles now. Finally, I wish everyone a better life, and I wish the author a smooth career and create better works 🙂 Finally, I look forward to the new book, come on! ! !

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I have watched Big Escort and The Genius Magician, so I am not worried that Derpy will be poorly written. Let me just complain about the title of the book. Unless you have read White Rabbit Candy if you read Xiaodai's books, there is no doubt about the name and it is still confusing. Is Xiaodai really not considering changing his name?

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Needless to say, those who follow the author all the way here just like the books written by the author. Working overtime late at night, pouring a cup of tea and reading a good book will make you feel at ease no matter how hard or tired you are.