In Fact, Qingmei, Who is Cold and Cold, Always Has Evil Intentions Towards Me

I think this book opens high but ends low. The topic selection is very good, but the author's writing style is obviously lacking. The first question, I think the best thing is to set up the characters in the early stage to arouse people's desire to read, give small sweets in the middle, big sweets in the middle and late stages, and have a little routine at the end. However, this book has a big shortcoming, that is, it is sweet after you confess your confession, or even before you confess. After the confession, almost all the plots are very bland, and there is no desire to read it. The second question is about the change of relationship. There is too little foreshadowing about the male protagonist's affection and liking for the female protagonist, which makes the change seem very abrupt. Just looking at the previous parts, to be honest, I can't tell that the male protagonist likes the female protagonist. The third question is about the character of the male protagonist. There is no doubt that this character is very unpleasant. His classmate lost control and scolded him because of his own reasons. He actually wanted to apologize. It's so weird. The fourth question is, tsundere, tsundere, there is arrogance but also tsundere. When I first read it, I thought the author would put the tsundere in the part after the confession, but obviously not. Tsundere is sweet after the word tsundere. After the confession, there should be tsundere, or there should be famous scenes of high attack and low defense. But the heroine you wrote has been trying hard to maintain her aloof persona, which also led to the first problem, which is too little sugar. The fifth question is that there are some things that are too deliberate. The separation for three or four days was like a separation between life and death. I know that the author may want to pave the way for the climax of the confession later, or he may want to write about the feeling that the male protagonist cannot live without the female protagonist and has begun to understand her own heart, but It didn't show up at all, I could only feel exaggerated and outrageous. We were separated for four days, and the heroine had to trick the hero into leaving first, and then the hero was reluctant to leave. It was like he suddenly realized something, just like the feeling in Japanese comics, don't underestimate the bond between us. The sixth question is that some things are not described well enough, or could be better. For example, how did the heroine become aloof? The words in the novel about the heroine, the inner thoughts of the heroine, especially the words in the novel about the heroine, these are all sweets, but you can just mention them in one go. I really want to read them. The seventh question is that the description of appearance and clothes is quite monotonous, and it has been emphasized that the male protagonist is a leg control, so why can't you describe the legs more carefully? Why? This is also a big highlight. Please write more about Yu Zu Yu Legs. (Representing only personal views)

I have seen this anime, it seems to be called Naruto. The content is that Tang San regains his memory and becomes the Hokage, summons the dragon and returns to the Qingqing Grassland. Together with Xiong Daxiong Er, he prevents Pig Man and the royal power and wealth from occupying the Demonic Castle and becomes an armored warrior. After that, he and Ultraman Tiga obtain the scriptures. Thanos got the secret recipe of Krabby Patty, and later defeated the Four Emperors and had the final battle with the Saiyans. After the victory, he and Xiao Yan lived a happy life. He also defeated the Bone King and made Rikka to fight with him. Then he was recognized by Asuna and became Luffy's Golden Saint.

I saw the male protagonist's confession. To be honest, I felt a little confused after reading it. This was not the confession scene I expected or it was a bit annoying. It's not that the plot is bad, nor that the scene is not romantic enough. The male protagonist and female protagonist are also very good, especially the female protagonist. I just feel that the male protagonist is a bit pitiful. He may have liked the female protagonist a long time ago, but discovering and facing this relationship all depends on external forces. The heroine is kind to him and even has some control. The forced push of the heroine's mother and the display of love in the heroine's novel prompted the hero to confess. It feels like the male protagonist is like a fool who is pushed step by step into a confession situation instead of spontaneously discovering his love and actively taking action to confess. If this confession is a war, the male protagonist must be the one who loses miserably. The article is generally good, the plot is reasonable, and the images of each key character are complete. It's just that I simply don't like the heroine's mother's behavior that makes this relationship stylized. It could have been a better memory, because the mother's selfishness became passive and pale. Although the ending is the same, it is painful to watch, just like a piece of delicious food that could have been enjoyed, but was replaced with equivalent nutrients and directly absorbed. The cowardly character of the male protagonist has not changed much. Maybe the author wanted to create a male protagonist like this (gentle and considerate, without temper, easy to control). Fortunately, the author did not write any plot of the second female lead, otherwise the character of the male protagonist would be extremely explosive. The female protagonist likes you so much and doesn't show much of her love. How does the male protagonist know your feelings? I don't blame the heroine's mother for saying that her daughter doesn't live up to expectations. It's okay to be like this even though they obviously like each other. I have read a very similar novel before and I fell in love with Qingmei as a professional novelist, but the plot and style are different. The author's writing style and plot content are very good, but the confession prompted by the heroine's mother made me feel a little uncomfortable. This is all my personal opinion, but the ending is pretty good. I just hope that the male protagonist will be a little smarter and stop being fooled around. I'll wait and see the final outcome before considering whether to add this star.

I really like this style of novels. The heroine has a realistic existence but seems unrealistic. But I really like this kind of heroine. I like this kind of girl who is arrogant but does not hide her love. Alas, I am still sour after all😰

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