Wizard Evolution Notes

A novel with great potential There is no male protagonist, and now we are talking about Lily Nowadays, Western Fantasy has declined, and it is even more difficult to find a good one. The book follows the power system of "The Wizarding World" The interaction between the heroine and the Book of Omniscientness is quite interesting Of course, there is also a lot of reliance on the Book of Omniscient. The author explains that the protagonist has just entered the wizarding world and does not know many people and things. However, the journey of cognitive pain and challenge is itself gripping. In addition, there are some shortcomings of this book. He is probably a new author and has great potential. Readers don't have to read it First, the visual sense is not strong. Some plots should make readers immersed in the scene. Therefore, it is difficult for readers to feel the wizarding world written by the author. Second, the description is single and somewhat weak. Of course, this refers to the character creation, which feels a bit flat. The personalities of important characters should flow with the development of the plot. Third, the setting of the protagonist is not quite appropriate, and his qualifications are S-level (this setting is too old-fashioned. If the author is interested, you can check out the dnd system. Fantasy novels should be based on the medieval world). There is also the Book of Omniscient. You can challenge the official wizards as soon as you enter the wizarding world. So the protagonist seems to be separated from this world, and no one can compete with him Thirdly, looking at the beginning - development - climax - ending, originally the protagonist should have been in danger when trapping the official wizard and the senior apprentice, but the heroine downplayed it and killed the enemy like cooking pigs and mutton ears. Therefore, the plot is monotonous and readers are easily bored. In short, there are the above shortcomings. I hope the author can truly describe the fascinating wizarding world!